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Coming up for air – part twenty nine
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Tina pulled back abruptly as sweat began to appear on her forehead and cheekbones. She willed herself not let Bette steal her show. Bette was staring down at her, clenching her jaw in desperation and anticipation.
“Number fifteen on my list of things I missed about you…. “ Tina panted, trying to hold Bette’s focus, “is the little things…. a look from you across a crowded floor, a phone call letting me know you’re thinking about me, a wink when I’m feeling nervous… a well placed caress…. all the little things you do to make me feel like I’m your number one girl…”
“… you ARE my number one girl….” Bette smiled at Tina.
“Nothing makes me happier than knowing that, baby….. and number sixteen is your grand gestures…”
“Oh, NOW we’re getting to these…” Bette giggled once again grabbing her own breasts.
“… Bette… no… as grand as they are, I wasn’t talking about your boobs, baby… Are they feeling neglected?” Tina asked, as she leant in and sucked Bette’s right nipple into her mouth.
“Mmmmmm….” Bette moaned and threw her head back in ecstasy. She pulled Tina closer, wallowing in the feel of Tina’s lips and tongue nibbling, sucking, and licking all over her chest.
“… grand gestures like the necklace…. lavish dinners… the parties you have thrown me… those grand gestures,” Tina continued in between paying attention to Bette areolas and nipples.
Tina was so very aware, how she had prolonged the inevitable. With an alpha Tina move, she turned over and got back on top of Bette.
“You breasts are number five on my top twenty, baby…. and now I’m going to go for top two…..
Bette lifted her head and looked down at Tina who was snaking down her body.
“… oh, lord….” Bette whimpered as Tina separated her lips.
The talking came to an end, as Tina lapped up Bette’s juices. She sucked Bette’s clit in between her teeth, flicking her tongue back and forth over the smooth surface. Bette’s entire body jerked when Tina entered her with two fingers, still holding her clit captive between her lips.
“…. ffffffuuuuckkkk…..” Bette moaned. Her hands found the back of Tina’s head as she thrusted against Tina face.
A third finger was added, almost pushing Bette over the top.
Bette was throwing her head from side to side as her moaning increased in volume. “…more…. baby… give me more…..”
Tina stopped what she was doing and looked up at Bette going crazy.
“….don’t stop, T…..”
With her thumb Tina pressed down on Bette’s clit, as she reentered her with four fingers. Bette drew in a loud breath as her world exploded. Tina resumed her movements until Bette, with a spent expression, begged her to stop.
Covered in sweat Tina crawled up Bette’s slippery body, lying down with her ear to her chest and her leg in between Bette’s.
Bette gathered Tina in her arms as they both waited for their hearts to calm down.
“I lost count somewhere around number three and four…. did we make it through all the points on your list?” Bette whispered and kissed Tina hairline.
“… no, we didn’t – I told you, you wouldn’t last….” Tina said with a little laugh.
“Give me ten minutes… and I’ll be good to go again….” Bette chuckled.
“Maybe I should add insatiable to my list…”
“After tonight I know you will….”
TBC
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jp22 said it perfectly about you having “a gift for bringing the heat and then combining it with real emotions”. I would just like to say to you my friend that not only did you give me my double fix, but with this chapter I overdosed. LOL! anker, I just love your writing talent and will never get enough of it. You paint a picture of love with words that is just so beautiful. Saying Thank You doesn’t even seem adequate.
Oh Anker…That was awesome and the top 20 isn’t even over yet! I knew Bette couldn’t hold out. I don’t think many of us would of!!!Favorite line…”OH LORD” FLMAO. Thanks for making it funny and sensual.You are just sooooooo talented. Sorry Anker, but you f*cken rock……xoxo
That was totally Hot
i agree with azmama….what a hell of a fun way to count to 20…..mmmm….i love this fic….gosh, i wish i were the one doin the count down with Bette…..lol……dont we all though??? guess i should just stand in line eh???….post again soon…..this was amazingly erotic……i loved it…..best yet!!! 50 stars from me!!!***
I can’t imagine what numbers 10, 11, 13, 17, 18 and 20 could be (it was a elight to keep track).
I am so with azmama on this. Who knew that counting to 20 could be so much fur. OMG THAT WAS HOT!!! Thanks anker
Absolutely beautiful and hot, it left me sweating as well! Please continue!
fucking A that was hot!!
i think i got lost after number 8 or something, got lost in hotness that is ;)
Nice count down, or count around. I don’t think Bette was to worried if Tina messed up with the counting.
Awesome list. The way that Bette says Tina then smiles and then adds that wink sends chills that run up and down my spine. God I think just being in the same room would be on least on my list somewhere.
Uh…. top twenty? I know you said we missef some. Maybe you should start at twenty and count down again???? What a soulful, intimate chpater! Hope you had fun on your night out and it ended as well as this post. Thanks for writing!
Oh….so worth the wait!!! LOL! You definately did not disappoint. I loved how Tina gave Bette the list out of order. Very HOT! But then you know that. Don’t you, Anker? **wink, wink** You have a wickedly, sexy imagination and then to take that and put it into these chapters is just….WOW! Okay, enough with the compliments**are you blushing,yet?**Bring on the rest of the LIST! I’m as “insatiable” as Bette when it comes to this story. Post soon.
Wow!! And she didn’t even get through all of the points! I knew Bette was a sucker for Tina. Loved the chapter!
Great chapter, Anker..you make me feel very happy.
*THUD… looking up from my spot on the floor* Um, I seem unable to form any words of my own right now… so, what jp22 said… GREAT post. ;)
I love they’re top 20. Good thing they don’t go higher cos I don’t know if I could take it.
“…. but I’ll try to refrain from making too many repetitions…” So does this mean that I can get a top 30 with both B&T together….ok ok (getting, well trying to get my mind out of the gutter I can dream can I:)). Thx Anker
I love these Top Numbered Lists! I hope Tina will get a chance to finish her Top 20.
Wow this is fun and hot!
fun…fun…fun…way 2 go Tina…and bette loved it…great writing anker…thanks you just made my otherwise boring day!!!!
Fuck you just melted my laptop!!! That was beyond hot and sexy, no words seems amazing and wonderful enough to describe this post and your writing in generel….WOW!!! Great they talked in the last post, I love a vulnerable Bette. And these lists, you’re killing me, but what a nice way to go LOL. BTW I’m waiting for that email you know LOL, just kidding :o)) Post soon, I can’t wait…
Nice read on a Monday morning. Thanks for starting my day with a “Bang”
That was f*cking hot! I think Tina cheated a little. I mean who could last when someone is doing the things she was doing? Loved the update, Thanks. PPS.
The world as we know it is perfect – at least when Tina is “TOPS” and the alpha is back in Bette! Whew… nice…
I knew she could top Bette… Great gads, that top 20, that Tina didn’t even finish, was so… Torrid? Scorching? Sultry? Nuclear? Solar? You know what I’m getting at, anker. You’ve got a gift for bringing the heat, and then combining it with real emotion. I loved the chapter, thanks for posting it so soon after the last one. Cheers, anker
What a fun way to count to 20.
caught up and that was just perfect…thanks!