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Cowgirl Take Me Away
Chapter 1
Montana
Bette awoke with a start. She had been having the same dream for the past three nights. A blonde woman with hazel eyes, in a simple floral print spring dress, was walking towards her. As she neared, her smile revealed a mixture of love and passion. The sexy blonde approached the tall brunette, smiled, leaned in and whispered, “Bette Porter… do you always get your woman?”
Submitting to the fact that she could not rid herself of this persistent and arousing dream, she told herself that the only way she could find any peace was to paint this blonde apparition. Maybe then, she could find some solace. She would begin the painting tomorrow after her morning chores.
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Connecticut
It was a snowy morning, but Angie loved it… just her, Scout, her best friend Monika, and her palomino Leche, on a morning ride. There was something about a ride in the morning with snow falling that was so special. The silence that snow made was a deafening presence, but overwhelmingly peaceful. They talked and laughed sparingly, but mostly remained silent. In order to stay on the horse trail, they had to cross an old highway. Angie’s mom always warned her about this part in the trail, she never trusted drivers to slow down for people on horseback. But Angie was 14 now, and a very responsible equestrian rider.
Angie and Monika came to the crossing and looked both ways. With the coast clear, they began their crossing of the road. Suddenly, a tractor-trailer came barreling down the highway. It seemed out of control, and the road conditions with the way they were, it didn’t bode well. The trucker slammed on his brakes, but to no avail, the snowy road did nothing for his traction. He laid on his horn, giving warning that he couldn’t slow down because of the road condition. Monika spurred Leche and she leaped forward. The girls and their horses were right next to each other, which proved challenging in this incident. Angie spurred Scout as well, but he yielded to Leche and was unfortunately delayed. The semi caught his hind-end and knocked him sideways. With a blood-curdling scream, Angie was thrown and knocked unconscious.
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(36 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
I like this story so far! I hope to read more. Thanks for posting!
Welcome into the club of writers !!!!For a start, this is a bomb. I am happily going into your wagon and be part of the journey. This is a great story and I can’t wait to read more. PPVS
Yes it does sound “Ghost Whisperish”, which I loved. You’re doing a great job. PPS!!
Duh! I meant Horse Whisperish.
i couldnt help but relate this story to the kristin scott thomas movie, “the horse whisperer”. hmmm…great start. this is going to be good. thanks for taking the time to share and can’t wait to read the follow up.
I enjoyed the movie the Horse Whisper which seems to have been your muse. I do hope that Angie will get better and thrive in her life.
Great start.Please continue.
Excellent! Horse whisperer inspired? It’s going to be very interesting!
Wonderful start and I really like it. It’s a departure from our girls lives that we’ve been used to and that makes it all the better. Please continue very soon. Fantastic. Thanks for posting.
Awesome start and so very different. Please continue. thank you.
Fantastic!! I woke up this morning to dark skies and lots of rain…then logged into fan fic and look what I found!? Thank you for starting my day with a huge smile. This first chapter is not only entertaining, it captures the reader right away and brings us smack dab into the story! I am SO happy you decided to share this with us! Don’t worry about taking your time. The readers on this site are incredibly patient (look how long they wait for me to finish my story, and they don’t complain or call me names! LOL). Thanks again GC….and WELCOME TO FAN FICTION!!! BTW you have been just as supportive of me, so it goes both ways. :-)
Wow! You’re good. The start of your story is so diff and interesting. Looking forward to your next post. I”m hooked. Thanks
Wow! I’m applauding* What a great start. Congrats on the new job and move. Take your time, we’re not going anywhere. Thank you this awesome addition to our awesome library.
Great start a little more detail please. pps
Glaze great start to this story I so love you start. When I was a kid I worked for one summer on a dude ranch in Montana. Your descriptions really work for me. I hope all your travels, moving and new job all work well so you have time to keep this going. Thanks for sharin with all of us.
Amazing Start!!!! Take all the time you need we will be here. Thank you Good luck with your new job.
Great start! I am absolutely hooked! Don’t worry about how long it takes you to post, it takes me a while sometimes lol! PPS! :)
Wow, that start sure caught my attention. pls continue!!!!