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Beautiful, simply beautiful
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“Open your eyes baby. I want you to see what you do to me.” Ashley commanded softly as she began to tug at my turtleneck.
I held my breath and raised up my arms for her to be able to get it off. When she had it off I just waited to hear the gasp of horror. I was bracing myself for it. But it wasn’t there. I looked in to her eyes as she softly ran her fingers over my chest. Over my scars and what I saw wasn’t repulsion. It was love. It was desire. Her beautiful chocolate eyes had turned almost black.
“So beautiful. So, so beautiful.” Ashley murmured as she began to rain soft kisses all over my skin
I couldn’t help the moan that escaped my lips as soon as I felt her lips on my skin. On my scars. I felt her hands on my back unclasping my bra while I began to undue the buttons of her shirt. I wanted to see her too. I needed to feel her against me.
She was so sweet. So gentle with me. I didn’t even notice when she had my bra off. I couldn’t. all I was able to pay attention was the emotions she was making me feel. God, she was making me so wet. She made me feel so beautiful. She made me feel like everybody else. I was able to get her shirt off just as she wrapped her lips on my nipple and began to suck it softly.
I arched against her, buried my hands in her head and pulled her closer to me as I moaned, “That feels so good. So, so good.”
“Mmm,” Ashley moaned as she took her bra off and began to take off my jeans.
Again I tensed up. I just couldn’t help it. Just couldn’t. I grabbed her hands to stop her and she stopped what she was doing but didn’t move her hands from the jeans.
“Baby, let me see you. Let me make love to you. I love you so much. Please let me show you.” Ashley said softly as she slowly began to unzip them
I swallowed the lump in my throat and nodded. She quickly pulled them down as I stepped out of my shoes. I watch her closely. I watch to see if any sign of repulsion crosses those beautiful eyes of her. This time I hear a gasp but it’s not one of horror but it’s one of awe.
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so..yeah.. i read it again… love it so.
this was amzing. everything you said made tears come to my eyes. i have found my true love and im only 13. the girl just doesnt know yet:]this was just breathtaking. PMS!
aww that was wonderful and very touching :D at first i thought u were writing from personal experience. I can’t wait to find that kind of love myself but at 16 its kind of hard but oh well when it comes it comes so until then i’ll just help other people and read ur fanfic. :D good luck wit ur relationship :D PMSLater Dayz
wow!… that was simply amazing! I’ve found my true love and just everyword of this story.. just felt so real! and it was just amazing! you’re an awsome writer!! Amazing!
So perfect. So beautiful. And you are so right. The eyes of true love can see straight through to the heart. *tears* Simply put … I loved it.
Aw that was so beautiful. I can’t wait to find my ture love. I’m only 16 but still it can happen right? Lol. Anyways this was great! Its was awesome! =)
speechless, that put a smile on my face at the love ash showed for spencer
That was great.
Ok that was written so beautifully that I had tears in my eyes! You are such an amazing writer. If only there were more people out there that loved people for there mind and soul and not just appearances. Anyways that was an awesome story and like always love your writings!
It’s a beautiful thing when that kind of magic can happen in real life. Because, thats what it is-a breathtaking and indescribable bliss- truly magical. I’m so happy you are still writing, and more than that, i’m happy you are so happy and have found love. It’s a wonderful feeling; this happiness, I can say from experience it is simply amazing.
wonderful story, it’ was very toucning in everyway. and brought me a smile.great job!