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Brief Encounter Chapter 20
Back in LA
Kit: So baby sis, seems that youre going to be staying here for quite a while…
Bette: No Im not staying here long Kit… as soon as Im done with this Im going straight back to New York.
Kit: I know what you mean but listen; since youre here we might as well do something. I mean you never come visit us no more Just stay a few days ok?
Bette: I dont know Kit. I really need to get back as soon as I can I have a show to run
Kit: Hey I hear ya! I just missed you is all. Im gonna go and get ya food
I know I was a bit harsh and selfish but I just cant stay here; too many painful memories here. I just smiled at Kit.
I looked at my watch. I still have an hour before I have to meet with Miss Valentine. I looked up and saw Alice walked in the Planet. She looks pretty busy, like something VERY important is at hand. And after a few seconds Shane walked in. Shane, Shane, Shane who wouldve thought Alice turned around to see Shane walking towards her and she quickly turned back around covering her mouth as she speaks into the phone. Hmm what the ***** was that? I looked again trying to see what was going on. As Shane reached Alice and placed her hand on Alices shoulder, Alice nearly jumped and put her cell in her bag.
I couldnt hear what they were talking about but I saw the concern and disappointment in Shanes eyes. What is going on here? I know I havent been here for a long time but
Kit: Here you are baby sis. Enjoy your food
Bette: Hey Kit, what is going on over there?
I pointed at Shane and Alice. Kit looked over.
Kit: I dont know baby sis. But it looks like
Bette: Alice is in trouble again I mean just look at Shane
Kit: Yup well you know Alice. Shes probably trying to do good but ended up at the wrong end of the stick eh?
Bette: Yeah I guess youre right. This looks lovely Kit. Thanks.
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(58 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Like everyone else, I’m dying here. Love the story, so please post soon. And, please, please, let B/T finally hook up. PLEASE!!!
Is it just me or does anyone else think it’s Mel on the other end of the line?
It’s gotta be Tina, if it’s not i’m going to hang my self and blame u for my death.. =P
definitely gotta be Tina! post soon…!!!
Oooh damn the familiar voice calling out her mane, please let it’s be Tina I hope. Please post soon, thanks!
Come on Thumbs, the wait is killing me, please update soon!
Thanks Neg8740 for posting Thumbs story. I know she is having trouble with her computer. What an amazing update and yes it is Tina calling from NY is it not. I sure hope so. Post soon Thumbs – hope your troubles are over soon
Aaaargh! Glad to have an installment, as always. Still….cliffhanger…arrrggghhh.
‘…a familiar voice…’ Oooh my! Don’t leave us hanging!
I hope it’s TINA Hey Neq thank you for writing this I’m been waiting for this story I love it Hey Thums where are you well I just wait for the next chapter I guess post soon Please.
About the call..”did love find the way??” ;) Post soon!.
yep hellena flew bette to la cause tina was coming to new york. Thank you posted for T, N I have been waiting for ever for this update.
please post soon… this is killing me… and i hope its tina… mybe its that girl telling bette tina was looking for her and is now on her way back to LA… love this story
I’ve missed a few of these and went back and read them… Such an incredible story, I love it! I hope Tina get’s to her girl soon! Thanks, Thumbs, your writing is lovley…I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Man Alive, I am chomping at the bit waiting for them to meet !!!! Ooooo I cant take it, please post real soon, love the story, u have me hooked, its great writing !
Wow I thought I was the queen of drama. You win. THat was so great and thanks to Neq8740 for posting this gem for you. I love your story and look for it every time I log on. Can’t wait for the next.
Thanks for the update Neq…
Thumbs thank you for writing the update that was brilliant.
WHO is on the phone????
It’s all worth it waiting so long for your update, can’t wait for the next post…. don’t keep us hanging…!
Very cool…..keep up the great writing….I like Shanes feeling hesitant in bringing Mel up to to Bette…
Shane: Oh ok…. So uh… Bette. Can I ask you something?
Bette: You can ask me anything Shane
Shane: Ok well are you like, I mean you and Mel? Are you
LOL…too funny….
Your such a friggin tease Thumbs, you sure your ST8? lol. Thanx great update.
LET IT BE TINA…DON’T KEEP US HANGING TO LONG…PLEASE………LOVE THE CHAPTER GOOD JOB…
Thanks for posting. I was missing this story so much! I hope Thumbs gets her computer working soon…..
I hope Love finds their way back to each other.
Helena is mean! But at least she, again, didn’t bring up Candance…..yey…
OMFG, Thumbs. Don’t know how much more my heart can take! Please update soon.
My Sweet Tee, you are getting so good at being a tease. Hee Hee. I loved your chapter. I really like the love the friends still share even with Bette not there as much. You can weave a tale like no other. I am so proud of you and oh, thanks for the mention in author’s notes. I owe you so much. Thank you for all your support and love. I would not be happy if not for you. Please post again soon. I love it!