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Masked Feelings CH 62 Body Shots
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They continued to sway to the music. Alice laid her head on Dana’s shoulder, like it was the most natural thing in the world.
Dana – I’ve missed this.
Alice – What?
Dana – Dancing with you. It’s been a long time. Do you remember the last time?
Alice – Yeah… it was the party for Jenny.
Dana – That was a special night for me, because that’s when I really knew what you meant to me. I wish Tina hadn’t interrupted our moment.
Alice – Yeah, it seemed like the perfect night but it was ruined by more then an interruption. Every moment we have is spoiled by a bad memory…. take your pick between Lara and Gina.
Dana – Damn I hated her… still can’t believe you ever dated her. She was such a bitch.
Alice – Well Lara was no angel… she was the one to stage that bedroom scene that night. If I would’ve known what was really going on, I would’ve kicked her fucking ass out of the bed. I might not have caught on if you didn’t talk in your sleep.
Dana – You know I can’t help that….
Alice – Did you really love her?
Dana – I guess a part of me did, but when I found out what she did to you…. I wanted to kill her with my bare hands. You have to know that I couldn’t be with someone that could hurt you like that. I think you know what we have is much stronger then anything I could’ve ever had with her. I really do love you… it’s something that I feel, never questioned it.
Alice – But you loved her enough to marry her.
Dana – I wasn’t thinking straight… besides, I thought you hated me.
Alice – I could never hate you, Dana.
Dana – Well at least Roxy did one thing right… making sure that Lara and I never got married.
Alice – I was so relieved when I found out. It killed me to think that she’d spend the rest of her life with you. I knew she’d never let you go… and it took that desperate act to prove what lengths she was willing to go to. You almost died.
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I was just checking the site to see if any updates of my favorite stories were up. And lucky me…my favorite story! Hope you will feel better real soon, but being under the weather and writing these kinds up updates…wow..I mean I need a very cold shower before going to bed. Roxy and Alison..man that was really good. And the love making between Alice and Dana..but Alison refering to Dana as her girlfriend that was intreging. Looking forward to the next chapters. Oh and the nominations..long live Danish stories and they should have a seperate category, you deserve to win so that’s why you got my vote! Till next time my friend and will go and have me some of those sweet dreams now!!
What a twist and turn on!!!! First of all, thanks for these hilarious, mind blowing sex scenes. I can never get enough of them, not when you write them so damn fantastic and completely overwhelmingly real. Thanks for bringing Alice and Dana together in that chapter,physically it is, lol. And I loved the way they talk and act with each other. It’s so adorably cute:-) Awwwwwww, I’m melting…I wish IC could have shoot more love scenes between these sexy women. And Kit’s a complete dumbass for showing up that early and destroying this warm and touching atmosphere. What a dragon, ts. I’m wondering if Dana and Alice really want to make it up to her. I would just search a better place to spend some time with the love of my life. But I imagine a table in the Planet would also heat up the tension, lol. Great idea by the way. Maybe I should check it out by myself, lol. What really cracked me up was the dildo thing. I knew you would bring it up sooner or later, lol. Roxy doesn’t seem to be nice in bed to strangers. I hope, I won’t meet her, lol. But I totally understand why she had been this way to this “mysterious woman”. Of course, everybody figures out it’s Alison at the end. WOW! That’s what always impresses me when I read one of your chapters. It’ll be very interesting to find out what happens next. Will Roxy still fight for Alice or will she try it with Alison. I won’t imagine what Roxy is going to do after hearing Alison say that she’s the girlfriend of Dana. I think, she gets a shock and kicks herself pretty hard,lol. But also Alison doesn’t know that Dana and Alice are seeing each other. Man, it’s so confusing. That’s what I call a real dyke drama, lol. I sense some GIRL FIGHT!!!! Dana vs. Roxy, Alice vs. Alison:-) That’ll be pretty interesting. Still, I can’t figure out what it is between Dana and Alison. Allie seems to be quite naive and half baked althoughshe already has a son. But it seems like her life was pretty boring and she really started living after meeting Dana again. But maybe she also starts figuring out who she is in truth and changes in further plot. Can’t wait to see what you make out of her:-) And poor Kristen, all by herself. Maybe she should watch “Bridget Jones” to enlighten her mood, lol. But I understand why Dana won’t talk with her. It’s always hard when you have somebody telling you what to do instead of acting the way you feel. And that’s what Kristen does all the time. I just hope that Alice finds a place for herself pretty soon so there won’t be thequestion of “Where should we see each other?”. You didn’t mention David as I noticed:-) Nice of you but that means the next installment will perhaps be a little darker with some evil happenings. Who knows? lol As always an excellent job, my dear. And now, please excuse me, I need a cold shower, lol. I hope, it won’t be my last one:-) Hope you update soon. You’re the best!
