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Broken Promises and Shattered Hearts – (Chapter: Chapter 8)
Here is Chapter 8. Thanks for all the feedback I have been getting guys. I truly appreciate you taking the time to comment. I will be giving soon a much needed FOF. So, Chapter 8…It’s probably not as good as the others because I am not feeling well. However, I still wanted you guys to have an update. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I went up to the casket, kissed my hand and placed it where I thought her lips would be. I never saw Kyla move beside me. When I turned around she looked dead into my eyes. I remember her words as if they were being spoken right now. “I hope your happy.” That’s what she said to me. Right before she hit me so hard, I fell backwards into an arrangement of flowers.
FLASHBACK
(Kyla walks up behind Spencer. She is crying and pissed that Spencer is there. Images begin to flash through her mind as she looks at Spencer. She grabs Spencer by the arm and turns her around roughly.)
Kyla: I hope your happy.
(Before Spencer can speak, Kyla draws a fist back and lands a solid blow clear across Spencer’s face. Spencer stumbled backwards and falls into an arrangement of flowers. Everyone in the room turns to look at the commotion taking place. Spencer stands up slowly. Kyla goes to lunge at her again, but is stopped by Aiden.)
Aiden: Kyla…not here…this is Ashley’s day. (turns to Spencer) Spencer, maybe you should…
Kyla: No! I want her here. I want her to look at that fucking casket and know that she put my sister there. She’s dead because of you, you heartless bitch. I FUCKING HATE YOU. I wish it were you in that coffin.
(Spencer looks at Kyla with tears threatening to fall. Some managing to slip.)
Spencer: I am sorry, Kyla. I wish it were me in there.
Kyla: Why’d you do it? Why? What did she do to you that was so horrible? Make me understand.
Spencer: I was jealous. I was jealous of her friendship with Aiden. I thought she was going to choose him. I hurt her, before she could hurt me.
Aiden: Spencer, I was scared ok. I was scared of losing Ashley and moving on with Kyla. I thought that if I got with Kyla, it would hurt Ashley somehow. I never meant for what happened at prom to happen.
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Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Well pms. Real soon.
Well i’m goad Kyla punched her…and these cliff hangers are killing me! I really love this story cause it gets a reaction out of me. Not many stories or books can get me to feel and this one does. I feel Ashley’s hurt and pain, Kyla’s anger and mourning, and Spencer’s regret and defeat. I love it! PMS!
Great Update. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Well pms. Real soon.
Well i’m goad Kyla punched her…and these cliff hangers are killing me! I really love this story cause it gets a reaction out of me. Not many stories or books can get me to feel and this one does. I feel Ashley’s hurt and pain, Kyla’s anger and mourning, and Spencer’s regret and defeat. I love it! PMS!
I hope its ashley… i hope she was like hiding or something and never died but you cant leave it here im going to DIE! love the story… PMS realllllllll soon!!!!!!
I hope its ashley… i hope she was like hiding or something and never died but you cant leave it here im going to DIE! love the story… PMS realllllllll soon!!!!!!
I enjoy how everyone always thinks it’s Ashley…but this time we’re right!! Right?! …I figured I’d join the crowd seeing as how I’m wishing the same. haha Keep it up, hope you start feeling better.
I enjoy how everyone always thinks it’s Ashley…but this time we’re right!! Right?! …I figured I’d join the crowd seeing as how I’m wishing the same. haha Keep it up, hope you start feeling better.
Umm that can’t be ashley, can it? i don’t know what to expect out of this storyline cuz there are loads of possibilities….i need to know who that is, plzzzz pms!
Umm that can’t be ashley, can it? i don’t know what to expect out of this storyline cuz there are loads of possibilities….i need to know who that is, plzzzz pms!
haha another cliffhanger, this is a wonderful story but very sad lol. cant wait to see who is behind the door, but i doubt its ashley b/c of spencers reaction, but i pray to god it is lol
haha another cliffhanger, this is a wonderful story but very sad lol. cant wait to see who is behind the door, but i doubt its ashley b/c of spencers reaction, but i pray to god it is lol