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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 3
"I really tried this last time…I really did, but it doesn’t feel right if I’m not with you." A few tears slip out and she brings up her other hand and starts to wipe away the tears as she steps even closer so that there’s only a whisper of space between our bodies. Her left hand is still cupping my face and her right is softly brushing through my hair (I absolutely love it when she runs her fingers through my hair), and as she tucks my hair behind my right ear she leans in and whispers soothing words that reach me to the farthest depths of my soul.
"Baby I will always be here if you need me…always, but I want you to be happy, you know that right?" At this point my throat feels too tight to talk so I just nod yes. "I’d love to spend all day every day here with you on our beach, but you know that we can’t stay here forever…Baby look at me tell what went wrong between you and Natalie, she seemed like a really nice person."
She moves away from me and takes a seat in the sand, "Come here tell me what happened, and lets see if we could figure something out."
"Natalie was really nice, smart, and all that other good stuff you want in a partner. She really loved me, she was always telling me that she loved me, and really made me feel it, but as much as she loved me I knew I couldn’t love her the same way…I couldn’t make her feel completely loved because I couldn’t give her all of me. I really tried, you know how much I hate to fail at anything but I couldn’t do it. I hate that I hurt her but it was for the best."
She fixed me with that look that tells me to elaborate. "After she left I felt really bad, and it hurt not to be able to be there for her…I really did care about her, she’s a really great person, and for a second I started to reconsider my decision but…in the end she just wasn’t who I meant to be with."
"How do you know if you didn’t really give her a chance."
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(69 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
Great writing and excellent story! Can’t wait for more!
Bette and Tina are soulmates. Soulmates can be physically separated for years but are really inexorably joined at the heart and mind.
Its not Alice at the door. Is it Tina looking for her son> thanks
okay…post for us soon and I don’t care how old the girls are…. : )
Hey girl, i am definately a fan now! I really like the way you write, nice change from the obvious. Keep it coming, if possible, soon.
when i start to read it, i wasnt’ understan any word but later i cacth it! i am so slow sometimes! will be a nice surprise if won’t be Alcie at the door.
Good chapter. I think is Eli right!!!!!!!
I’ll admit that at first I was lost and wasn’t sure I was even reading the same story. Nice tie-in though at the end! I know how it feels to be forced from sleep during a nice dream. Once in a blue moon I can slip back into the dream if I don’t need to get up, but most of the time I can’t.
i don’t think it’s alice..very lucid dream, bette is loosing it, she’d better see tina soon
this was so lovely – sad and moving how Bette is still so attached and holding on.
Hey – this is very interesting and diffirent, I can’t wait to read what you’ve planned for us….more please.
Ok, I think it’s Tina at the door… but yay! I LOVE YOU STORY!
whoa that tears at the heart sum
Well, dream the mother, meet the son. Not too bad for Bette. =D