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Angels and Mortals:Chapter 2- Bruised and Bleeding(part 3 in Traced in the Stars Trilogy)
Shane: Don’t worry doctor, Carmen knows how to give it good.
The doctor smiled and Carmen burned a hole through Shane with her eyes.
Shane: What?
Carmen just kept giving her that look.
Doctor: Well I think that is enough for today, we’ll see you back here in a month’s time.
Alex was shaking and spat out blood. Finally after 3 hours of brutal beating, they gave up and left her there, unconscious. She had just woken up. She didn’t dare to cry, but just shook. She had a hard time moving. This was the first time they had taken a knife to her. She felt each cut make her skin give way as if it were butter. Then the sting of an open cut, along with the warmth of blood trickle over her skin. She tried desperately to get to her knees and did so. She yelped out in pain, breathing hard. She then just collapsed from pain. Right there in the alley, she lay, bruised and bleeding.
Carmen and Shane walked out of the doctor’s office, to their car. Carmen got in the driver’s side, and Shane the passenger. The second both doors were shut, Shane jumped on Carmen and pressed her lips eagerly to her wife’s. Carmen kissed her back. Shane went right to her belt and unbuckled it.
Carmen: Wow.
Shane: Come on babe, I’m craving it.
Carmen: Shane, we’re in the parking lot.
Carmen then moaned feeling Shane plunged deep between her wet folds. She gasped.
Shane: Still wanna complain?
Carmen shook her head “no” as Shane fingered around her G-Spot.
Desire gave way.
Alex woke in the alley. Night had fallen. She looked over to see a very pissed-off shop owner.
Owner: Get away from my shop.
It appeared he had woken her. She tried to get up, but couldn’t.
Owner: LEAVE NOW!
Alex: I—I-I c…*cough*nt.
Owner: Bull shit!
The owner grabbed her by her shirt and threw her onto the street. She lay there, unable to move. He went into his shop again. She heard a horn honk and tires screech.
A/N: So, this to make up for the laco of an author’s note at the end of all my other ones. I’m sorry this chapter was still depressing, but the next one will be a treat. Thank you all for reading and responding, it helps me give you mor eof what you want, as well as improve my writing skills to make better fics for you guys. To answer a few of your questions: They haven’t given up, they filed a missing persons report with the police as I mentione din Part 2 (Constellations). If you have any more questions, or suggestions for this fic, please IM me. I’m open to all ideas as well. It never hurt to listen and take into consideration. I am also thinking of having a fan-written episode, as they do on the show. I’ll give you a basic outline, and you’ll be given a certain scene or scenes to write. Its not etched in stone yet, but IM me if you’d be interested! You will get credit for it! Once again. thanks for reading!
-IAmAlexM
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(42 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
girl with all that beating she has to have an internal bleeding..poor thing..i dont know why she has to suffer like that..its sad!. That shop ownner have no heart..stupid man. And hey where is Dana??..Alex sure needs a angel by her side right now. Waiting for next chapter and i hope Alex will have better days after this!.
greatpost i feel so bad for alex and it so needless shane and carmen love her and want her back why cant she see it, could the car that screeched to a halt at the end of this chapter be theres, hmmmmmmmmm hope things get better for poor alex and thanx for the update cant wait for more.
You updated but didn’t tell me ack! Fan written would be cool. I’d do it but i stink at writing that and youd just mock me.it was a goo d update it was a little short compared to last update so i was disappointed. I have even more ideas about what may be to come.
i loke this fic and i would love to right i sceen!!!!!! i liked this update i dont care that it was short. BuT HOW CAN PEOPLE BE SOOOO BADDDDDD!!!
but i dont have IM so i dont know how to reach you or what ever so email me lol
that was one bad beating I hope that alex will be ok and I hope that she will go home soon as eveyone misses her a lot please post soon great update I love it but it is so sad at the moment
i so fucken love this storry!!! i didnt think i´d like shane pregnant, but it´s soooo cute poor alex though… if she always gets beaten up like that she should be dead by now… hope they get her to a hospital and contact shane an carm… post soon pleaeaeaease
… It’s midnight and I get to a really good part and find out this is the end for now until the next chapter… UGH!!! CONTINUE BEFORE I LOSE MY FUCKING MIND!