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Masked Feelings CH 63 The Late Night Snack
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Alice wanted to start her morning off right. Knowing that Dana was probably back from her morning run, she gives her a call on her cell. Dana immediately picks up, seeing that it’s Alice who’s calling.
Dana – Hey babe.
Alice – Hi, baby…. you must be alone.
Dana – For the moment… but not for long. I’m making breakfast for Kristen and myself.
Alice – Well, aren’t you sweet. I wish I could join you.
Dana – If you were here… it would be breakfast in bed.
Alice – If that was the case, I wouldn’t let you leave long enough to make breakfast.
Dana – Oh I wouldn’t leave… you would be breakfast.
Alice – You are so bad, baby.
Dana – And you love it.
Alice – Are you going to be able to sneak away today?
Dana – I can sure try. Where do you want to meet?
Alice – I’ll have to get back to you on that.
Dana – I need to say something before Kristen walks in.
Alice – What?
Dana – I love you, Al.
Alice – I love you too, Dana.
Dana – I wish I could say it in person.
Alice – I wish I could show you how much I love you.
Dana – Mmmm, I’d love that. What would you do?
Alice – Umm… Dana… are you sure you want to do this now?
Dana – Oh… right. Kristen could walk in.
Alice – I’ll find a way to let you know how I feel.
Dana – How?
Alice – Just leave it to me. You better go before Kristen walks in.
Dana – Have a great day. I’ll call you later.
Alice – I’m looking forward to it. Bye, baby.
Dana – Bye, babe.
Dana hung up just in time as Kristen rounded the corner.
Kristen – Smells good in here.
Dana – Just a little speciality of mine.
Kristen – Going to tell me what it is?
Dana – Nope.
Kristen – Looks like an omelet to me.
Dana – Not just any omelet, you don’t know what’s in it. If you want to do something, maybe you can make some toast.
Kristen – I can manage that.
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SWEET DREAMS??? Are you kidding me? after this post I’ll probably have the best dream EVER… ohh Alice the pillow queen… it was so adorable of Dana to show up like that. The tension drove me insane. I admit with a blush, even I was about to cum. And you left me at the edge of my bed.. I could have sworn that they were about to get caught. I expected a member of TiBette to barge in any second and ruin it for us. But you, my sweet, didn’t let that happen. I’m a little torn between having faith in Kristen and doubting her… I mean, I did come to a point to accuse her for being a future yet another Danish psycho potential lover.. But then again her inner thoughts proved me wrong. Thank god. As for Allie she sure is a potential!! And forgive me if I’m being cruel but I see a Lara in her. Aside from being a cook, she felt a little too at home in Danas house than she should have. Kinda like Lara.. I wonder whom the “Family” hides… Is it Lara? could Gina still be alive? Fanfiction is a twisted world. everything is expected lol. and god i hope Alice wouldn’t fall for all the heroic acts that Roxy performs. she is all for words. on the other hand Dana did get stabbed for Alice. HAH. lol Unfortunately I now have a Roxy image in my head. I’m not sure whether saying this is spoilerish or not but I’m going to anyway. Sorry if it is. Roxy has become “Tasha” in my head. I simply collided a real TLW character (whom I already hate) and your Roxy(whom I’ve been hating for a while)…please post again this week… its most likely needed over here. Well I have been yearning for this post and am totally satisfied with it. as the time runs out and the day I’m dreading the most is about to come I would love to enjoy another post from you… what I mean by the “day” is jan the 7th. Why? HAH ask IC!! Its gonna be hard without Dana.. soo hard lol. From this day on I’m calling you my Favorite Danish Fix-er lol… those text messages left me speechless btw…. : )
Love it. Thank you.
I’ve grown to dislike Allie more each time she makes an appearance. She does seem to have psycho tendencies. I loved reading the thoughts of Kristen and Allie. They are far too possessive of Dana, but I’m enjoying their battle. I hope Kristen learns that Roxy set her up – and makes up with her husband soon. Thanks for the end especially. I love that Dana went to see Alice, and that Alice is ready to commit.
I can’t even begin to tell you how much it means to me that you dedicated this chapter to me. That was entirely too sweet of you & it so incredibly awesome. I’m always thrilled to inspire hot Danish action for you. I’ll try to do my best stroking that ever growing ego of yours. I imagine being such a twisted, sadistic, dirty tease is hard work & awfully time consuming. You definitely supplied us with a Danish moment to remember, with hopefully more hot/sweet/sweaty/steamy scenes to follow. I think it goes without saying that Roxy does not make me warm & fuzzy … but she is almost preferable to Allie, who seems to be Lara reincarnated … don’t like her one bit … I so want Dana to show her ass the door … made me giggle when Dana told Kristen she only thought she would be around a day or so … as if she didn’t think she would stay after being blown off. Roxy is still a lying whore & I’m waiting for the other shoe to drop … I know you have something planned. This chapter was definitely hot, but I think you need to raise the temperature a bit higher before you leave for your holiday. I’m still waiting for you to one-up yourself. I already know that passion makes you tick … as for what I’ll do with that bit of information … well I haven’t exploited it yet. As for becoming your writing partner … we may just have a future yet. I know you’re trying to break me & I’m enjoying it thoroughly.
