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Bisous; #13
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“Did you come all this way just to reprimand me?”
She sat down on my sofa, looking up at me with a rather twisted expression, “Tina was being so nice and all you could do was make things uncomfortable.”
“I made things uncomfortable?” I replied, appalled at her accusation, “Your cheerleader wasn’t exactly making me like I was in a spa, alright.”
“And what’s up with you and Tasha?” she continued, obviously not hearing my insult as she stood up and started pacing around my living room, “Did you have to be so damn loving during dinner?”
“Loving?”
“Yes, with all the smiling at each other and holding hands. For God’s sake, Helena, you weren’t even trying to make things comfortable for everyone!”
“Look, I don’t want to argue with you! This is ridiculous! You came all this way at one in the morning to scream at me about something I didn’t even do?”
“You know damn well how you were behaving tonight, Helena!”
“Get out.”
“What?”
“I said get out, Bette. It’s late and I want to rest.”
Bette’s eyes widened, staring at me. Then her expression softened, as the tears welled up in her eyes. She sat onto the sofa, cradling her head in her hands.
“This is crazy,” she whispered, “This is so crazy.”
I walked towards her, trying to maintain my composure, “What now?”
“Icantgetyououtofmymind…” she mumbled.
I thought I heard something, but I didn’t want to assume, “What did you say?” I asked, as I stood, looking down at her.
“I can’t get you out of my mind,” Bette said louder as she looked up at me; her face was stained with tears, “I’ve tried so hard to just forget about everything that happened so things can just go back to normal. I’ve missed having you as my friend, as part of my life…but…”
She started to sob softly as I sat down beside her, putting my arms around her shoulders, “Please don’t cry,” I said. I didn’t add that seeing her this way tore me apart inside.
“I’ve loved you since as long as I can remember, but I never wanted to jeopardize that friendship I had with you,” she continued, “I would have rather have you in my life, than not have you in my life at all.”
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Letting go is so hard to do. We know they love each other but Helena past would always be in the front of Bette mind. love this but its so sad and yet into real life
Helena’s past is exactly that her past. Helena claened up her act and took drastic measures to changed her life because she didn’t want to lose Bette as a friend. Bette on the other hand can’t let Helena’s past go and Helena is constantly being punished for it…..that’s some friend. IMHO Helena should let Bette go and start a new some where else. I believe love should make you happy not miserable.
This is the sure fire sign of a good story cause you’ve got my blood boiling. Bette is such an idiot. Helena needs to take charge and kiss Bette again. Bette is trying to forget she kissed and is in love with a “whore” but she can’t. Helena changed her career to please Bette but Bette can’t get past it. Helena need to kiss her then “turn her out” (sexually that is, then send her off to Chicago with the cheerleader. IMHO. (-:
BTW I forgot about my Latin salsa Nephew Huge Grain of Salt friend. Yes that was/is sarcasm.
holy sh@@ batman…you got me on roller coaster here…please allow H to utter that she loves her and B of course awakens to hear it…you’re killing me…please let them really talk…pretty please…loved the update, love H’s sidebar comments, hilarious!!!
wow, missed my comment last night and look what happened, What the heck are you doing to us E, your throwing broken shattered hearts all over the place. Help us here would ya please? Thank you, Md
woow, speechless, stunned… amazing! kay, gotta go (work..tzz)! thanks soo much… wow!! =)
Kay…WOW….I mean seriously..I feel so bad for Helena…BUT YAY..B& T together..or you going to dash my dreams babe;)Thanks for a wickedly awesome chapter..LOVED IT so much…now come on..you know you wanna make me smile *wink wink*..mwa
The hardest part is always the “letting go”. Good luck on Bette and Helena. I don’t know what I want with this story anymore. If it’s TiBette or HeleBette. I guess any of the two is better than none. :) Thanks for posting, eunichick! Great chapter once again!
I always love Bette and Tina together but in this story I just want that Tina leaves Bette and Helena alone. I feel with Helena but I understand Bette. To be in love with a whore even when it is a high-class call-girl is really not a dream come true. I hope you will find a way for Bette to come around.
Oh this hurt! I’m all for a little happiness for our girls. But I can only wish that their time apart can only make their desire and love for each other stronger. This is not the talk I had wish for, but oh well. I guess true love will win out in the end. Another excellent chapter as always!
love this story..PPS
Hello It’s me again… not that I want to shoot myself in the foot but I think you got 11 comments that count on the last chappy… and one from a special couple ;) ;) that well yeah to say it was a surprise just blew me away go and check if you haven’t’ seen it already, hug, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
Hello Again… this one goes out to Squirl… ‘except JC’s you just have to take him with a HUGE grain of salt…’ was that sarcasm… :(… I’m all sad now… cause well I don’t think I made a bad comment… turns and walks away kicking his feet, goodbye cruel world, I’ll see you in the reruns… fades to black, hugs, JC except JC’s you just have to take him with a HUGE grain of salt…
ummmm… would you be incredibly upset if I told you not only was I up the whole time… but yeah I was refreshing ‘my’ phone for said update… :P… hehe, JC
Oh Crud! Six whole months! I’ve died and gone to hell! LOL! I knew you were going to throw a curve ball at me! Now, I have to get my mind around all the drama that is going to happen. At least you gave me a warning. Helena, stay strong, girl, and don’t give up on Bette. Bette, I think you’re being cruel. You want Helena as a friend but not anything more because of her past. Sounds kinda !*$^&% up to me. OK, I’m ready for the next post! You’ve got me hungering for each chapter! PPS!
Oooops that ending was supposed to read; (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels) ;)
Hello My Beautiful Butterfly… All I can say is that this was so heart wrenching and so very real… the way you paint the bitter sting of ‘just friends’ is so powerful and so very beautiful in the sadness that it represents… does ‘bette’ really think moving away temporarily is going to solve the notion that you can’t get the person you have been ‘in love’ with all your life out of you head… well I just hope that this doesn’t’ lead Helena to leap into something that ‘Bette’ will not be able to redeem… for when you are put in the position to leave your past behind… it is very hard to find your way back… the darkness consumes… just completely brilliant my friend, love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels)
I think you would be something like 13 hours ahead of me… WOW…
my heart aches for everybody (except Tina, I can’t get this giggle out of my head because of her)…i wish they would just come to their senses and really say what they mean…pps