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Blind (Chap 10)
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Previously
Bette
I’m so in love with her, I never knew I can love someone so deeply that I become so emotionally vulnerable…
Chapter 10
Time stood still when I stared into her eyes… the stare got a bit too intense and longer than normal should be… I knew I should have pulled away from the stare… but I couldn’t… it was so comfortable ‘there’… it brought soothing feelings to my eyes… my mind… and my heart…
“It’s a beautiful night… wanna go out and get some fresh air?” asked Tina when we were out of our staring trance.
“Sure…” With walking canes in hand, we managed to get out to the little park in the hospital compound.
It was indeed very beautiful… stars shone sturdily… silver, white, yellow, rainbow colour… blinking… stood out in the blackish background… I’d never taken my time to realise that simple thing like looking up to the sky… with the stars shinning could be so beautiful. We settled down by sitting on the grass… looking up at the sky…
“This is really beautiful…” Again, a silent tear rolled down my cheek, why was I so emotional and so easily getting all tear up…
“Mmm hmm…” came the reply when Tina settled down beside me after putting away my canes and wrapped us in a big blanket. She leaned her head onto my shoulder… my heart swelled with love for her… I felt so settled and so at eased at this moment. I rubbed my right cheek onto her head and brought my nose to smell her hair. I would never forget her smell, her shampoo smell, her skin texture, her voice, her laughter… How beautiful can life be if we’re going to be like this everyday…
Tina was playing with my hand… tracing every digit like she was memorizing the lines and curves on my hand and palm… at that I grabbed hold of her hand lightly… but she pulled away to brush her hair just a little moment later… I couldn’t help but feel disappointed.
Tina
I wanna hold her hand… but I couldn’t just hold her hand like normal couples do… I ‘played’ with her hands and fingers… tracing the lines on her palm… when she grabbed hold of my hand, her warmth struck me… it first sent warmth to my heart… but then the warmth scared me, so I pulled away.
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2 weeks of not seening each other and all they give each other is nice to see you? oh come on!!!Zabo, make them wake up and see what is in front of them. and of course i’m in for the ride. thanks looking forward to next chapter
God, how dare you to call your beautiful story a “humble” one ? (*Hmm… trying hard to frown here, when in fact I’m smiling !*) Let me tell you that, dear Zabo : for me, nothing written succeeding to truly touch its readers’ heart should never be called “humble”. Because giving life to any deep emotion, “come rain or come shine” – as my favourite singer sang many years ago – , is the real meaning of writing. Give me tears or smiles, comedy or drama, but give me emotions ! That could pretty be my reader’s motto ! ^_^ — “I’d never taken my time to realise that simple thing like looking up to the sky… with the stars shinning could be so beautiful” : that could be called the awakening of true emotions in the wake of this everlasting miracle that falling in love is : everything around us suddenly takes a new beauty and a new meaning… A simply beautiful all-senses phenomenon. — “it first sent warmth to my heart… but then the warmth scared me, so I pulled away” : ah, this eternal feelings’ crossover that so easily brings misunderstandings ! One can be emotionally moved and however acting as if turning the gesture down… that’s the ‘blur’ we spoke about together, isn’t it ? (*wink*) — “my eyes watered, blurring my sight to capture Tina beauty for the last few moment before seeing her again… will I see her again?” : I love that. An other meaning to all the ways one can interpret ‘see’ : right away Tina’s face was finally brang to light for our Bette, her presence will soon be removed – something tears’ blur already shows. Pretty painful ! — And finally, here’s the ultimate misunderstanding : Tina ‘masked her pain’, ‘chickened out and never gathered up enough guts to ‘stay in touch’ with Bette’, a ‘confusion and indecisiveness’ behavior that also masked her feelings and will certainly make Bette think that the lovely blonde of her dreams doesn’t care about her… One of life’s worst traps, I think ! But of course, drama would not have been so intense here with a better observer at Bette’s bedside instead of Dana (ha ! to observe, to acknowledge, to realize… so much variations around your ‘see’ thema ! ^_^ ) and so it’s definitly blur time now, I’m afraid ! Fortunately, Alice’s precious observation’s skills are already on the march and her bond with Dana will be the priceless hyphen between our two still unconfessed lovebirds. Go, Alice, go ! ^_^ — Dear talented author, this update truly delighted me : I missed this great story of yours so much ! (… and, my dear justloveB+T, if you read me now, please try your best to delight me too with your three stories’ updates, as soon as possible !! *adding my best puppy eyes here*). And even if you unconciously didn’t pay attention to the surrounding of all this ‘see’ thema, let me tell you how perfectly you express its variations from the very beginning ! Uncounciously to you, but nevertheless present – I mean it. Many thanks from the deepest of my heart for such a powerful story ! – Faithfully yours – your more than ever happy reader.
LOOK Bette take T to your candyhouse already!!!!!!!! lol !!! they/you are driving me crazy here, they better get 2gether real soon and post soon huh!!!!!
just go and give her a hug…those two need to talk, or they might lose something special that is between them
How can you not fall in love with either woman. Both women are trying desperately to hide their feelings from other and possibly themselves.
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Oh man these 2 neet to be together, I agree with B&TForever and let see whats next, thanks!
Maybe she missed out on the hug the first time around but Bette will get Tina into her arms before the night is finished (you know, the hug thingy). I take it that Tina was also a little surprised when she saw the out of the hospital Bette.
Ya gotta love Milk! Looking forward to your next chapter!
Wow these 2 ladies fail bigtime. Hey, what’s that in your mailboxes, B&T? It’s a reality check! Anyone with half a brain could tell something was there when Bette was still in the hospital. Aww and Tina pulled her hand away? So mean. :( Thanks for finally posting again! lol
Can we hit Bette with the cane? she hadn’t seen Tina in a while and all she can say is “It’s good to see you again Tina”??? even with that wonderful smile it’s not enough! LOL
1st brb
Its hard to be the brave one and make the first move. I think it should be Tina.
They are so smitten with each other. I like the slow burn with these girls. They will figure it out maybe with some help from the others.
They’re so cute, and suddenly our Ms. Porter is so shy. Tina should definitly make the first move since Bette is being overly cautious. Can we get more please.
Hmm… very nice, Zabo. Two weeks is a long time, isn’t it, Tina? At least enough to realise that you have got someone under your skin… Come on girl, just go with the flow! I don’t think Bette will make a single move if she doesn’t get at least a hint from Tina… Thanks zabo!
Is Bette able to slow dance with Tina? Please let them try and post more often.
They should really get a grip on themselves… This is just killing them both if you ask me. Thanks for posting and I hope you’ll post again soon. I love the story :)
Whats up with Tina….why didn’t she call and send a text for 2 weeks, thats not nice. More please….
Thanks for the update..this story just keeps getting better.