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Marshall Daniel's Boarding School For Girls – (Chapter: Chapter 39 In Fairytales)
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I don’t answer. I can’t answer. I’m completely thrown by her casual tone. I haven’t spoken to this girl in over two years, and here she is, acting like we’re old friends. Couple that with the fact that I have four very intimating girls standing in front of me, scowling at her, and you would think she’d be the slightest bit nervous.
Laurie: “I know you.” Eight heads snap to look at their tall thin friend as she stares at Ashley. But Ashley’s expression is blank. Her smirk is gone. “You’re Raife Davies’ daughter….Ashley right?” Ashley doesn’t answer; she just gives the girl a blank look as she sits low in her chair. At the mention of Ashley’s name, my four friends became even stiffer, if that is at all possible.
Carmen: “No shit, we’ve got a celebrity in our town!” Her sarcastic slur tells me she’s drunk. Maybe that’s where all this false confidence is coming from. But she still hasn’t looked at Ashley.
Eve: “How are you, Spencer?” Finally, a genuine person. Eve was sweet, she had always liked me. She lived a town over and I had met her at a random party that I crashed, looking for food and alcohol. I found both, and I found Eve.
Spencer: “Your hair looks good.” I tell her, lamely in a barely there voice. She blushes and ducks her head and out of the corner of my eye I see Ashley’s snarl is back.
Carmen: “Aren’t you going to introduce us to your friends, Spence?” Her gaze lands on Sara and she gives her the once over…and over, and over.
Sara: “Keep looking at me like that and I swear to God, my needle sowing your eyes shut will be the last thing you’ll ever see.” Carmen’s smirk falters as Kelly lets out a ghost of a chuckle.
Carmen: “What the fuck is so funny?” She spits at Kelly, who is still smiling a little.
Kelly: “You’re so fucking sexy when you talk like that, baby.” She tells her girlfriend, turning her head slightly to look at her. Sara gives her a sexy smirk before both girls look back to the new arrivals.
New thought one: Carmen just openly hit on a girl.
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I simply adore Gage’s mom. Haha I’ve decided that she’s in my top five favorite characters. Haha. Fantastic job as usual darling. =D
First comment! Ballin’! Haha
as always where to start?!? my favorite thought of spence’s ‘If I have a brain aneurism I wonder if Gage can operate drunk’ that one had me rollin. carmen’s got a hell of a lot of nerve, the bitch. gage’s mom is the shit! I can’t believe spence wants to stay another night and I’m dying to know what will happen at the party. and of course what’s gonna go down when she sees the ‘rents. LOL and the private jet thing… hell yea spence make ’em drool girl. wonderful update!! cannot wait for more!
stix i love you right now :) ..i really needed some cheering up and your stories ALWAYS do it for me.. :D ..wow Gage’s mom was seriously cracking me up!..i love it!..and the fight was crazy!..i can’t wait to see what happens at the party!..assuming they go!..haha..but yeah PMS please.. :) ..and i can’t wait for more SD and KHK.. :D
STIX! Woooooo! I am not exactly looking forward to the party but *shrug* PMS
yesssssss
I just can’t get over how much I love this story and how excited I get when I see an update. Fantabulous job as always. Loved the list of thoughts, the new thoughts, and the new new thoughts. I especially loved how you began this chapter, like a fairytale. Very classy. I can’t wait for the last chapter of SD. pms!!
i might as well just quit writing in attempts to match up to your awesome abilities. you are truly fantastic. i can’t wait until the next update!
hahahah…. Gage’s mom… there are no words besides diva. The bar fight was truely enevitable, but when these ladies brawl, hot dog and damn they do it so well. I’m glad that everyone apologized (from both sides0 but i’m really not looking foreward to this party, cuz well, i still dont like carmen or her little friends I absolutly loved this chapter and i wait with baited breath for the next and all that come after it. pms soon please
I read this last night but I was too sleepy to write a lucid comment. Yeah, that’s my story and I’m sticking to it! Gage so reminds me of Mr. Miyagi in Karate Kid where he gets underestimated because of his small stature. But then watch out! She’s so ninja, I love it! I love all your original characters but I have to say that Gage is my all-time favorite. I love how she’s so deep, stoic, protective and sensitive but still vain enough to ask her mom to bring some hair dye. Can’t mess with the hair! Poor Mrs. Erikson, if she turned her nose up at having to bail them out from a downtown NY jail, I can imagine how she feels now. She’s being a cool mom though. The Inquisition was genius! The girls could learn a thing or two from her. As much as I want to hate Carmen I can sort of understand why she flaked when she did. It was probably the easier course, instead of having to fight to swim upstream, especially in such a small town with the clichéd small town mentality. So funny that Spencer finds jealous Ashley so hot. Is there going to be lesbian on lesbian bonding at the party???? Brilliant as always, Stix. I look forward to the perfect SD ending. p.s. and i’m a little scared as well but bring it on! Hugs for you, too!
wow what an awesome chapter. It still amazes me how good this story is! this was an exceptionally great chapter, so funny but kept me interested too. I can’t wait to see what happens with spencer and her parents. I really don’t like carmen though. I don’t trust her, I hope she doesn’t mess anything up! Anyways, pms!!!
wow how does this story get so many comments so fast? wait i know how ITS FREAKIN AWSOME!!!! lol love Mrs.E lol :P i love this story hope ashley doesnt end up killing carmen by the time they do leave lol :P anyways love it love it love it your just awsome lol pms please :D
I really loved Gage’s mum she was great. I wonder what will happen at the party……Can’t wait to find out ppms.
I’m in love with gage’s mom…she rocks and is so smart and doesn’t get on gage’s case about going to jail…i wonder how many times she has been in jail, i mean at least two times that we’ve read about but i’m sure there is more pms
Heh! You’ve made my day again! I’ve been sick and that is just what I needed to put me well on the road to recovery! High points? Spencer’s drunken rants are always hilarious, the whole fight scene rocked, Ashley’s reaction when Spencer mentioned sex with another girl made me smile, I want to marry Mrs Erikson, prison sex = hell yeah! and the comment not to bring the cuffs into the car…..it was all brilliant! Oh, I’m glad you threw in the jet comment too lol! Just re-affirms who the bitches are dealing with!! Um, I’m nervous about Spencer seeing her parents but can’t wait to read it either *sigh*! So all in all fucking brilliant…..but it always is! Stix, you rock babe! Good luck with finishing SD!!
this chapter was awesome!!! lol spencer being rocked to sleep by kelly and sara, i had to laugh at that.i agree with everyone else. gage’s mother is awesome. and carmen has GOT to get over herself. and the end with spencer telling them she travels by private jet now. absolutely hilarious. PMS. can’t wait to see spencer’s family in this. i love this story!!
Absolutely brilliant update. I think Gage’s mom needs her own story. This party could get ugly with Carmen chasing Spencer and Ashley watching. But I cant wait so post soon please
Mrs. Ericson ROCKS!I cant wait to read the reaction of spencer parents when they see her!!great chapter..loves IT..GO STIX!
How awesome is Gage’s mom!!! seriously, that woman was hilarious! Love her! I’m nervous about Spencer and her parents, but honestly, I’m a little nervous about the party and Carmen… Hopefully nothing happens with her and her lingering feelings… that would suck… stix you rock! I love this story and I love you for being such a kick ass writer!