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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… MARRIED…ch.229
Tina: Mom we both decided months ago to name our first son Lewis…
Bette: even though I never met him I feel like I’ve know him all of my life and knowing how special a relationship he and Tina had…
Linda: I think he is smiling down on the both of you right now…
Tina: I think your right… I think he would like that…
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After they cleaned up… Lisa and James arrived and after hugging all around…
Lisa: Mom I didn’t know you would be here today…
Linda: well I thought I would come and help you clean the loft…
Lisa: that’s great… this way we can get finished faster… hey Bette did the carpenter come around yet…
Bette: no but we are expecting him today…
Linda: you have a carpenter all set up…
Tina: well our neighbor across the street is an electrician and he knows a carpenter…
Linda: did you two eat breakfast…
Lisa: yes we are good to go… right James…
James: yeah right good to go…
Bette: (Whispering).. She kept you up again most of the night…
James: that she did… I need vitamins…
Bette: I know what you mean… maybe we can buy them by the case and get a discount…
James: I’ll check it out when we get back to work tomorrow…
Both just laugh to themselves… both also knowing they love every minute of it…
Bette: (Whispers)… Sleep is just so over rated any way…
Linda: Ok lets get this party started…. where are the cleaning supplies…
Tina shows them where everything they will need is…
Linda pulls Tina to the side…
Linda: I don’t want you up there with us… with all of the different smells…
Tina: I’m not… Bette already read me the riot act…
Linda: and she should… make some excuse that you have your weekly cleaning to do down here…
Tina: ok I will…
The cleaning crew were working hard… and the place was shaping up very nicely… Linda went down into the kitchen to make some Ice Tea…
Door bell rings… Linda answers it…
Dana: Oh Mrs. Kennard…
Linda: Hi Dana… how are you… come on in…
Dana: please don’t ask… my head is still killing me…
Linda: out with Alice again last night…
Dana: well her and a few others… I think I left my pocketbook here last night…
Linda: oh so the party was here…
Dana: yeah
Linda: that’s good at least you are all safe and if you drink to much you could always stay the night…
Dana: and that always happens… we always end up sleeping where we drop…
Linda: do you need help looking for your bag…
Dana: no here it is… so what’s going on today…
Linda: I’m here to help get the loft in shape for Lisa…
Dana: oh yeah they said that the other day… I think its great that Bette and Tina are doing that for Lisa…
Linda: me too… you know I worry about my daughter… actually both of them…
Dana: well Tina is very lucky… she has a love that I wish I can find… and parents… well parents that act like parents and love their children no matter who they choose to love…
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey Amanda I love your storie I’m a big fan of you please continue.KISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
YO NEW YORK! I know i haven’t dropped a comment or 2, or 3 or 10, BUT i’ve still been keeping track of this fantastic fic! So NOW we have Candance huh? OH BOY!!
No no we can’t have Candace hitting on Tina or Bette. She needs to hit on Alice or Dana and leave our happy couple alone. Great story. PPS.
Woman, you talk about me!????? You brought CANDASSSSSSS into your fic??? GRRRRRRRRuuuuummmbblinnnGGGGGGG. *hmph* Please post soon and get rid of that trashy woman.
MG W.T.F.!okay alittle drama is good for the heart but did you have to bring a CANDYASS APPLE into this little ole story?please cover your shedevil horns back up.so ITS FANFICTIONS OLYPMICS LET THE GAMES BEGAN.p.p.s. GOOOOOOOOOOOO METSSSSSSSSSSSS!
YOur brought Candace into the picture, you best not have her try to hit up on Bette on Tina.
MG when you say that you’re bringing drama, you really come hard with it. This should be interesting on the heart (attack) but please don’t let Candance, the happy homewrecker, come between our girls. The drama is good as long as they stay where they belong.
God help us, MG. You’ve invited the devil incarnate into Bette and Tina’s home. And this time she wants Tina’s ass. Or any within reach.
Oh No You Didn’t. I hope she falls out of the loft. Please don’t let her cause any problems for Tina and Bette. I am worried about the baby.
OMFG!!!! What is it with Candace? I just hope the drama does not last long. Please post very soon!!!!!!! Thanks MG
Oh shit Candace is here and truoble coming or maybe drama lol. Please don’t bring trouble or drama to B&T. Anyway post soon please, thanks!
so you had to bring Candy-Ass into it huh? She had better not cause any trouble because Bette is onto her! hey I’m from Brooklyn also! great story. I don’t always comment but I always read!
Any chance of Tina bitchslapping Candyass? Or Dana. I’d pay to see Dana kick someone’s ass. lol
Hey Amanda, DO NOT LET CANDACE MESS WITH THE GIRLS!!!! I would hate to have to come looking for you to knock some sense into you. No just kidding but please do not let her come between Bette and Tina.
Candace and Tina–ugh! You did say drama was headed our way, but I do hope its short lived. I hope you keep going with this story.
Hey Amanda, been a long time since I commented babe, but I sense some drama coming our way “Candace”. Just as well I trust our girls in your story. PPS
O.o girl! Candance is in the scene now!i hope this time B&T will kick her ass so far away from them! i love this story
Hey AMG, Great to have another delicious post for you. Linda was great and so happy about the new. Loved the discussion re the baby’s sex. Then getting the gang together to help clear out was inspired. Linda just said the right things to Dana and showed her that some parents do support and comfort their kids. Then to bring Nasty Candy-Ass in the the mix. Brilliant is switching her attraction to Tina. I think that we are in for a bump ight so bring it on! WOnderful writing and creative plotting. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Amanda, I wasn’t expecting Candace…PPS
oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh shit, u did say drama was on its ugly way but didn’t name it as CANDACE which spells t-r-o-u-b-l-e!!!! watch out if she hits on T, i’ll be after her with a squirrel gun, u hear me??? lol…now post soon so I don’t spend too many hours worrying about what that homewrecker is up to…
HI HELL MG YOU DIDNT JUST WRITE THAT DIRTY NAME. BAD, THAT WAS HORRIBLE JUST SEEING THAT NAME BAD LADY THANKS
What no group hug for Candass, No singing of kumbia…..
I just KNEW you would bring CandyAss into the picture. Here comes the drama!