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Brief Encounter Chapter 33
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Tina: No, we can’t do this Bette.
Bette: Why not? I thought you wanted this? I mean when I kissed you, you kissed me back! Doesn’t that count for something? Doesn’t it feel right?
It felt more than right!
Tina: Yes. I mean no, it’s not right. I’ve been here Bette. How could you? I’ve been here before. Did you forget?
Bette: Tina please, of course I never forget. How could I forget? It was the worst day of my life to see you hurt. And I was so stupid…
I must have hurt her deeper than I thought. I couldn’t believe it. Even after those years, she still sees me as this person who keeps on hurting her. I never wanted it to happen I never wanted to hurt her but it happened. And I was so stupid I wish I could turn back time but it just isn’t possible. If I could make it happen I would, whatever it takes.
And I thought she had forgiven me for what I had done. I thought it was why we’re friends now. I thought it was why she’d agreed to fly to New York this time and the fact that she wanted to see me here in LA and talk, I thought we were ok. But I guess I was wrong.
Tina: Yes that is right Bette. And you’re going to see the same thing happening again if you’re not too careful.
At that moment I could see Tina’s pain through her eyes. I didn’t know what to do. All I wanted to do was hold her so she could feel safe. She used to say she felt safe in my arms.
Bette: Tina please…
I moved closer in an attempt to hold her but she refused and pulled back.
Tina: No Bette. I can’t do this. I’m not thinking straight. And you obviously aren’t thinking at all!
Bette: But Tina, we were doing so good. Don’t do this. Don’t do this. If this was too fast, I can slow down. We have to work it out. We have to.
Tina: Yes we do. But before we can do that, you have to know what you want. It seems to me that you want everything… all of it at the same time. I’m going to take Alice home. Call me when you find out what it really is that you’re looking for…
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YAY! Another chappy so soon. I love it. I am happy that Tina is on her way to see Bette. I hope that they can have a real honest discussion with one another. Put the walls down, let them speak from the heart. I hope Bette can find the forgiveness she seeks. I think that Tina is the type of woman to offer that, and help restore a healthy relationship between them. WOO HOO! Thanks Thumbs.
Thumbs this is good but these cliffhangers are killing me here.Bette needs to make this right and tell Tina about the situation with Mel.PPS.
They both needs to be locked in a room together and not let out until the solve their problem. Time out would be good for the Time out from the whole gang. thanks for posting
Well, thsnk god she is coming. It would be terrific if you could get these two together, privately without the gang, but at a restaurant where they would get a chance to talk. Boy, do they need to really do that!!! I’m off today, so your post was a very nice treat…thanks!!!
I so just caught up with your story. I am really liking it. I just B&T find the time to sit down and really talk to each other. Thanks PPS
yes, thank God Tina is coming to NY…can’t wait for their talk…will they even mention Mel to make all things clear? i hope we won’t get too much drama
Yayyy Tina is coming and can’t wait to see they talk and work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
I think I will die if they have one more misconception about Mel! How can Bette be so clueless! PPS
Oh thank you so much for posting. It’s a lovely chapter, if only too short. Yup, way too short… but I’ll take whatever comes my way. Can’t wait for the next one. No pressure… (I’m kidding, post soon ok!)