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Masked Feelings CH 73 Linked to the Past
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When it came down to brass tacks, neither one of the two liked the direction their lives kept taking. The only thing that kept them connected was the sex. When one or more factors were missing from a relationship, it was easy to over compensate another way…. in their relationship it was the sex. As satisfying as it was on the physical level, it was taking away the communication that was severely lacking.
Alice was showering as Dana was getting dressed to go out. Her back was feeling the sting as Alice clung to her in the bathroom. She walked over to the mirror and looked at her backside. There were red scratch marks on her back…. and they weren’t from Alice. They could’ve been caused from being tackled, but it didn’t look like road rash. These marks appeared to be caused by fingernails. If that was the case, what happened and why did last night feel like a blur?
Dana slipped on her shirt and made a mental note to pick up something to put on the scratches. A few of them broke the surface of the skin. She was thankful that Alice didn’t notice. It was going to be hard to explain how they got there in the first place, especially when she didn’t have any answers. It was bad enough that the lies were piling up.
Alice came into the room with a towel wrapped around her. Her hair was mussed from towel drying her hair. Dana thought she looked so beautiful when she was in a natural state. She thought back to the night at that motel after their mud wrestling bout. Even when she was covered in mud, she was adorable.
Alice – What are you thinking about?
Dana – Nothing…
Alice – Uh huh.
Dana – Why don’t you crawl under those covers and take a nap while I’m gone. I won’t be away for too long.
Alice – Don’t you need to check out?
Dana – I’ll just pay for another day if I have to.
Alice – When is your flight out?
Dana – Whenever your’s is…
Alice – I don’t have one.
Dana – Then I guess we’ll leave when we get one together. I’ll take care of it.
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Damn, I’m truly honored that you dedicated this chapter to me. I think, I grew another four inches after reading it, lol. THANK YOU! And for the record,I didn’t force you to write, was just asking politely, lol. At least, it definitely repaid that I had such a long break from you. And it wasn’t easy not talking to you:-( Thanks for forgiving me. That makes my day:-) Yes, you’re right. I only love you for your story, lol. How did you find out? lolRoxy is still one of my favorite characters. Definitely love her but I don’t have the hots for her. Not yet. Maybe if you described her looks I would be all over her, lol. That chapter was outstanding. You know how much I love dialogues. Finally, Kristen found out that Roxy the devil was evil enoughto scheme an intrigue against her. At least, Derek knows that Kristen’s pregnant. Still think, their marriage won’t work out just because Kristen isfixated on Dana. What will she do with Roxy now that she knows that she didn’tplay fairly? I would like to see a massacre but I know that Kristen’s a softie. Don’t pregnant women also change their behavior? lol Glad, that Dana found someone who could tell her something about Roxy and hercircumstances in her youth. Hope it’ll help her to understand what made Roxy to be the person she is. I fear, that it’ll be soon over between Dana and Alice. Maybe at its best since they don’t trust each other. They made a huge step by letting out all the things that were kept closed. The time was right to have that serious talk. But I do believe a break would be the right decision for the time being ’cause their relationship is based on sex only. Love without trust doesn’t exist. Mud wrestling as a therapy seems to be a great idea, lol. Why not? It’s fun and it would bring the people closer together, lol. Like my idea? Hmmmmmm, I would love it if you gave me a lap dance. Just don’t know if you’re too shy for this. Are you? If not I’m booking the next flight over, lol. Guess, I still need Andrea’s phone number. You can never know enough, lol. As for the tape she handed over to Roxy….I know Roxy will be having fun watching it and taking advantage of that to get to Alice. Can’t blame her. Maybe you could hook Dana up with Kate Beckinsale when things are starting to fall apart with Alice? lolI’m sure, she wouldn’t mind at all. Thanks for this brillant update, darlin’. Hope to read your next post soon:-) And no, I’m not only hooked on your story but maybe that one should remain a secret, lol. You are definitely the best!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I was the first to comment:-))))) Must be my lucky day! So again, great chapter, brillant plot, superb dilaogues and a genius author:-) Did I charm off your pants by now? If not I have to practice, lol. I’m looking forward to your next chapter, darlin’. Am kind of certain I won’t have to wait too long this time, lol. Kisses and Hugs:-) Brteyes-Fan for life!
OMG, this is another excellant chapter. I am thrilled to see D & A figuring things out together. I hope that they will be have the patience and love for each other to ride through Andrea’s evil scheme. I am pretty sure that Roxy will maximize the use of the tape. I have loved this story from the start and the twists and turns made it even more exciting. I really don’t mind all the bad situations they have endured as long as every now and then these two get to work things out with hope. PPS.
Thank God they are communicating – kinda sorta … lol
hmm, while better than before, they’re still not communicating much and things are just getting worse. The lying is another thing I’m really concerned about. If they can’t be honest with each other for more than five minutes, what the hell is the point?
WoW!! Another brilliant chapter. I’m glad my 2 fave girls are finally communicating,even there’s still some lying going on. Wonder how Kristen is gonna handle being back with Derek while still having feelings for Dana. Or is she gonna get back with Derek? And why oh why won’t Roxy and Andrea just go away? Keep up the good work and give us some NC-17 next time will ya? PPS
love love love this story tis the bomb lol all the drama is great and you write it so well too..when will it all be okay for them it always something after the another not that im complaining or anything :) keep up the good work!!!!!!!