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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 33
Chapter 33
“Hey Bette? When is the first tournament that you will attend on the LPGA?” Tina asks after a little while.
“I think it’s in three weeks, and it’s in
“Okay.” Tina says.
They lay silent again a few moments.
“So, are we ready for dinner?” Bette asks.
“Yes, I am. Shall we dress casual or elegant?” Tina asks rolling over to her side so she’s facing Bette. Bette smiles.
“Hmmm I think ***** casual.” Bette replies also rolling over to her side facing Tina.
She leans in for a kiss. It starts out soft but gets more passionate. Tina move her hand up to Bette’s hip, and then slowly move it further up to her face. Bette does the same ting.
Then after a few minutes of passionate kissing, Bette breaks away.
“If we want to get to dinner, I think we should get going or else we’ll never get out of here.” Bette says raising an eyebrow and grins at Tina.
“And would that be bad?” Tina teases.
“No, but I’m really hungry.” Bette replies, smiling.
“Okay.” Tina says and stands up from the bed. She reaches out her hand for Bette to take and she pulls her up.
Tina walks over to the chair and changes into the clothes she wore last night. The skirt and the tank top. Bette followed and changes into a pair of jeans and a pink laced top, and a Ralph Lauren Denim jacket. Bette walks over to Tina who is by the mirror doing her hair.
“I think we are
“Yeah You do look great.” Tina replies and turns around and kisses Bette softly on the lips.
Bette takes Tina’s hand and they walk out and down to their rental car.
Bette opens the door for Tina then, rushes to her side and get in.
“So where are we going?” Tina asks.
“I called earlier today and made reservations on Five star. Been there?” Bette asks.
“Yes, a long time ago.” Tina replies. “It’s nice there, and the food is great.” She adds.
The drive took 10 minutes. Bette acts like a ‘Gentleman’ and opens the door for Tina. She took Tina’s hand and they walk inside. Tina is standing a little behind Bette and looks around. They are met by an waitress.
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(39 votes, average: 4.36 out of 5)
once again . love IT! but i just so sad when i hit next post by author and nothing happened. hmmmmmmmm …. pls post soon. thanx for your creativity!
tha moment!!! i know you update fast, still, i can’t hang on too long.
UHAUL
LMAO, oh tina say “YES”
Say yes you want to live with bette!!!!!!!!!
LOVE THIS… SAY YES TINA…
please don’t let us hand to long…
Awww… I also thought Bette will kneel in front of her sweethart in the next chapter, I couldn’t deny it – even if I always try to avoid any pressure on authors ! (lol)
God, I must confess it would be devastatingly melting…
That’s great to see so much honesty here, with Tina immediately telling about her ex. That’s how one can deserve a total trust from the loved one. And your Bette is sooo wise !
I’m pretty impatient now, Lauren… Please don’t eat, don’t watch tv, don’t do anything and come back to your computer to post the next chapter !!
Bad girl leaving us like that..Great chapter..DO WE HERE WEDDING BELLS…POST SOON
I Love it but come un don’t leave us hanging..Great story.. Please don’t let Tina say no…POST SOON PLEASE!!!!!
OMG she is going to propose??????..i´m am gonna cry..lol..this was amazing..OMG i´m so excited and sooo happy thanks Lauren amazingggggg
SAY YES TINA… You know it’s commminnggg!!!
I do call that a cliffhanger. I will be looking for more tonight. love it.
ooh…is she gonna propose??
Oh, no you didn’t. You are so bad for leaving us hangong like that. It seems like they need a little bit more passion in thier relationship.
I ment to comment after the last chapter that I was surprised that Tina did not offer to give Bette a rub down after she said that her legs were hurting. Please post again soon.
Yeah Bette, ask her to marry you ……and Tina….SAY YES!!!
oh this was good. but another cliffy. uuggg. since im a golfer i realy enjoy this aspect. cant play righ now, i broke my hand, but soon. post soon.
Ok this is going to be a good news and let see what’s that! Post soon plesae, thanks!
K
Wonderful chapter. So sweet. Can’t wait for more.
They would definitely be the hottest couple in Raleigh!!!
NO WAY! YOU CAN’T LEAVE IT AT THAT! Especially since I won’t be able to check back until sometime Monday. I’m eagerly waiting for your next post and the proposal (I hope).
She has to say yes, she has to say yes, she has to say yes, please say yes Tina! Please post soon!
ohhh! C’mon! Cliffhanger!!!! Pls! post soon!!!