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A Thin Line – Chpt 33
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Previously
“You two lovebirds just can’t get enough of each other, can you?” she said. “Does an old woman’s heart good. Now, why don’t you just move in together?”
“Actually, we’ve begun to discuss that idea,” Helena replied, as she turned around to scoop the pineapple into a bowl and I headed toward the wine chiller.
“Well, let’s discuss it further over dinner,” Peggy said encouragingly, inviting herself into the conversation to which Helena and I had committed ourselves.
I could hear the smile in Helena’s voice. “Tomorrow’s our weekaversary, Mummy,” Helena announced.
Glancing over my shoulder, I saw Peggy cock her head questioningly.
“Tomorrow, Bette and I will have been together one week,” Helena explained. “Our weekaversary.”
“Ah, so then we have cause to celebrate,” Peggy said. “Do you have any champagne chilled?”
Chapter 33
It became a rather emotional evening quite quickly.
Bette uncorked the champagne and served each of us a glass as we remained gathered together in the kitchen before dinner.
Mummy insisted that she perform a celebratory toast.
“To my beautiful daughter, Helena. And to Bette, the inspiring, enchanting woman who has captured her heart. It is my utmost delight to witness the long-awaited happiness you two have finally found with one another. And it is my deepest wish that your love continue to grow as you find deeper and deeper joy with each other as your future unfolds together. Now, cheers! Bottoms up!”
We clinked our glasses together and sipped, Bette and I smiling a bit coyly to one another.
Mummy shot us a disapproving glance.
“Now, now! This sudden dual immersion into the realm of timidity and self-restraint is totally unacceptable. Let’s see some of that heartwarming display of affection that I’ve become accustomed to and otherwise can’t escape,” Mummy exhorted us.
Laughing, Bette and I took each other’s free hand and leaned in for a quick peck on the lips.
“I so enjoy seeing you two happy and in love,” Mummy confessed, smiling, as Bette wrapped her arm around my waist. “Are we ready to dine, my dears?”
“I do believe my preparations are complete and the table is set,” I said, moving to take Mummy’s hand and to lead the way into the dining room. “Mummy, I’ve left the head of the table vacant and seated you across from Bette and I. Is that alright with you?”
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Something good will come out of this yet/ a budding artist. and a Mother and daughter that will reunite. thanks
That was touching…like I said before there is so much love here it seems like they have been together for longer than a week. It is nice that Peggy is showing Helena how much she cares for her and admires her. Please post soon.
Peggy is awesome. You write her so well!!!! She’s a little crazy with the sexual questions, but I guess that’s Peggy. Wow, you can really feel the love between Bette and Helena. The emotions in your story are just great!
any chapter with Peggy is golden to me. i think the heart to heart b/w Peggy and Heena will be good for their relationship. and how cute is Peggy patting ette’s butt at the end of this chapter….aww that Peabody, what a dame! Post soon!
I suppose all that love flowing around can be a potent thing. Strange that healing can be traumatic, at least in it’s initial stages. You know, it occurs to me that in some ways Peggy is sort of like an upper case, upper class, upper crust version of Alice. The both of them are forever curious about others’ sex lives and likely to say just about anything. Peggy should give Alice some pointers.
Very sweet indeed
A dearth of comments and a lack of readership confirm to me that this should be the 2nd to last chapter. Next time, I will try to wrap it up neatly for you who have been faithful. Thank you to those few of you who have continued to read and who seem to understand me!
they’ve only been together for a week…but dang-it if it doesn’t feel like months…peggy is hysterical, but her sensitivity this chapter was awesome..love the way you reveal those soft spots…THANKS!
Zheese, I first want you to consider that you posted on a Saturday at the end of summer (at least for those of us in the northern hemisphere). These things will impact readership. Secondy, I firmly believe authors should tell their own story according to their own muses. You didn’t get the award for nothing.
I agree with funnyone–please tell this story at your own pace and in your own way. I myself have been gone for a few days and am just now catching up, so please consider continuing.
Oh here we go AGAIN! Reading zheese’s comment made me forget what the hell I was going to say regarding this chapter. I am wondering how many comments is needed for an author to continue. Either we aren’t reading enough, or commenting enough….or something. Shit!!! There always seems to be SOMETHING that we are NOT doing enough of. In case you missed this, I read your STORIES because you are a hell of a writer and you keep me glued. It is comments like the one you posted that bug the hell out of me because the faithful followers managed to get penalized because there just isn’t ENOUGH of whatever the hell enough is supposed to be. And one other thing, I’d still be reading your stories whether you won a damn award or not!!
Yours is the only HeleBette story that I actually enjoy reading. I am a huge TiBetter but this couple seems so much in love and it is genuine. You are pitch perfect when it comes to Peggy’s dialogue. Excellent writing.
I love you for your sentiment. Keep up the good work.
Zheese baby I really like your stor. You write them with so much love and so much passion it moves me. The moment betwee B & H in the kitchen was touching and it makes me happy to see Peggy will finally take the time to get to know her daughter nd to make up for the lost time. Thanks again for sharing your story and your feelings with us.
Zheese I am a known Tibetter so my reading and commenting on your Belena story & all the other Belena stories are a tribute to your writing skills. I think alot of people enjoy reading these stories but for some reason they just don’t comment…I mean I JUST started commenting on stories I was a silent reader for a long time…dosen’t mean I don’t adore the story or that I am not in awe of the writer. Please keep the story going if that is what you want to do…I know that is what I want you to do.
zheese…i’m a loyal reader, in fact – i only read belena stories – and your my dear has to be one of the best – if not the best. the quality and fluidity of your writing is excellent…hell, i thought bette and helena had been together for years based on your writing. please don’t let it be the end, but if it has to be..PLEASE write another B&H story. Thank you for the time and creativity that it requires to put together such a comprehensive story. CC
aww this is sweet!!!!! i felt bad for helana but i know this talk will be good for helena and peggy
I’m a long-time lurker on the fanfiction area and I just wanted to say how fantastic your story is. Everything seems so natural and the love seems so true between the two of them. Please carry on (if you want to that is). I bet there are loads more lurkers who love your writing.