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Cowgirl Take Me Away
Montana
She stood relaxed, looking out over the vast expanse of the land, taking in as much as possible. She had been living here most of her life and she had yet to tire of the picturesque landscape – massive mountains with open welcoming arms, countless thick white clouds in a piercing blue sky that seemed to go on forever, rolling green pastures with dark rich soil that she could pick up and break in her hands. And the ever present breeze, sometimes commanding, sometimes coaxing, but always there like an ever loyal friend. This was her father’s ranch, and now it was hers – as far as the eye could see was the land that was under her care. Thankfully her sister Kit and Kit’s husband Angus also live on the land to help.
With the morning chores complete, Bette took a moment to enjoy the early sun and watch it bathe the rolling meadows of the ranch. She allowed her thoughts again to turn to the blonde beauty that was invading her dreams again last night. As much as she tried, she could not place her. She looked like no one she had known before, or even seen in passing. Resigning herself to the mystery, she headed into the house to get some coffee and begin a painting of the anonymous woman.
Once changed out of her boots and jeans and with coffee in hand, Bette headed into her studio on the second floor of the farmhouse. It was a glorious room – taking up one whole side of the second floor with large windows that ran the entire span of the room. It was east facing, so it gobbled up all of the morning sun. It was for this reason that Bette chose the mornings as her favorite time to be in that room. Painting was her passion, but it wasn’t the only passion she delved into with this room. One corner was devoted to her pottery craft. She had a modest potters’ wheel and a small workbench so that she could throw pots and bowls, but also dabble in hand building works of clay. She loved the tactical nature of creating with clay and it catered to her desire to delve into creating in three dimensions.
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(36 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
I like this story so far! I hope to read more. Thanks for posting!
Welcome into the club of writers !!!!For a start, this is a bomb. I am happily going into your wagon and be part of the journey. This is a great story and I can’t wait to read more. PPVS
Yes it does sound “Ghost Whisperish”, which I loved. You’re doing a great job. PPS!!
Duh! I meant Horse Whisperish.
i couldnt help but relate this story to the kristin scott thomas movie, “the horse whisperer”. hmmm…great start. this is going to be good. thanks for taking the time to share and can’t wait to read the follow up.
I enjoyed the movie the Horse Whisper which seems to have been your muse. I do hope that Angie will get better and thrive in her life.
Great start.Please continue.
Excellent! Horse whisperer inspired? It’s going to be very interesting!
Wonderful start and I really like it. It’s a departure from our girls lives that we’ve been used to and that makes it all the better. Please continue very soon. Fantastic. Thanks for posting.
Awesome start and so very different. Please continue. thank you.
Fantastic!! I woke up this morning to dark skies and lots of rain…then logged into fan fic and look what I found!? Thank you for starting my day with a huge smile. This first chapter is not only entertaining, it captures the reader right away and brings us smack dab into the story! I am SO happy you decided to share this with us! Don’t worry about taking your time. The readers on this site are incredibly patient (look how long they wait for me to finish my story, and they don’t complain or call me names! LOL). Thanks again GC….and WELCOME TO FAN FICTION!!! BTW you have been just as supportive of me, so it goes both ways. :-)
Wow! You’re good. The start of your story is so diff and interesting. Looking forward to your next post. I”m hooked. Thanks
Wow! I’m applauding* What a great start. Congrats on the new job and move. Take your time, we’re not going anywhere. Thank you this awesome addition to our awesome library.
Great start a little more detail please. pps
Glaze great start to this story I so love you start. When I was a kid I worked for one summer on a dude ranch in Montana. Your descriptions really work for me. I hope all your travels, moving and new job all work well so you have time to keep this going. Thanks for sharin with all of us.
Amazing Start!!!! Take all the time you need we will be here. Thank you Good luck with your new job.
Great start! I am absolutely hooked! Don’t worry about how long it takes you to post, it takes me a while sometimes lol! PPS! :)
Wow, that start sure caught my attention. pls continue!!!!