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Masked Feelings CH 64 The Unforeseen
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Alice – How long can you stay?
Dana – I should probably go in the next few minutes. Someone might figure out I’m missing.
Alice – Someone being Alison?
Dana could hear the annoyance in her voice.
Dana – You’re not worried about her staying, are you?
Alice – I think you know the answer to that.
Dana – Nothing is going to happen. Would I be over here if I was interested in her?
Alice – I’ve only met her the one time….
Dana – And you’re wondering what kind of person she is.
Alice – Well… yeah.
Dana – She’s harmless. We’re old friends.
Alice – Yeah, old friends that haven’t seen each other for years.
Dana – What’s your point, Al?
Alice – People change, Dana. What has she done all these years since you last saw her?
Dana – I don’t know.
Alice – She’s never talked about her past? You weren’t curious enough to ask?
Dana – We talked a little.
Alice – Yeah, I imagine you didn’t have much time to talk when you were together.
Dana – What I did before shouldn’t factor in to what’s going on with us now. I only saw her a couple times anyway… and not very long.
Alice – She doesn’t know about us, does she?
Dana – I was planning to tell her tomorrow.
Alice – Why the wait?
Dana – I didn’t have the best day today. I spent most of it worrying about you. Not to mention, the tension at the house is so fucking unbelievable.
Alice – I’m sorry for making you worry.
Dana – It’s ok… just talk to me next time.
Alice – So what’s going on at the house?
Dana – Can I tell you about it tomorrow? I’d rather spend the next couple minutes holding you.
Alice – I want more then a couple minutes. I want a whole night…. and every night after.
Dana – It’ll happen…. maybe not as quickly as we want, but it will happen.
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Alison had dozed off with the lamp on. She thought maybe Dana would decide that she wasn’t comfortable on the couch and come to bed…. but her side of the bed was empty. Maybe it was time to try to wake her up again, at least Kristen wouldn’t be mouthing off to her this time. Alison went into the living room and found that the couch was empty. She searched the house but she was nowhere to be found.
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You are to sweet leaving this update before you take of. And another great one too. Kirsten is turning out to be a handfull…Dana better be careful. Roxy and Alice locked in, that can’t be good! Look forward to you rocking my world next year with more updates. Last but not least I wish you a wonderful vacation, have a great time!
Aww man that was so awesome. Have a great time away! :) I cannot wait for the next post now though. Who’s gonna rescue Alice and Roxy or will they be smart enough to escape? Will Alice come back to find her woman being moved in on but by Kristen? Who knows?! Anything goes in this story and that’s why I looooove it xx Have a good one
Alright … fine … no sex … I already knew that. I really liked this update … even if you weren’t wild about it. And I don’t hate you for the ending … at least not yet. I love that you posted one last time before your trip. Don’t forget to enjoy yourself & to bring a notebook with you. Your reward is definitely dependent on that. Catch ya later babe.
YAY! I love the angst in this chapter. Well done, Maestro:-) When I read your note I wasn’t thinking you would be that convincing. Damn, great job! I love the interaction between Alison and Kristen. First mentioned is a little beast, totally jealous of everything andeveryone who’s around Dana. Kristen seems to play along pretty well. Both of them are way too bitchy. But isn’t that what we all like? lol So, Alison the broad finally hits the road. Let’s just hope it’s really New York she’s going to, lol. And now, the one milliondollar question: whom does she pave the way when she’s away? Right, Kristen. When you guessed right: Sorry, I can’t pay you that amount of money, lol. I should have known that Kristen is more attracted to Dana but I only have Dana and Alice on my mind, lol. That would be a curious couple though. Nah, I won’t even go there, lol. I don’t want to becrucified by all the Danish fans out there:-) Almost forgot: where did you take the name of the niece from? lol Erin is a nice name by the way:-) Alice always has to be the curious one. Doesn’t she know that normally you should start searching on the top floor when looking for something or someone in a house you haven’t ever been at? Maybe it’s because she’s blond? lol I truly hope Roxy finds a way out ’cause I don’t want to see them both dead. Yeah, I said both, lol. But with David you never know:-( Let’s just be prepared for the worst, more angst, more cruel situations and more MDK (murder death kill):-) I’ll be missing you and your regular updates though I love that story! Wish you a Merry Christmas and the best startin the New Year! Enjoy your free time and your vacation but pleeeeeeeeaaaaassseeeeeeee,come back soon:-) Love you, my dear! Have a wonderful time:-)
Hey brteyes! Just sent you a pm and noticed that you had posted not one but two chapters…woohoo! I havent got the time to read them now, i like to digest them slowly and give them the credit that they deserve. I will save them for over the holidays. Have a great time babe and we will talk in the new year!!
One word – Brilliant!!!. Have a fantastic Christmas break. Look forward to more from you in 2007.
Amazing chapter, everything is coming together so nicely…well its not really nice for Alice and Roxy seems like one shit sandwhich after another for Alice she’ll get out of it somehow. Roxy, Roxy, Roxy, she’s so busy thinking about Alice that look what she got herself into and I’m a little worried about Kristen too her new found feelings spell trouble for Dana. I didnt comment on the last chapter I read it out of town and I didnt think you’d update so quickly. Both chapters were amazing and I think its really funny that Roxy now shares two of Dana’s interests…this is the chart on a whole new scary level. I like that this chapter had a little CSI mixed in there and I can’t wait for the next chapter babe. I love you
What a surprise! I had no clue you posted again before you took off. Well Merry Christmas to me!!! Love the chapter, but how dare you keep us all hanging like this. Would I be a fool if I guessed that Ma and Pa Perkins were decomposing in the barrels? Goodness, the suspense might just kill me until you next post. Hopefully your journey will lend you much inspiration! Happy New Year!
Is it wrong that I don’t know which to be worried more about David doing more than just trapping Roxy and Alice or Roxy talking Alice into sharing body heat to fight the cold? Sorry I didn’t get a chance to comment before you posted this.
Thank you so much for leaving us with this update gift. I knew Kristen was going to be a problem. grrrr… :-) I agree, how could Roxy be so stupid? Super Agent? hmmm… It was so cool that Dana was honest with Alison. I don’t think we’ve seen the last of her, but for the time being – SEE YA! Have a wonderful vacation.