Just a quick comment I’m busy as hell! Great fantastic amazing update..what more can I say. You deserve to win an award for this story. I loved the lovemaking and happy Danish ;-) Happy holidays, hope you can manage another update before you go on a well deserved vacation.
The only thing that got me thorugh my day at work was knowing I would come home to this story! Seriously I’ve been feeling so lousy and this story is always sooooo good. This chapter wow, I applaude your 16 pages. I really don’t like Alison and not in the way I hate roxy cause I think its fun to hate her and she does make me laugh at times. Alison is just a scary Tonya/Lara cross who needs a good bitch slap and a reality check! I think Alice should be the one to deliver, ok what I really want is a naked mud wrestling showdown lol j/k …well if you’re thinking about it I won’t complain :P As for the danish make up sex, loved it, so fucking hot and it ended the best way possible. If only Alice could find herself a place so they didn’t have to sneak around. I can’t decide whether its Lara or Gina but I’m gonna go with Gina that Bobby wants to keep an eye on whilst they recover, why woul dhe go to the trouble of looking out for the girl who killed his daughter? Hmmm I might go all cluedo on your ass. Ok I’m totally rambling now and if you’re still reading kudos to you! I can’t wait for the next chapter I have no doubts that it will be equally fantastic, if not better, no pressure like :P Have a good hiatus and hope you’re well. xx
that allison is leaving a sour taste in my mouth.
One helluva chapter – I don’t know how you do it, but I am so grateful that you do. Totally hooked so don’t be gone too long.
Well someone got hit hard by the writing bug! Sixteen pages, my word! Good job, you packed a lot into this one and left us with a real bang if you will. And what a lovely bang it was. No wonder it takes you so long to post first you have sit there and imagine all the sick, demented, twisted stuff. Then you have to lean back, close your eyes and think of every little detail of the sex scenes. I applaud you for your dedication and drive to “get it right”. Allison sure is turning out to be a real peach. And Kristen, well she’s just adborable with her needy possessiveness. I think they should both run off into the sunset with Roxy and live happily ever after and leave our sweet Danish alone. Oh and that leads me to my next favorites, the mobsters. Who is it that they are hiding my dear? Could it be Lara? What evil have you got tucked up the sleeve of your Christmas sweater? Well, as always another amazing post leaving me with a craving for more. Hopefully the wait won’t be too long, but I understand with the holidays and your pending vacation that time is precious. I will just be sitting here chewing my nails down until there is nothing left, waiting for your next post. Happy New Year you wonderfully twist soul!
OH MY GAWD!!! That was so fucking steamy!! I think, a new superlative of HOT is created by this chapter. It’s not hot, hotter the hottest but hot, hotter, brteyes!!! You outclass yourself every time. How do you do that? The beginning was very inviting but the ending was so much better. Sms sex? lol Fantastic idea by the way! First, I thought Dana has received a text message from the detective she hired ’cause she acted so serious around Kristen. You tease! I should have seen it coming, but you always surprise me. Roxy won’t laugh all too long, too. Now, that Alice and Dana are officialy a couple (FINALLY!!!) Alison might be out of their ways. Well, maybe I shouldn’t say it. You turn it around again, as far as I know you, lol. As for Alison, she’s not sensitiveat all, cold I might say the complete opposite of our goofy Dana. I’m on the side of Kristen with her dislike of this rather ‘uninvited’ guest. Kristen says Alison has too much self-esteem. I prefer calling her a cocky bitch, lol. Do you share my opinion? Who might be the mysterious person lying in coma in Bobby’s house? Could it be Lara??I can’t imagine that Gina is the one they’re talking about. But once again, I shouldn’t guess, lol. Now, it’ll be hard for Roxy to prove that Alice was pretty innocent in Gina’s case but I really hope Roxy won’t dissapoint us. Please Roxy, we love you:-) Can’t wait to see what you make out of the ‘Family’, especially Tony the macho gangster, lol.I have to make you a big compliment. Every single time I get to read the sex scenes in your story it gets right into my head. It’s like watching a movie and seeing everything but what makes it even better you feel like you experience it by yourself. You describe it so incredibly real!! No wonder, I have to cool myself down after reading this, lol. Like always, your chapter made my day brighter. A very huge THANKS!!! So, you think you created a monster out of me?? Hey, I’m a gremlin already, lol. Don’t worry about this:-) I totally forgot to mention that 16 pages is your new record. Am I right? Congratulationsto that if it’s true:-) I truly hope we get to read some more Danish happiness and another hilarious installment before you leave for Christmas and yourvacation. You deserve a break, but please don’t forget us! Loved this chapter!!! Keep it going, darlin’…