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You Found Me Chapter 163

Shane, Alice and Dana made their way around to some clubs saving the Planet for last because Carmen was the DJ there. They had been on a hunt but with no luck. Shane took Carmen a beer and to stole a few kisses… Carmen took a break to give Shane some one on one attention. Carmen had a special spot she would take Shane when she was working there. A very private back room with a lock.
Shane loved watching Carmen walk from behind, her hips swung side to side with a slit jiggle. Inside the room they could make all the noise they wanted no one could hear them over the music. Shane made quick of her clothes and so does Carmen. There was a table and few chairs in the dimly lit room. Carmen sat on the table as Shane kissed her with urgent need. Sucking on her big titties making Carmen moan lifting her hips for Shane to taste her.
Shane works her way down Carmen’s pleading body Carmen wraps her legs around Shane’s shoulders pulling her to her wet dripping pussy which Shane takes fully with her open mouth sucking and licking like she hadn’t had it before. Carmen’s head tilts back and loosens her legs letting Shane have all of her voluntarily,. She feels herself building up an orgasm that she wants Shane to have. Ohh Fuck Shane! She calls her name because Shane latched onto her clit sucking hard making her cum…fuck fuck fuuuuuckkkkk… her hips where bucking wild, running up and down Shane’s face who was licking her clean. Then Shane stands shoving three of her long skinny fingers into Carmen’s drenched pussy laying her own pussy on the back of her hand humping Carmen hard while kissing her letting Carmen taste herself. She pounded her so hard the table was moving back with each thrust until it hit a dead end against the wall. Carmen lifted her legs so Shane could go deeper inside her. Shane’s hand was soaked front and back. This time they both cum at the same time because Carmen was whispering Oh fuck baby….pound that pussy Fuck me… Make me cum in your hand. Take me baby …
Carmen…. Shane whispers….feeling herself letting go…now baby now…cum!
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I was almost closing my tablet and hooray i got the notification you posted a new chapter!
You know how i love your story and i could’nt resist to read before going to sleep:partysmilie
Yes, Bobbie did get what she deserved, i hope she underststands that she is not wanted around LA and my favourite couple and move away as far as possible.
Sorry to hear that you had to work so much, i do hope you have a few days free now.
Thanks for the update!
Thank you for staying up and reading….and yeah this week will be a shorter one Now go to bed!
Ok i did go to bed, had a good sleep, only way to short, just like your chapter. Can we expect a new steamy update with our beloved couple and no i don’t have it about Shane & Carmen :) allthough that was Hot too.
Enjoy your free days!
At work now lol…glad you got some sleep. And yeah have a few steamy chapters…and will post soon….and yeah Shane and Carmen are good but like my BnT sex better..that i,’m not sure where it came from …lol wife didn’t care for it either…She proof reads for me and she sorta glaced past it ..lol…she said it was OK but not her thing…lol..
If you need someone to proof read, i will happily volunteer! ;)
Punctuation is vital!!!! I can’t get through your paragraphs and your sentences are so tangled, and guide me no where because I cannot follow them. Please look up how to punctuate, and get your verb tenses sorted. It’s clear you have an enthusiasm for writing, obvious that you love your characters – all things that are important- but you’re killing us, and our enjoyment of what you’re trying to portray, with your mangled manuscripts.
Not to be too harsh, but really . . .
LOL…Bibi28 you crack me up….Let me clarify, My wife has a law degree and can write properly but she makes very minimal changes to my story. She leaves my style and thoughts alone.
TINA should’ve had the honor of putting the boots to BOBBIE but it got done and the message was recieved,LEAVE TOWN.thanks
Well Tina does have to have a talk with her when she gets back so we will see what Tina says….
I need more. It have been awhile. I think I need daily updates. I am having withdrawal symptoms. ★★
lol…Withdrawals? I’m sorry.. I will try and post again Thursday…And I have some writing to do before you guys get caught up to me…
Thanks and welcome back! I sure missed this amazing story! Yes, Bobbie got her due but I wanted Bette and Tina to also deal with her ass! PPS
Bette had her say and Tina has yet to have her day. It’s coming but not in violence like the approach the girls took. Thank you for missing me… still working night shifts?
So glad you updated. I enjoy this story a lot, thanks. Was glad to see Bobbie get told
WOW!
Blackbird that was harsh, you just lost a supporter of your stories.
Keep it up BnT