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Breathe Me * Chapter 20
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Tina wanted to remember everything – the way Bette’s hair moved as she walked toward her, the feel of Bette’s hands on her hips.
Tina looked up into the brunette’s eyes and smiled,
"You are so beautiful, Bette. I can hardly stand it."
Bette smiled and lifted her hand to run it through Tina’s hair, tugging at the ends. Bette opened her mouth to speak, but nothing came. She struggled to find her voice because the way Tina was looking at her was simply intoxicating,
"I want to kiss you." Bette managed in a barely audible whisper.
"Please," Tina sighed, "Please."
Bette closed her eyes and leaned forward. Tina knew she should close her eyes and lose herself in the kiss she had spent the last few days dreaming about, but it was as though she was watching a movie. It was beautiful and poignant and heart-wrenchingly clear to her now that what she felt for the brunette was stronger and more ridiculously romantic than she could have ever imagined. Tina reached up and held Bette’s face in the palm of her hand. For a moment, Bette’s eyes fluttered open, only to see Tina’s flutter closed as she leaned into the kiss.
When their lips met, the pair let out a sigh, so laced with emotion, that the watering of their respective eyes was at once unintentional and poetic. Bette adjusted her stance, so that she could lean in further. She opened her mouth, slowly at first, using her lips to gently open the blondes. Tina needed no urging. She opened herself to Bette willingly, snaking her tongue inside. A low moan escaped from the back of Bette’s throat as Tina hungrily explored her mouth.
"God, you taste so fucking good," Tina moaned.
Bette pulled back, not wanting to release the blonde, but finding it necessary to take a moment to collect her self. Her breathe was ragged and forced and Tina was just as thrown.
"Wow." Tina giggled in spite of herself. She gazed into Bette’s eyes and watched as Bette’s deep brown orbs enveloped her.
Bette leaned back against the counter and ran her hand through her long hair. There was no hope of calming herself. Watching Tina undress her with her eyes was not going to help slow her rapidly beating heart,
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wow…this was so hot. oh the buildup was awesome and did not disappoint. more please.
So very beautiful. I am so hooked. Thanks for the frequent updates.
oh yes….that was hot and beautiful at the same time…i hope hunt for the killer won’t keep them away from this passion
Whew!!! Well worth the wait — thanks for ;posting once again.
Holy hot tamale! So talented, have you ever thought about writing a book? The talent on this site is amazing. Thank you for this sexy post.
This entire chapter was exquisite, but I have to say, when I read this sentence I just got this goofy grin on my face….”It was beautiful and poignant and heart-wrenchingly clear to her now that what she felt for the brunette was stronger and more ridiculously romantic than she could have ever imagined.” The phrase “ridiculously romantic” LOL is a phrase that puts two words together that don’t normally go together, yet makes perfect sense. Thank you for this lovely chapter.
Great update. Thanks, I really enjoyed it.
Gosh!! That was hot hot hot.PPVS
Soooo good! As you know, we all just love your story and this chapter definitely did not disappoint! Thank you for posting today and for treating our girls with such tenderness and grace. Beautifully done! :)
Talent recognizes talent. Seahurst commented. That’s golden and so is your storytelling.
Beautiful chapter! And Tina’s right there’s definitely no going back. And I too smiled at the ridiculously romantic part. Thanks for posting! I hope to see more soon.
Gosh, I do love this story so much. BTW, is this a two part NC-17? You are writing them with such warm and loving words that it really is a tribute to both actresses that played “our girls.” Azmama was right about Seahurst’s comment and it is truly golden. This was such an awesome post that I was compelled to go back and read it a second and third time before I could contemplate writing a comment at all, and I know this one doesn’t do it justice at all. Absolutely superb. The last two paragraphs caught my attention the most, there were a couple others but the last two said it all. She knew it would never be enough and Bette was all she would ever want or need and there was no going back. Indeed, when you find true love, that person is all you would ever want or need and nothing can trump it. Thanks so much for posting.
“He wasn’t you…” Yay, way to go Tina! Talk about taking the BIG step… Funny how a casual conversation can suddenly turn into a moment of truth with just a few simple words… That was a lovely way to lead them to finally act on their feelings. Love the progress of this story and can’t wait to see what’s coming our way. Looking forward to seeing more of this special agent/detective amazing chemistry. Thanks a lot for the regular posts. I usually read each update just before going to bed, and I can safely say that everytime… You make my night! ;) K
simply beautiful. I’m glad Tina decided to take it to the next level. I love the Kennards btw. pps
Tina went for it didn’t she? I have to agree with Dainty there needs to be a part two to this one. I love when a NC_17 has thought and feelings woven into it and not just the sexual acts. This was extremely well done. And a good NC-17 is hard to write well. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks.
Honestly, you are one fantastic writer. That was so beautiful.
Two strong passionate women coming together, now that is jaw dropping.
tha was HOT!!
Damn, that was HOT, HOT, HOT!!!. Tina knows what she wants, and that is Bette.
Just WOW !
WOW!!! AMAZING!!!! Thank you PPS
wow hott hott hott
Oh fuck that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it!