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    Just another heartbreak – (Chapter: Part 2 (complete))

     

    We were gonna be a family.

     

    We had everything planned out. It was all perfect. Like a fairytale, a dream.

     

    People say that fairytales don’t exist, but at that time I could’ve proved them wrong. I could’ve told them my life story, and then they would have to believe in fairytales. How could they not?

     

    We’re close to date now.

     

    A few weeks ago, she had told me that her friend who was getting married was inviting mean and her for a double date with her fiancé. I hadn’t met her friends yet, and I thought that it was a good thing to do since they seemed so important to her. Her friends had planned their marriage to take place a week after we were gonna have dinner.

     

    So, we went. She said that it was nothing too formal, mainly a casual dinner out. We went out to this bistro type place, where we had a table outside. It was nice, romantic. There were candles, and from the table we had, all you could see were the city lights in a beautiful fashion.

     

    Her friends had finally arrived a little while later, and I got to meet two very nice people. He was quite charming, and he really was funny. She was a very polite and bashful person, quiet, but beautiful nonetheless. They talked about their wedding which was taking place the following week, and I talked about the plans that she and I had for the future.

     

    She was eerily quiet throughout the whole thing though, not at all like I had originally thought her to be. At the time, I thought she would be bouncing off the walls in excitement at me finally meeting her friends. I was worried for a second, but she kept assuring me she was fine, so I had let it slide.

     

    The couple really was nice, thought something had seemed off. Just from looking at them, I could tell that they weren’t in love. Not like me, I thought. They seemed to be very good to each other, but it just seemed off. Then, I somewhat recalled a story that she had told me about her friend being pressured by her mom to marry someone she didn’t love, and who didn’t love her back.

    Comments

    1. OMG i can’t even begin to explain how good this story was. out of anything that i have ever read this eas by far the most powerful and real story ever.It even made me shed a tear or two. You should really consider screenwriting. i look forward to reading future stories. :)

    2. I dont think any other story besides MD on here has evoked this much emotion from me. It was tragically beautiful and my heart broke into pieces as the story progressed. It was beautiful but sad and very well written I loved it and u are just utterly great for writting this hehe =]

    3. That was…I don’t know…words can’t even describe it. The whole time I was reading it, I was going on an emotional rollercoaster. I love fics that make me think and make me cry….this one did all that. I love the way you went the entire story without mentioning any names…it made this story so much more powerful and I felt my heartbreaking with the characters. The eight year old you did a great job creating part of this story, but the now you did a beautiful job making it whole. Thank You for sharing.

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