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Coming up for air – part thirty six
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They had been shown to their suite at the lavish Ojai Valley Spa. It was a spacious suite with a gigantic bed and a fireplace. It had a big balcony with a view of the hills and mountains.
“Come out here, T…” Bette said from the balcony.
“There’s a Jacuzzi out here…” Tina shouted from the bathroom.
Tina stopped inside the room and looked out at Bette. She was standing with her back to Tina, leaning against the rail. Her face was turned against the sun, a peaceful smile playing at her lips. Tina had the perfect view of her jeans-clad ass from where she was standing.
“You should come out here and enjoy the view with me, T…” Bette said. Even though her eyes were closed, she knew Tina was close by.
“I have the best view from right here, baby…” Tina said.
Bette turned her face and looked at Tina. Bette couldn’t help laughing when she saw where Tina’s gaze was fixed.
“Aww, baby…. thanks… but if all you wanted was a view of my behind, we could have stayed at home… come on out here… it’s incredible…” Bette smiled and held out her hand to Tina.
Tina went to stand in front of Bette, who gathered her in her arms. Tina leant back against Bette. Nothing needed to be said, as they both let out a breath. They watched as the sun set, turning the sky into a million shades of pinks and purples.
“I’m hungry…” Bette suddenly exclaimed.
“Well, you timing is perfect, cause we’re having dinner here in thirty minutes…”
“In thirty minutes, huh? What ever should we do until then….?” Bette asked, tongue in cheek.
“…we could give that Jacuzzi a try…”
“I think we should…”
“So what have you planned for us this weekend…” Bette asked when they’d gotten comfortable in the Jacuzzi.
“I haven’t planned anything… I thought we would find out what we wanna do once we got here… but there are tons of possibilities. I know I’d like to do the full spa treatment, mud bath… massage… facial… the works… They have a great gym here… and we should go for a hike or mountain biking… or we could go to the beach – it’s only fifteen miles from here. What are you up for?” Tina said as she scooted over and cuddled up between Bette’s legs.
“Hmmm…. as long as you’re not making me go golfing with you, I’m game….”
“Oh, you don’t want to go for a game of golf with me…? How very un-lesbian of you…” Tina giggled.
“I have my straight moments, T…. but I do, however, wanna make time to do other very lesbian activities with you…”
“Really? And what would those very….. lesbian… activities… be….?” Tina asked, running her hands up and down Bette’s thighs under the water.
“Mmmm, I would show you right now if we didn’t have to get up in ten minutes…” Bette purred as she tickled Tina on her stomach and ribs.
“Just promise me you’ll show me later… cause I’m getting wet for you, baby…”
“…. yes, you are…” Bette whispered close to Tina ear as she slipped her fingertips through her slick folds.
Tina turned her head and caught Bette in a slow deep kiss, their tongues swirling and the heat rising.
Only a few minutes later they were interrupted by a knock on the door. Dinner was ready.
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I get sooo happy when I see you have posted Love this story PPS
anker….this story is wonderful. I love their dialogue…how they speak to each other. I love their openness. Tina not allowing Bette to push her around and make her subservient. Both clearly expressing their needs. And, of course, their sexiness. It is actually a relationship befitting two grown-ass women. This chapter was perfect. PPS.
Yippee, Bette just ask Tina to marry her and she said yes! I loved this chapter! And honestly, I do like it when Bette gets impaitent, it is so hot!!
It started out with such a sedate pace, what with the Ojai Valley resort and jacuzzis, and I’m thinking, “Sweet! More Hot Alpha Tina! No? Okay…” Then it moved on to a rather serious, grown-up chat with Jeremy about children and houses and things. I can dig that. Jer was right, Bette needs to talk about things and not brood. Then Bette got home, and it was like, Team Drama mounted a serious attack all of a sudden. Cross field pass: Bette is on the offensive, not wanting to make demands, but making them anyway. On to the left wing, past one defender, then two: Bette wants them to live together. Team Sensibility lunges for a tackle: Tina tries to get a word in edgewise. Team Drama skips past another defender, and launches a left-footed volley… Bette wants to be Tina’s wife again. SAVED by Tina, who wants to finally get her say. Parried out, Team Drama picks it up, knocks a pass back, all the while moaning to the officials about handball. Penalty? No… Team Sensibility carelessly gives the ball away with a dreadful backpass: Tina gives the floor over to Bette to let her have her opinion… Team Drama is heading on goal with a full head of steam, dribbles past one, two, oooh, what’s this then? A nutmeg? Bette stops for the shot: Will Tina marry her? Everything stops, the defense is caught ball-watching and Team Sensibility’s goalie drops her hands: Tina says yes. GOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAL!! Tina said yes!! And here I thought my Sunday was going to be ruined by that wretchedly dull game I watched earlier. RESULT! Right, I’m done being a goof. That chapter was like, totally and completely excellent, anker. Never saw it coming, but hot damn, it was *ace*. (Wait, that wasn’t for April Fool’s was it? I’m not the poisson d’avril am I? Eh… who cares if I am?) *bouncing* Thanks, anker!
Awww, what a sweet chapter. That’s right Bette, ask and you shall get… :) Thanks for a wonderful chapter, anker!
