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    Just another heartbreak – (Chapter: Part 2 (complete))

     

    The nothing scares her. She finds her heart beating harder, not seeing the sight had been wishing to see, and yet at the same time, dreading to face. Step and another step, but still nothing.

     

    By this time, her heart grows scared and anxious.

     

    Her steps grow faster, until she surveillances the last room, her room, to find it empty, once again. The sight makes her panic. She quickly runs into each room again, frantically calling out a name to see if she had missed her, nothing.

     

    She heads back into the living room in order to call to see if someone had seen her. She goes, but quickly halts. Her eyes find a glimmer in the room, and a picture of the girl she seeks, a rare one at that. She walks towards the glimmer, finding the object that had caused the glare on top of the solo picture of her former lover.

     

    She picks up the object, before her eyes open wide at words that echo in her mind.

     

    “I’ll will never take it off, as long as I live.”

     

    She quivers, and stares at the picture. The sight of it reminds her of something else, when there was nothing left of family, and her lover was alone.

     

    “You’re all I have left.”

     

    Words fail to reach outside of her mouth. She can’t speak and she collapses on her knees, shaking. She sees the picture again, watching as beautiful eyes stared not at the camera, but at her. The girl in the picture remaining nothing short of a vision with a heavenly smile, a vision now gone.

     

    She breaks down, the two lines echoing in her head, and they start to fit the pattern of the cold room. She notices it. The room is cold. It’s probably at a temperature no lower then normal, but it’s cold and it’s lonely, and she thinks about how that was what she went through. That she was alone.

     

    Tears run down her face, and she tries to call out the girl’s name but in vain. So she screams to make up for it. She screams, not words, but indescribably sounds, having realized the extent of her action. She screams, in her haste, from the corner of her eye, she notices the blinking light.

     

    A glimmer of hope washes over her, and so she crawls on her knees to the blinking light, pressing the hard button, that would make all the difference in the world. She listens as the record plays back.

     

    At first there is no sound, but she listens closer, and hears the harsh crashing of waves.

     

    “So let go ( let go)

    Jump in

    Whatcha waiting for

    Cause it’s so amazing here

    It’s alright, cause there’s beauty in the breakdown.”

     

    Soft whispers, a beautiful tune, and a familiar voice.

     

    The sound of a large crash against waves and water. The girl who flinches at the sound, and falls in to despair after hearing it.

     

    She breaks down again, knowing what had happened, knowing what her actions had caused, knowing the pain she had inflicted, knowing that her former lover and best friend was now gone.

     

    So let go (let go)

    Jump in

    Whatcha waiting for

    Cause it’s so amazing here

    It’s alright, cause there’s beauty in the breakdown

     

    —————————————————————————–

    I mean, I’m just another ugly old witch that dies in the movie. All I’ll be is another drop in an ocean of tears.


     

    After all, this just another heartbreak.

     

    Fini. Owari. Tapos Na. Das Ende. Oh Fim. El Final. The End

    Comments

    1. OMG i can’t even begin to explain how good this story was. out of anything that i have ever read this eas by far the most powerful and real story ever.It even made me shed a tear or two. You should really consider screenwriting. i look forward to reading future stories. :)

    2. I dont think any other story besides MD on here has evoked this much emotion from me. It was tragically beautiful and my heart broke into pieces as the story progressed. It was beautiful but sad and very well written I loved it and u are just utterly great for writting this hehe =]

    3. That was…I don’t know…words can’t even describe it. The whole time I was reading it, I was going on an emotional rollercoaster. I love fics that make me think and make me cry….this one did all that. I love the way you went the entire story without mentioning any names…it made this story so much more powerful and I felt my heartbreaking with the characters. The eight year old you did a great job creating part of this story, but the now you did a beautiful job making it whole. Thank You for sharing.

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