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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 26
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“Yes.” Bette hoped that she was able to get through to her father. She wanted her father in her life but she wasn’t going to risk her relationship with Tina and Eli. Bette was going to press her father further when her cell phone rang. Bette hurried to answer it because it could only be Tina. As she was getting her phone she glanced at the clock and saw that it was already 9:30pm.
“T is that you?”
“Yeah it’s me I’m sorry I didn’t call earlier but I know you have a lot going on at work.”
“T you know I’d rather talk to you and Eli more then anything else.”
“I know baby but I wanted you to be able to focus on your work so you could leave earlier.”
“Are you and Eli home T?”
“Not exactly we had some car trouble that side tracked us.”
“Tina are you and Eli okay?”
“Yeah we’re fine but I can’t say the same for the car. It looks like we’re going to have to spend the night in San Diego.”
“What! If there’s something wrong with the car then they’ll give you a replacement car. Why do you need to spend the night there?”
“We were getting ready to leave when the car started overheating so we called AAA. The mechanic said he could fix it but after awhile he said something was wrong with the radiator and that I should call the rental place for another car. I was able to talk to someone but it was too late to get another car. I’ll get another car tomorrow morning.”
“That mechanics an idiot for saying he could fix it when he couldn’t. You probably would have made it to the rental place in time if it wasn’t for him…baby you should have called me when this happened.”
“I didn’t want to add to your problems today, I know that you had a lot going on at work and I wanted you to be able to concentrate on that.”
“T I really wished you would have called me. I have James and a lot of other people who could have taken care of the gallery well I was away. If something like this happens again I want you to call me…you and Eli come first.”
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I am glad Bette finally told Melvin how she felt. I am happy there was no San Diego drama with Tina. Love Nero. I can’t wait for B&T to finaly be together…I am sure it will be hot.
Great update. I am so enjoying this story. I love this new, “reconditioned” Bette.
I’m really enjoying this story.
About darn time Bette stood up to Melvin. Cripes.
Fantastic update once again! You really had Melvin down pat, and it’s awesome that Bette confronted him on his crap from the past! Can’t wait for the time B & T finally are able to come together…in that way, ya’ know? Hope school is going well and that you are able to post another nice long chapter very soon!
So glad Bette had the back bone to tell Melvin how she felt.and what she expected from him where Eli and Tina are concerned. thanks so much for posting Post when you have time thanks
This is nice. Really enjoying it. Thanks for writing.
Go Bette..and I hope that Melvin comes around. THanks for the update
great update, i’m glad bette finally chose her family over her father…i’m hoping for a very nice and hot B&T reunion the next day ;)
Finally Bette stood up to her father. I know how difficult that is for Bette, but she now knows how important it is to have Tina and Eli in her life. Loved the little teaser that you gave us at the beginning of the chapter.
great update
LOL@the camping trip! So glad Bette stood up to Melvin. Even better he’s actually considering not being an ass to Tina and Eli.
I SO love this story & always look forward to it!
Great update as always. Bout time Bette stood up to her father. Please make sure Bette keeps in mind that Tina can handle things, and be careful of not trying to handle things for her. I’m soooooooooooooooo looking forward to those two actually hooking up. Too cute about Bette being worried about Eli hearing.
Amazing post once again Toribio!!!! I loved the little heated ‘thing’ on the couch between B&T, so cute and realistic…………and the things Bette told Melvin was spot-on, really great writing. BUUUUT now you can’t hold that NC-17 back much longer LOL and I can’t wait. Post soon, I’m addicted.
I like the new improved Bette and how she finally stood up to Melvin. Thanks for taking the time to write, with your schedule I know it isn’t easy.
I just read all of the chapters from start to finish, and I am just blown away. An absolute gem of a story. I look forward to your update.
great story. Hope Melvin will take a grand pa roll with Eli. How cute!
Good chapter and Bette you go girl. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
Great Update!!!!! Bette was so right to stand up to her father. Thank you
I have been so hanging out for this story and loved it as always…PPS
Great update! Finally Bette had the opportunity to talk Melvin, i hop too that Melvin will take the rigth choise cause he loves Bette in his particular way but he loves her then he must see how happy Bette is. Take it easy we will waiting for your post! good luck in the school
Grrreat chapter! I was kinda hoping that Tina and Eli would be arriving during Bette’s tirade to her father, thus hearing how she stood up to him for her family’s sake, but well, whatever direction you’re taking is great with me, so… I thought you did a great job with Melvin. Leaving some hopes about his decision while still having him in character. Well done! Loved the teaser, that’s very promising for the real thing ya know…;) This ending has me look forward to the reunion between B&T, so please post soon (with all due respect for your school work, it’s great enough to have you share this wonderful story!) Okay, thanks a lot, Toribio!
GREAT update, I like most am glad that Bette finally stood up to Melvin and I believe that Melvin will make the right choice. I can hardly wait until Tina finds out, oh yeah it will be “T” time for Bette. I am looking to Eli meeting Melvin and standing up tall for both his mom and Bette. Poor Bette is soooooo missing her family that are trapped in San Diego while she is home alone. PPS :o)