Great chapter anker. I can understand Bette’s impatience OMG can I, but good things come to those who wait. You wrote Bette perfectly because I can just see her saying all that to Tina almost in one breath. When you voice things you are most afraid of happening you find out that it isn’t as bad as you thought. It is never good to hold things in and I am glad to see Bette let them out to her T. Oh and yes my friend if you don’t post another chapter by Wednesday I better not see one for the next two weeks because I believe you will have someone with you to occupy most of your time. Thanks as always!
that answer deserves a kiss….but the ?? is where??? rmao. so where is the ring B. took me for a loop there with how u brought this up. sitting here wonderin if u’ve posted another chapter yet on this beautiful Sunday evening.
wow!! This ending really made me happy! I was sat here smiling at the screen….looking like a complete loon to my housemate!!!Please post soon!
sweettttttttttttttt the ABS is so proud, longer
Before I forget, Anker, let me mention I was probably too nyquiled out to mention how well written I thought the previous chapter was. You had me totally primed for a luxuriant trip up the gorgeous CA coast. Then the next thing I know, Bette is in her office! Okay, it’s good to keep the readers on their toes! I know I will probably be in the minority, but I’m in favor of looong engagements. However, I would like to see Tina find her way back to her garden, back to the home she shared with Bette. As always, a pleasure to read your posts. Thanks for writing!
First, OF COURSE I’m sulking! And as for the sharing… it was never my strongest suit. Then again, neither was optimism… some things never change. ;) Ok, I’m starting to sound like a terrible person, so I think I better just move onto commenting on the post! :) B&T sharing the same brain wavelength is always so f-ing cute. Thank god I’m not the only lesbian who hates golf! YAY! LOL The ending was… so amazing. I read it at least three times. *Sigh* Just wonderful, anker… perfect.
Did anything actually change? Tina’s still hasn’t actually committed to do anything except see Bette exclusively. She isn’t moving in or starting to look for their place. To me it is a conditional “Yes” without the conditions being spelled out.
This chapter was really sweet…and Bette going right to the proposal… Just one thing, I don’t know if that’s what you’re planning on doing but there are some clues as to B&T having a baby with Jeremy and Charlie or something like that. I might get ahead of myself but I just wanted to say, if that’s what you want to write, I think it wouldn’t work. Bette is too much of a control freak to have to make decisions with more than just Tina. And I don’t know why but the idea seems wrong to me too. I guess I’ll see where you decide to take us, I’ll be there, I really love this story!!
Another great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Alpha Tina…..ROCKS! I love that Tina took charge of planning the weekend, insisted on driving HER car….totally hot. Bette needs Jeremy to confide in. He totally “gets” her and we all need a friend that will listen and will be honest with their opinions.(even if it’s not always what we want to hear, right?) On a completely different note…are you a golfer? You mentioned Bette now wanting to golf with Tina and I started to laugh. I have tried so many time to get into this sport and have failed…miserably. I took lessons, bought the clubs, went to the driving range and NADA! Just can’t wrap my head around the damn game….FRUSTRATING! LOL! **okay my rant is over*** Tina saying “yes” to Bette’s marriage proposal was AWESOME! Now that TIna said “yes” to marriage, can moving in be too far behind? Hmmm…..it remains to be seen or should I say, it remains to be written ? LOL! Ciao.
Yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!
WOW!!!! That was just so magical and loving!!!!!! Thank you PPS
It’s great to have those grand gesters when it comes to asking someone to marry you but when it is spontaneous and comes from the heart as in the manner that Bette just asked Tina it makes it all worth while. Bette laid out her fears and Tina comforted her and then Bette really said what was in her heart. Both are scared of hurting or getting hurt by the other but love can make it work if they allow the other into their heart.
That was awesome and happy for them!
OMG….didn’t see that one coming LOL, great stuff mate. A little disappointed you skipped almost their whole weekend away, could’ve been fun to read wink :o))….but I know you want to get on with the story and the plans you have made, so it’s alright LOL. Think I lived up to my name…you know ‘the fastest slowpoke’ cos I was reader #838 this morning LOL, but you know I wasn’t home last night, so I read first thing this morning, good enough?? :o)) LOL. Didn’t like this post……….I loved it!!! Can’t all be fuzzy wuzzy, they need to talk serious once in a while too – Bette was so cute, who can say no to her????? I couldn’t!!! Glad Tina couldn’t either, but I think the long engagement is a good idea…..NOW give us that kiss, boy I can’t wait for Wednesday (and I know you can’t either for different reasons LOL) xx
Tina and Bette together – PERFECTLY MARVELOUS!!!Golf and anything even remotely associated with it, NOT MARVELOUS!!!
Hia back at ya….ok you are just a tad cruel…..Ah in the hotel room, then the door bell and the next thing we know, Bette is at her job!!!!Tease! hah you are a flirt and a tease. lmao!!!Anyways Anker awesome chappy.No more holding out…YOU are over due. OH and you better post before Wed or else!!!! PLEASE..You know I luv ya!
so sweet! i love it! i think is time for Tina to start thinking in a home for both of them
well u know how it is gyrl, simply wrapped up in your b and t; more more more