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Brief Encounter Chapter 23
Tina: Umm… these guys are taking me home
I looked at Bette who still had Mel’s arm around her. Does that mean I’d be going home with them in the car? Why didn’t she tell me she’s with someone? What is the deal here?
Tina: It’s ok guys I’ll go with
I shot her a look.
Shane: Ok let me just pay for the parking ticket.
Tina: It was nice seeing you Bette, Melanie.
Mel: You too Tina.
Bette: Likewise Tina.
I smiled and left.
As I walked toward
Tina: Yeah I’m good. I didn’t think you’d pick me up from the airport
Tina: I’m not bothered really. Wherever you want
Tina: No I don’t really. It’s fine with mereally.
The food came and they looked delicious. But I wasn’t in the mood to eat. I mean who would be when dreams they had for years vanish in front of their eyes in a split second? Ok Tina, you knew beforehand Bette has a girlfriend now. You knew that even before you came here she has a girlfriend. But still you chase her? But I love her. I STILL love her! What am I going to do? *****. What did you expect? See her and she’d fall for you all over again? Is that how it played in your head? Get a grip on reality Tina. I sighed. I knew she had Mel, I shouldn’t have thought about it that way. But does she love her really? Really, really love her?
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wb thumbs babe..ok im not happy yet..do something and quickly..blow of Mel and make B&T talk thye meant to be and need some time alone to rediscover this..please dont take soooo long to post i missed you :o)
Life does get in the way of things you like to do. Missed you. Let have more and more. get Tina and Bette togrther…thanks
I am so happy your last chapter was just your usual tease! Glad to see you coming back. Post again soon, please!
THUMBS, YOUR VERY VERY BAD..hehehehhe…I LOVE HOW TINA GETS ALL CHOCKED UP WHEN SHE IS WITH BETTE….PLEASE PLEASE DON’T STAY AWAY TO LONG THIS TIME…PLEASE PLEASE ..
i know im late to the game and all. but i have read it from the beginning. so my comment is, how was this gonna make me feel better. yes tina gets all emotional around bette. but no talk and is mel still hanging around. they need some time alone and time to connect. so i hope youve got something more in there quick girl. you write wonderfully well for it not being your mother tongue. understand everything your saying, lmao. ;). post soon please. thanks.
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute, and please let them have a talk alone and tell each other about their feeling, and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
I love that Tina loses all mental ability at the sight of Bette. And, yes, I am all too familiar with the temptation to tease readers. LOL
I hope the next chapter comes faster than the wait for this one. Great chapter.
Not long at all! More, more…..where’s Mel….and what’s Lara cooking up? Something for our girls????
All is forgiven….(what were you sorry for?)
Thanks for continuing…I was losing hope you’re posting again.
I’m happy I checked before bedtime. “night-night”.
Welcome back Thumbs…what took you soo long..we have missed you and your story…glad to see you postet again.
You´re forgiven for not replying my email…I know you are way to busy girl. Just as you know I got a new job and I´m starting the 1th of sep so no more free time for me…Post soon Thumbs we want more of your story here.
Ok you big dyke wannabe that was a great chapter.And what do u mean im being nicer to u in chat ? Im always nice to u…lmao. Hurry up and post soon don’t leave us hangin too long or i really will have to stop being nice.. lol.
I’m sorry but I’m stunned about something $5.20 for coffee???? One cup or a few????? lol, damn…
Hey T!!!!! good cahpter. love the way tina gets all chocked up just hearing and seeing bette. they will find their way back to each other. see u in chat
great update!!!! your right Things are better when they don’t go smooothly I don’t mean that lol post soon
I agree post soon please!!!!! but have them talk and confess everything
What took you so long,
What took you all night,
What took you forever to see i’m right
WooHoo, look who’s back.. I love you i love you i love you, mwah mwah mwah.. LOL..
see it wasn’t too hard to write another awesome chapter, and i’m sure it won’t be hard to write more.. =P
Hey Thumbs, you are such a tease!!!!LOL…nice that you have come back to tease us again with your cliffhangers….now this is going to be interesting.
Thanks for the update T you have been forgiven.
they juz are meant for each other. but dun mind the slow process…is nice to see how they go back to each other.. great job,thumbs! love.it!post soon!!!
T!! you big horn dog lmao
ok i’m now on strike I said I wanted a 3 some!! WTF i didn’t see any action. LMAO just kidding, but you do have to let us know where all the missing peeps are. and tina would look good with some coffe down the front then bette could get some napkins and help her wipe it off, or take her to kits office wear they could replace her shirt. ok now don’t take a month to write a update or i will hunt you down.
*Gives Thumbs a huge hug* – Thanks for continuing with this story :) Now, get rid of Mel and let our girls get back together.