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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 3
"I did give her a chance we were together for seven months and in all that time she wasn’t the first thing I thought of in the morning or the last thing I thought of at night, she couldn’t excite my entire being with a single look like someone else I know."
"Ah there’s that Porter passion, but you do realize that if you continue to compare everyone else to me you’re always going to find something wrong, because baby they can’t be me just like no one else could be you, at least not in my eyes. You have to stop comparing your relationships to what you had with me, accept these women for who they are and how they make you feel and take it from their. Trust me babe have I ever steered you in the wrong direction?"
"No, but if I was meant to be with any of these woman than don’t you think that any comparisons I make would be irrelevant. I mean…no stay with me here, if I was meant to be with any of them, take Natalie for example: if I was supposed to be with her, to spend the rest of my life with her than she would make this pain in my heart disappear. She made me happy but if she was meant to be my ‘forever’ then shouldn’t I be more willing to let our past go and rush towards my future with her. In all the months we were together on our best day it was only a fraction of the happiness that you made me feel." I sigh at what I just said, it’s been nine years but here I am. She lifts my chin so I’m looking in her eyes again.
"I guess I’m still not at a place where I’m desperate enough to settle for something that doesn’t make me completely happy…I blame that damn Porter passion." I knew that last line would make her laugh and damn she’s so sexy when she laughs.
"That Porter passion can be blamed for many things like almost getting us fired on several occasions, but babe I think you’re a little too stubborn for your own good. So, what do you want to do now, the sun’s going to be coming up pretty soon and your going to have to leave."
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(69 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
Great writing and excellent story! Can’t wait for more!
Bette and Tina are soulmates. Soulmates can be physically separated for years but are really inexorably joined at the heart and mind.
Its not Alice at the door. Is it Tina looking for her son> thanks
okay…post for us soon and I don’t care how old the girls are…. : )
Hey girl, i am definately a fan now! I really like the way you write, nice change from the obvious. Keep it coming, if possible, soon.
when i start to read it, i wasnt’ understan any word but later i cacth it! i am so slow sometimes! will be a nice surprise if won’t be Alcie at the door.
Good chapter. I think is Eli right!!!!!!!
I’ll admit that at first I was lost and wasn’t sure I was even reading the same story. Nice tie-in though at the end! I know how it feels to be forced from sleep during a nice dream. Once in a blue moon I can slip back into the dream if I don’t need to get up, but most of the time I can’t.
i don’t think it’s alice..very lucid dream, bette is loosing it, she’d better see tina soon
this was so lovely – sad and moving how Bette is still so attached and holding on.
Hey – this is very interesting and diffirent, I can’t wait to read what you’ve planned for us….more please.
Ok, I think it’s Tina at the door… but yay! I LOVE YOU STORY!
whoa that tears at the heart sum
Well, dream the mother, meet the son. Not too bad for Bette. =D