Holy crap! I knew that the woman was Alison and yet I still am in awe. Quite a little twist you’ve got going on there. But thank you so much for the update. I really can’t wait to see where this story ends up with all the twists and turns you take us on. And I agree, there should be a seperate Danish category because… well obviously they are the best. :)
OMG!! hahaha by the time roxy met “the woman” I tried so hard to guess who the hell she was.. Since you wrote their sex so detailed I figured u did it for a reason.. Knowing that u wouldn’t waste a word on Roxy’s fucking love life if it doesn’t involve any part of alice… for a sec I thought I could be Lara.. But naah roxy did see who Lara was. What a dumb guess of me huh? lol well when the woman said “It’s at least a couple hours from here” I began screaming “OMG its Alison” .. how ironic is that? and god damn well thought.. ughh Alison referring Dana as her girlfriend annoyed the shit outta me. Now all Roxy’s hopes are up again.. Btw I can’t create a constant roxy image in my head. It changes in every other chapter. Have u described her outlook before? I think I missed it.. All I know for sure is that she is a brunette.. Right? lol poor Dana.. Roxy literally fucked all her potential girlfriends.. ohh how I love the way describe Danish. u really make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Kit disappointed me though. I expected her to chuckle a bit, give them a piece of mind for fucking on her desk and then cut them some slack. Wishful thinking, eh? ahh so it just dawned on me Alison is in town.. I see more black clouds hanging around Danish.. I want both Alison and Roxy dead. Yea I’m evil as that. I want all the potential girlfriends for Dana and Alice other than each other dead.. :) I want happy Danish. Hah but why do I keep reading Danish angst I don’t understand. lol ohh who am I kidding I’m loving every single second of Danish angst. I guess I’m gonna thank you every time.. Can’t help it. I have this huge urge to thank you lol so yea thank you thank you thank you and I’m gonna say it until you get sick of it… thank you.. :) get well soon…
and i forgot… HELL YEA I’M STAYING.. :-))
I lost my first comment. :-( I thought Allie was the one hooking up with Roxy. Good, she can be dismissed now! But what was up with her calling Dana her girlfriend. Weren’t they just dating – slightly? I wonder how Dana will react to Roxy sleeping with yet another of her women! It was funny when Kit caught Alice and Dana yet again. Kristen is starting to worry me. She’s far too possessive of Dana. I hope she and her husband can fix their problems so she doesn’t become one for danish. Great update!
Oh honey, if I were to stroke your ego, you might think that there were something wrong or even worse, that innocent me might be up to something. Well you did provide me with NC-17 fodder, although not the type I was really looking for. Don’t get me wrong … it was actually pretty hot, despite the fact it was Roxy getting off … but it was still Roxy. And I figured out about halfway through that it was Alison and for a second was cursing your name … I got over it. As long as Roxy isn’t having sex with Alice or Dana … she can fuck whoever she wants. Nice to know that I can influence your writing & inspire such sexual depravity in you. You’re still a twisted, sadistic, dirty tease … but you know that & you enjoy it. You still owe me some DETAILED & COMPLETED Alice & Dana sex & don’t forget to make it steamy … remember you still have to best yourself. As for what makes me tick … perhaps you should be cluing me in on what makes you tick … I think it’s only fair at this point. Perhaps if you provide me with something really good, it might spark some creativity within me & we might get a fic off the ground together. I know you want to write with me … could be hot!
Wow with all of these super great and super long comments do you really need mine? You already know I love this story, the drama the angst, what’s not to love. That twist at the end wow I actually said “OH MY GOD” out loud which is difficult work. I like how Danish is progressing and sneaking around it’s deliciously naughty. Kit should have been more understanding, but then again Alice’s ass was on her desk. Not that I would’ve had a problem with that. I’m excited to see what you’ll come up with next and actually I’m going to go back a re-read this it was hot and spicy muy caliente! Post soon babe I love you
I was so excited to see this, I just read it through so fast that I will have to go back and wonder at your exquisite writing. What an update – a really long time coming, but worth the wait – and what a twist at the end with Alison being ‘the woman’. Please don’t leave us waiting long for the next installment. X
Still on the edge of my seat! It’s always worse when you don’t mention Lara or David or the Mob. Makes me look over my shoulder and wonder what evil is lurking in the darkness. So yeah, thanks for the nightmares! : )I’m sure there are few people who might be into Roxy, but that woman just makes my skin crawl. And reading those scenes between her and Allie were just horrific for me. You get big props for the twist. But it’s women like Roxy and Allie that make me want to stay home and never date again. One claims to be soooo into Dana, while the other is ‘in love’ with Alice. Well I say that’s bullsh*t! If you can so easily and quickly do *that* with another women then I say you are both LIARS! Call me old fashion, but when you actually are into someone and they are all you think about generally, at least in my case, they are the only one you want touching you, etc. Anyway… great chapter and congrats on the nom! That is so wonderful, you deserve as do several of the Danish writers! I have much more to say, but I’m tired and need a bath….
God i love Danish together!! Alice taking the lead and showing Dana what she wants was mmm…mmm…yes!,sexual confidence is hot and Dana just couldnt resist. Getting caught in the act at the Planet was so funny.Alice acting all cool and Dana embarrassed, like a scolded child,lol…so Danish! But hey, you cant deny it when the moment takes you right? Hmm that was a great insight into Roxys feelings.I guess the massive build up of all her immense frustrations and emotions were the reason for needing the release with the rough sex! Maybe she needs to let go in more ways than one for her own good…or she might just self destruct? Yeah and both Alison and Kristen are being far too clingy and they better not mess with our Danish, huh!! Superb chapter,i loved it! Well done on the nom…your my number one anyway!
please don’t split Danish again….
I agree the talking is a start but there is still a lot for them to work thru, the trust issues and why did Alice repeatedly make-out with and ultimately fvcked Roxy when she knew that it would hurt Dana. For me it is hard to understand why you would do that to someone you love.Why I hope Dana doesn’t let Kristen bias her against Alice, I do hope Dana will be there for her friend. I am waiting to see the ripple effect of latest twist of Roxy and Alison hooking up.