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Always Her – (Chapter: chapter sixteen)
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I looked away, I was starting to lose myself in those eyes. I didn’t want to cry again and if I kept looking that is exactly what would have happened. There was chatter all around the diner but we were stuck in our own bubble of silence and tension. Tension so thick it could suffocate.
"Sleep okay?"
It was all I could think to ask. I didn’t want to delve right into the heavy stuff. It was early, too early for that kind of raw emotion. I needed to be prepared for whatever was to come at me. She chuckled softly.
"Yeah. Thank you for that. Although if I remember correctly I said I wasn’t going to leave the hallway."
I smiled despite myself. She could always make me smile.
"So.. how exactly did you find me? Ryan?"
"Yeah. After leaving him about fourteen voice mail messages he finally agreed to meet me. He told me you were up here but didn’t know where. I tried a lot of other places before I found you. It was looking pretty bad but I wasn’t going to give up."
"What exactly happened after I left?"
I was curious. Apparently my leaving had brought out her confidence and I wanted to know more about it. She let out a heavy sigh.
"I found Dad but he said you had left. Jayce came up to me and I told him it was over. That someone else had my heart. Mom was pretty much flipping out wanting to know what was going on. I took one look at Dad and realized he knew. I think I already knew that he knew but, like a lot of things, I repressed it. He told me to wait if I needed to but I couldn’t. I told Mom right there at the restaurant and then I left to go to your house. But you were already gone."
She paused and sniffled. I saw the unshed tears forming in her eyes.
"I didn’t do anything for the next few days. Finally I decided to talk to Dad. I went to see him, but found Mom instead. I let it all out. She said that she and Dad had talked and that she doesn’t understand it but if we love each other then it should be enough for her. I found Dad at his office and he told me to call Ryan. I didn’t think Ryan was ever going to answer me. I didn’t think I’d ever see you again."
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I have literally been crying off and on since chapter six, (more on than off ;). Your story has so much raw emotion, I’m a bit overwhelmed at times! I really think that Spence should be all like ‘Ash! I know what your thinking and you are good enough, your better than good enough your great!’ and then Ash should just fall into her arms sobbing and crying about all the stuff she is feeling and then they should live happily ever after! But from what I can tell you like your sad, heartbroken, angstyness(I know not a word, but Oh well…), so I doubt that’s what happens…Great story, your an amazing writer! I hope you post a new chapter soon! Until then I bid you Adu(SP?) OH! and sorry if this seems sort of ramblyish…I’m running on about two and a half hours of sleep here…:)
that’s so hard for ash cause seriously she went a really long time being with a girl who just up and decided one day that she was gonna have a boyfriend too. come on spence, step up ur game! awesome post, sad its almost over! but pms soon
Oh my! That was a treat to wake up to :0)soooo glad you found time to post. I was half expecting Ash to be gone in the morning as I know you like your angst so I was pleasantly surprised she was ready to talk. Karma is a great righter of wrongs, if it’s shown Ash that she’s been no better than Spencer at times it’s all for the good and Spashleyness can abound…please?? It’s Saturday morning so I’m not quite with it yet, I’d rather be in bed so my reviewing skills are not fully functioning just yet lol! It was great, can’t wait for the next chapter even though it’s the last *sobs* Glad I could cheer you up a bit and it wasn’t too lame xx LD P.S. PMS!!! lol!
I agree with Littledragonfly its a great thing to have this morning. Thank you for posting. Karma really is a great thing. Ash is good enough but right now its up to Spencer to so her that she is again. Well awesome post. Good job. Waiting for the next one. :)
I love it I’m at work reading this and it’s worth getting in trouble but I feel like Ash sometimes I wonder what it would be like if I just left would she even care but me don’t know anyways keep up with what you’re doing can’t wait and see what Ashley does… Pms!!
You write with so much emotion I forget their not real. I love the story for that reason. I just wish it was longer
awesome!!! pms!!!
Great update! The emotion you can capture in your writing is just ridiculous. It’s amazing how you can do that. I love this story because of it.
i just started reading your story and i love it i can’t wait for you to post more i love how you do the point of views hell i just love your story all the raw emotions are really great in the story spence really shouldn’t have cared what everyone else thought about her love for ash and just went for it but anyway can’t wait for more post soon?please…….PMS PLEASE