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Masked Feelings CH 43 Stalemate
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Dana was hoping for more information then she received, but this was just the start. It was like looking at a puzzle and figuring out what pieces went where…. to her though it looked like a lot of missing pieces. Kristin told her not to get her hopes up, but she was wanting the dossier to make sense. Dana sighed and locked up the page with the police report she copied from earlier. She unlocked the door and stepped into the hallway…. there she met Kristin heading to the bathroom.
Kristin – Did you get a fax?
Dana – Yeah…
Kristin – You don’t sound happy about it… no info?
Dana – It’s not that I don’t have some…. but it’s not enough to make sense.
Kristin – Mind if I look at it?
Dana – No, I don’t mind. Maybe it would make more sense to you.
She unlocks the drawer and hands the page to her. Kristin skimming over the sheet….. she chuckled at her name.
Dana laughs.
Dana – I’m guessing you like the name Marvella?
Kristin – It’s different.
Dana – What do you think? Is there anything there that’s useful?
Kristin – I’m sure she’s doing the best she can, but if you want more you might have to pick a specific direction and go with it.
Dana – Any ideas what that might be?
Kristin – We can always check with the foster parents and have them tell us a little bit about her.
Dana – You said we…. does this mean you are going to help me with this?
Kristin – As long as it doesn’t interfere with my job, I don’t see why not.
Dana gives her a big hug which surprises the both of them. They had gotten so close so fast… it just felt like the natural thing to do.
Dana – Thanks, I need all the help I can get. About this sealed record, I don’t suppose I can find out what’s in that?
Kristin – Forget that route, you’ll be wasting your time trying to find out. No one is going to allow you to see it.
Dana wasn’t ready to accept that, but for the time being it would be put on the back burner. The foster parents seemed like a very good option to check into. Kristin was about to put the sheet into the drawer when she saw the police report.
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Ha first wow you’ve temporarily sated me brteyes, but I must warn you I can never get enough. That was hot hot hot! I loved the comment about harmony and that kiss had me screaming (and not in joy). The exchange for the money is going to get ugly for Roxy, lets hope she can handle it. The fight was painfully and only preparing us for things to come. Alice has got some xplanin’ to do about kissing Roxy in Dana’s house. I’m sure Dana will ask once the shit hits the fan and I doubt Alice will lie. Actually I bet alice is waiting for Dana to get better so they can get it on then she can drop the bomb! Thank you for making my week but I will be expecting that snippet of things to come. PS I hate you for being so amazing and captivating my mind the way you do. or do I love you for it :)
Bimey, I’m first…**doing my little Indian dance** Oi, that was good!! I’m so glad they spoke some, there’s a lot of miles left. I hope that Roxy (as much of a B.I. that she is) can prove to Bobby that it wasn’t Alice. I want her to be clear of the mob, there a dangerous lot. They do need to be alone, but that’s not what’s going to solve their problems, it’s not just Roxy, Alice needs to know that Dana is her one and only…I would get down on my knees for ya again, but they’re still hurting from getting down on them for ClosetDana. Can’t wait for next chap…Cheers mates.
I’m sorry you’ve been feeling the writer’s block settle in. Hopefully that doesn’t long :) Thank you for my Danish sappy moment. Just so you know, it’s torturing me to have my two favorite characters have all these secrets built up between them. I hope the talk will be had soon so they can move on and get over it. You know, you have me curious about Kristen…I wonder if she’ll start having feelings for Dana…or vice versa??? Or maybe she’s secretly helping Roxy! That would be painful. Great job and please don’t stop!!!
Hey babe, what a great chapter. i’m glad you got it out, i know you wanted to by sunday. i like the way things are progressing. what im really wondering is who the hell that person is making the deal with roxy..and how all this will tie in. this story just keeps gettin better and better, but i dont have to tell you that twice. get job, i’ll save all my great comments and things for later. but i just want to show you some love on your story. you know you always do a perfect job baby. until next time..
I know she loves Dana, but Alice is seriously scaring me! So much has happened, but Dana and Alice have never dealt with their pain and Lara. I have a feeling things are going to get so much worse before they begin to heal. Oh yeah – Kristin is married and straight, right?
I love Alice, but the poor girl needs some therapy to help her sort all this out. Still loving the story… keep it coming!
OMG, I had tears in my eyes when Alice and Dana fought. I’m so into this story it’s insane! Loved the making up but they have a lot of talking left to do. The torture is killing me but still I keep coming back for it with great pleasure. Thanks for another amazing update. I’m kind of scared for the next couple of chapters but I will always be back to read and comment on your great story.
this is just getting better and better with each post and yes I do keep coming back for more so please post soon
Ok, if you end the story like that we forget the struggle they went trough in the rest of the chapter (or is that just me ;) ). What a self-restraint Dana has…it must be the effect of the anti-depressants…4 days to go and Dana can have some teasing of her own… :P (That is, if Dana and Alice’s relationship isn’t jeopardized by then…) *goes back to read the beginning of the chapter for the second time* Loved the dialogue between Kirstin, Dana and Alice…light and entertaining. :) That Dana didn’t walk in on Roxy and Alice on the couch, how big are the odds! I can’t believe I’m saying this, but I feel a bit sad for Roxy. She really has it bad for Alice and she really is taking a huge risk by saving Alice from Tony’s clutches. I’m really wondering how that al will go. Roxy, mob family and mystery man (who is he?!?!) all together..I can’t be a good thing. The talk between Alice and Dana was really open and honest….well parts of it were. I’m looking forward to THE talk in the next chapter(s). It’s gonna be a long talk and lots of angry moments…but I hope it will clear things up and gets them closer (altough I fear it will drift them further apart (temporarily)). (Btw, I give up, I really don’t know what the purpose of the clock is…I will wait and find out.)
OK I’ll admit, I read it again and found more stuff I forgot to comment on. Like the sandwich…I don’t know what it is about the statement “Do you want half of my sandwich” but it cracks me up everytime. Something about it being such a simple question that sparks so much crap. I’m over here screaming “NO Roxy she doesn’t want half of you friggin sandwich…go somewhere!”. I guess Dana and I have something in common causing goosebumps,(too bad I don’t cause them the way she does…:) You’ve got a lot of people on their knees for you, a gal could get jealous :)