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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 26
Bette took a deep breath in an effort to slow her racing heart. “Daddy you’re right all you’ve ever been is civil towards Tina and your civil behavior has bordered on indifferent. So I will say to you that if you wish to continue a relationship with me then you will have to not only accept my relationship with Tina and her son, but that you’ll also be happy for us because daddy I do want you in our life but I will not tolerate you treating my family with indifference. I would do anything in my power to insure their happiness….I love you daddy but my family is my first priority…”
“I can understand the importance of family. Ever since you were born all I’ve ever wanted was what was best for you, and yes I have expected a lot from you but only because I know you are capable of doing great things…”
Bette laughed at how her father had understated his expectations for her. “Why can’t you ever be satisfied with my personal success? Ever since I told you I was gay all you would focus on is my professional success and I wanted to make you proud of me so I worked hard, but in the pursuit of success I lost sight of the person who mattered the most to me…” Bette looked at her father. “…I will not make that mistake again. I’d sooner die then fail my family again. Tina has allowed me to be a part of her and her son’s life, and I may have only known Eli for over two weeks but I would do anything for him…”
Bette took a deep breath in an effort to keep herself from feeling overwhelmed. “He may not be my blood but I would be honored if he thought of me as his mother because I couldn’t have asked for a better son. He’s…” Bette smiled at the thought of Eli as her eyes began to tear. “God he’s such an exceptional kid. Tina’s really done a great job raising him. He’s perfect in my eyes although I know he’s not perfect but…”
Melvin saw the look in his daughter’s eyes as she spoke about Tina and Eli and knew this would be a major turning point in his relationship with his daughter. “You love him and you’re in love with his mother.”
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(53 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
I am glad Bette finally told Melvin how she felt. I am happy there was no San Diego drama with Tina. Love Nero. I can’t wait for B&T to finaly be together…I am sure it will be hot.
Great update. I am so enjoying this story. I love this new, “reconditioned” Bette.
I’m really enjoying this story.
About darn time Bette stood up to Melvin. Cripes.
Fantastic update once again! You really had Melvin down pat, and it’s awesome that Bette confronted him on his crap from the past! Can’t wait for the time B & T finally are able to come together…in that way, ya’ know? Hope school is going well and that you are able to post another nice long chapter very soon!
So glad Bette had the back bone to tell Melvin how she felt.and what she expected from him where Eli and Tina are concerned. thanks so much for posting Post when you have time thanks
This is nice. Really enjoying it. Thanks for writing.
Go Bette..and I hope that Melvin comes around. THanks for the update
great update, i’m glad bette finally chose her family over her father…i’m hoping for a very nice and hot B&T reunion the next day ;)
Finally Bette stood up to her father. I know how difficult that is for Bette, but she now knows how important it is to have Tina and Eli in her life. Loved the little teaser that you gave us at the beginning of the chapter.
great update
LOL@the camping trip! So glad Bette stood up to Melvin. Even better he’s actually considering not being an ass to Tina and Eli.
I SO love this story & always look forward to it!
Great update as always. Bout time Bette stood up to her father. Please make sure Bette keeps in mind that Tina can handle things, and be careful of not trying to handle things for her. I’m soooooooooooooooo looking forward to those two actually hooking up. Too cute about Bette being worried about Eli hearing.
Amazing post once again Toribio!!!! I loved the little heated ‘thing’ on the couch between B&T, so cute and realistic…………and the things Bette told Melvin was spot-on, really great writing. BUUUUT now you can’t hold that NC-17 back much longer LOL and I can’t wait. Post soon, I’m addicted.
I like the new improved Bette and how she finally stood up to Melvin. Thanks for taking the time to write, with your schedule I know it isn’t easy.
I just read all of the chapters from start to finish, and I am just blown away. An absolute gem of a story. I look forward to your update.
great story. Hope Melvin will take a grand pa roll with Eli. How cute!
Good chapter and Bette you go girl. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
Great Update!!!!! Bette was so right to stand up to her father. Thank you
I have been so hanging out for this story and loved it as always…PPS
Great update! Finally Bette had the opportunity to talk Melvin, i hop too that Melvin will take the rigth choise cause he loves Bette in his particular way but he loves her then he must see how happy Bette is. Take it easy we will waiting for your post! good luck in the school
Grrreat chapter! I was kinda hoping that Tina and Eli would be arriving during Bette’s tirade to her father, thus hearing how she stood up to him for her family’s sake, but well, whatever direction you’re taking is great with me, so… I thought you did a great job with Melvin. Leaving some hopes about his decision while still having him in character. Well done! Loved the teaser, that’s very promising for the real thing ya know…;) This ending has me look forward to the reunion between B&T, so please post soon (with all due respect for your school work, it’s great enough to have you share this wonderful story!) Okay, thanks a lot, Toribio!
GREAT update, I like most am glad that Bette finally stood up to Melvin and I believe that Melvin will make the right choice. I can hardly wait until Tina finds out, oh yeah it will be “T” time for Bette. I am looking to Eli meeting Melvin and standing up tall for both his mom and Bette. Poor Bette is soooooo missing her family that are trapped in San Diego while she is home alone. PPS :o)