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Coming up for air – part twenty nine
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“Will you turn around for me please? I need number three and four on my list….” Tina said as she licked up Bette’s neck.
Bette knew she was way to close to peaking, so she decided to turn the tables on Tina for a little while. With a swift move, she flipped Tina over. Bette straddled her lap and pinned her wrists to the bed above her head.
“…. oh, no, no, no…. you are not going to make me come, while you’re still dressed…” Bette panted, looking down at Tina’s surprised face. Bette’s nostrils were flaring, her curls flowing down her shoulder, her eyes darkened in arousal, her cheeks rosy from the blood coursing rapidly through her veins. Tina had never seen her looking as sexy before.
“Could this be number eight on my list? You just pulled an alpha Bette move on me, honey – you know how that turns me on…” Tina smiled mischievously.
“Well, number eight is going to get you naked….” Bette grinned. “Now you better not move…” Bette continued in a warning tone of voice.
“…would I ever…?” Tina smiled playfully.
Bette didn’t stop until Tina was lying completely naked on the bed, her pale skin glowing slightly in moonlit room. Bette resumed her previous position on top of Tina.
“You said something about needing number three and four on your list… would that be these two?” Bette giggled as she cupped her own breasts, pinching the nipples as she looked down at Tina with a daring look.
Tina chuckled, “as much as I love my girls… most days they are at the very top of my list…” Tina sat up and slipped her hands under Bette’s, getting a firm grip on her breasts, “today number three is your kisses… and number four is your incredible…. rich…. soulful… expressive… eyes…. so baby, look at me, like you’re doing right now and then kiss me…. like only you know how…”
Bette’s hands went from Tina’s hands to the back of her head as she pulled her into a scorching kiss. Tina moaned as Bette’s kissed made her want to relinquish all control and let Bette take over. She rubbed Bette’s breasts with the palm of her hands, feeling how her nipples grew even more taut under her touch.
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jp22 said it perfectly about you having “a gift for bringing the heat and then combining it with real emotions”. I would just like to say to you my friend that not only did you give me my double fix, but with this chapter I overdosed. LOL! anker, I just love your writing talent and will never get enough of it. You paint a picture of love with words that is just so beautiful. Saying Thank You doesn’t even seem adequate.
Oh Anker…That was awesome and the top 20 isn’t even over yet! I knew Bette couldn’t hold out. I don’t think many of us would of!!!Favorite line…”OH LORD” FLMAO. Thanks for making it funny and sensual.You are just sooooooo talented. Sorry Anker, but you f*cken rock……xoxo
That was totally Hot
i agree with azmama….what a hell of a fun way to count to 20…..mmmm….i love this fic….gosh, i wish i were the one doin the count down with Bette…..lol……dont we all though??? guess i should just stand in line eh???….post again soon…..this was amazingly erotic……i loved it…..best yet!!! 50 stars from me!!!***
I can’t imagine what numbers 10, 11, 13, 17, 18 and 20 could be (it was a elight to keep track).
I am so with azmama on this. Who knew that counting to 20 could be so much fur. OMG THAT WAS HOT!!! Thanks anker
Absolutely beautiful and hot, it left me sweating as well! Please continue!
fucking A that was hot!!
i think i got lost after number 8 or something, got lost in hotness that is ;)
Nice count down, or count around. I don’t think Bette was to worried if Tina messed up with the counting.
Awesome list. The way that Bette says Tina then smiles and then adds that wink sends chills that run up and down my spine. God I think just being in the same room would be on least on my list somewhere.
Uh…. top twenty? I know you said we missef some. Maybe you should start at twenty and count down again???? What a soulful, intimate chpater! Hope you had fun on your night out and it ended as well as this post. Thanks for writing!
Oh….so worth the wait!!! LOL! You definately did not disappoint. I loved how Tina gave Bette the list out of order. Very HOT! But then you know that. Don’t you, Anker? **wink, wink** You have a wickedly, sexy imagination and then to take that and put it into these chapters is just….WOW! Okay, enough with the compliments**are you blushing,yet?**Bring on the rest of the LIST! I’m as “insatiable” as Bette when it comes to this story. Post soon.
Wow!! And she didn’t even get through all of the points! I knew Bette was a sucker for Tina. Loved the chapter!
Great chapter, Anker..you make me feel very happy.
*THUD… looking up from my spot on the floor* Um, I seem unable to form any words of my own right now… so, what jp22 said… GREAT post. ;)
I love they’re top 20. Good thing they don’t go higher cos I don’t know if I could take it.
“…. but I’ll try to refrain from making too many repetitions…” So does this mean that I can get a top 30 with both B&T together….ok ok (getting, well trying to get my mind out of the gutter I can dream can I:)). Thx Anker
I love these Top Numbered Lists! I hope Tina will get a chance to finish her Top 20.
Wow this is fun and hot!
fun…fun…fun…way 2 go Tina…and bette loved it…great writing anker…thanks you just made my otherwise boring day!!!!
Fuck you just melted my laptop!!! That was beyond hot and sexy, no words seems amazing and wonderful enough to describe this post and your writing in generel….WOW!!! Great they talked in the last post, I love a vulnerable Bette. And these lists, you’re killing me, but what a nice way to go LOL. BTW I’m waiting for that email you know LOL, just kidding :o)) Post soon, I can’t wait…
Nice read on a Monday morning. Thanks for starting my day with a “Bang”
That was f*cking hot! I think Tina cheated a little. I mean who could last when someone is doing the things she was doing? Loved the update, Thanks. PPS.
The world as we know it is perfect – at least when Tina is “TOPS” and the alpha is back in Bette! Whew… nice…
I knew she could top Bette… Great gads, that top 20, that Tina didn’t even finish, was so… Torrid? Scorching? Sultry? Nuclear? Solar? You know what I’m getting at, anker. You’ve got a gift for bringing the heat, and then combining it with real emotion. I loved the chapter, thanks for posting it so soon after the last one. Cheers, anker
What a fun way to count to 20.
caught up and that was just perfect…thanks!