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A Thin Line – Chpt 33
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“A clever and artful arrangement, Helena,” Mummy acknowledged. “I can admire both of your pretty faces, while you and Bette surreptitiously fondle one another under the table.”
“Mummy!” I exclaimed, squeezing her hand. “Whatever am I going to do with you?”
“My dear, don’t deny your calculating scheme,” Mummy admonished playfully, making her way around the table. “I’m much too wise to the ways of the world, not to mention young love.”
“Um, actually, Peggy, the seating arrangement wasn’t Helena’s idea,” Bette spoke up in my defense, as she pulled out my chair. “It was I who suggested it.”
“Why, Bette Porter, aren’t you the wily one? And look at you, defending the honor of your lover. I knew I liked you for a reason,” Mummy smiled, taking her seat and placing her napkin in her lap.
Bette sat down next to me and caught my hand to caress it under the table as I smoothed my napkin in my lap. I looked up and turned my head to smile at her. And if the truth be told, my heart leapt in my chest. Never did I think I could, or would, be so in love.
Mummy led the conversation as we began to sup.
“So, girls, what fun recreational activities have you two indulged in today, besides the obvious, of course?” she asked. “Bette?”
“Well, Helena started off my day with some invigorating exercise,” Bette answered. “And…”
“I said, ‘besides the obvious’, my dear,” Mummy interrupted, jesting.
“Mummy!” I scolded. “We did some yoga on the beach,” I clarified Bette’s response. “And it was followed by a nice lunch next to the pool and a relaxing walk along the shore.”
Spying the shell I’d placed next to the centerpiece bouquet, Mummy reached to finger it.
“And is this a memento of your day?” Mummy asked.
“Yes, as a matter of fact, it is,” I answered, although a tad embarrassed that my sentimental observance had been discovered.
Bette took my hand and lifted it to her lips. “Isn’t your daughter romantic?” Bette addressed Mummy.
“Indeed. A trait she inherited from her father. One that was quite attractive to me in my day,” Mummy reflected nostalgically. Her fork hung suspended in mid-air as she stared at the shell, becoming lost in her reverie.
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Something good will come out of this yet/ a budding artist. and a Mother and daughter that will reunite. thanks
That was touching…like I said before there is so much love here it seems like they have been together for longer than a week. It is nice that Peggy is showing Helena how much she cares for her and admires her. Please post soon.
Peggy is awesome. You write her so well!!!! She’s a little crazy with the sexual questions, but I guess that’s Peggy. Wow, you can really feel the love between Bette and Helena. The emotions in your story are just great!
any chapter with Peggy is golden to me. i think the heart to heart b/w Peggy and Heena will be good for their relationship. and how cute is Peggy patting ette’s butt at the end of this chapter….aww that Peabody, what a dame! Post soon!
I suppose all that love flowing around can be a potent thing. Strange that healing can be traumatic, at least in it’s initial stages. You know, it occurs to me that in some ways Peggy is sort of like an upper case, upper class, upper crust version of Alice. The both of them are forever curious about others’ sex lives and likely to say just about anything. Peggy should give Alice some pointers.
Very sweet indeed
A dearth of comments and a lack of readership confirm to me that this should be the 2nd to last chapter. Next time, I will try to wrap it up neatly for you who have been faithful. Thank you to those few of you who have continued to read and who seem to understand me!
they’ve only been together for a week…but dang-it if it doesn’t feel like months…peggy is hysterical, but her sensitivity this chapter was awesome..love the way you reveal those soft spots…THANKS!
Zheese, I first want you to consider that you posted on a Saturday at the end of summer (at least for those of us in the northern hemisphere). These things will impact readership. Secondy, I firmly believe authors should tell their own story according to their own muses. You didn’t get the award for nothing.
I agree with funnyone–please tell this story at your own pace and in your own way. I myself have been gone for a few days and am just now catching up, so please consider continuing.
Oh here we go AGAIN! Reading zheese’s comment made me forget what the hell I was going to say regarding this chapter. I am wondering how many comments is needed for an author to continue. Either we aren’t reading enough, or commenting enough….or something. Shit!!! There always seems to be SOMETHING that we are NOT doing enough of. In case you missed this, I read your STORIES because you are a hell of a writer and you keep me glued. It is comments like the one you posted that bug the hell out of me because the faithful followers managed to get penalized because there just isn’t ENOUGH of whatever the hell enough is supposed to be. And one other thing, I’d still be reading your stories whether you won a damn award or not!!
Yours is the only HeleBette story that I actually enjoy reading. I am a huge TiBetter but this couple seems so much in love and it is genuine. You are pitch perfect when it comes to Peggy’s dialogue. Excellent writing.
I love you for your sentiment. Keep up the good work.
Zheese baby I really like your stor. You write them with so much love and so much passion it moves me. The moment betwee B & H in the kitchen was touching and it makes me happy to see Peggy will finally take the time to get to know her daughter nd to make up for the lost time. Thanks again for sharing your story and your feelings with us.
Zheese I am a known Tibetter so my reading and commenting on your Belena story & all the other Belena stories are a tribute to your writing skills. I think alot of people enjoy reading these stories but for some reason they just don’t comment…I mean I JUST started commenting on stories I was a silent reader for a long time…dosen’t mean I don’t adore the story or that I am not in awe of the writer. Please keep the story going if that is what you want to do…I know that is what I want you to do.
zheese…i’m a loyal reader, in fact – i only read belena stories – and your my dear has to be one of the best – if not the best. the quality and fluidity of your writing is excellent…hell, i thought bette and helena had been together for years based on your writing. please don’t let it be the end, but if it has to be..PLEASE write another B&H story. Thank you for the time and creativity that it requires to put together such a comprehensive story. CC
aww this is sweet!!!!! i felt bad for helana but i know this talk will be good for helena and peggy
I’m a long-time lurker on the fanfiction area and I just wanted to say how fantastic your story is. Everything seems so natural and the love seems so true between the two of them. Please carry on (if you want to that is). I bet there are loads more lurkers who love your writing.