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Wings of an Angel – Bette and Tina – Chapter 9
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At the end of the corridor, Kyle came to a stop and said ecstatically, “Look Bette.” Kyle used his right hand to point to a family of spiders that were swinging haphazardly from their web home situated in a cold musty corner; enjoying their freshly caught meal. Bette was not a fan of crawly creatures; especially the kind that could wiggle its way into your bed at night and the moment one those hairy legs touches your body, you feel squeamish and dirty all over. “That’s very nice. We need to go, okay”. Kyle tried to break lose from his prison, but was not succeeding. “Kyle, I know you want to play. I want to play too, but we can’t do it here. We will have more fun outside. Trust me”. Kyle eventually discontinued his struggling against Bette’s hold for he knew that Bette did not want to cause him any harm. “How come we have to go?” Kyle asked displaying his quivering bottom lip and puppy teary eyes. Bette thinks to herself, ‘They obviously learn it from a young age’. “This is a dangerous place. The building is to be destroyed shortly. You don’t want us to be stuck in here do you?” Kyle responded by shaking his head from side to side to represent a no answer. “Besides, playing outside is much more adventurous”. As Bette and Kyle made their way through the door to leave the third level, Bette checked her watch again and saw that she had twenty seconds left to put her career back on track; they also had twenty steps to descend. “Thank goodness there won’t be that much of a delay”. Bette and Kyle were taking pleasure in having a conversation about everything and Bette soon learned that Kyle was a very inquisitive young boy; the questions never seemed to end. Upon arriving at the ground level, Bette felt a frigid shiver travel over her skin for her instincts were telling her something bad was about to happen; something dramatic that would drastically change with the movement of the second hand; tick tock, tick tock.
The earth began to rumble with the sound of a deafening explosion; a detonation that was uniquely born to create a new worldly dimension. “Bette? What was that?” Kyle asked in a shaky voice, he was scared. “Kyle, everything is okay. We need to get to the basement level now”. It was the only space that was not wired with dynamite as the ground level surface was already deteriorating and would dismantle with the help of the explosions. Bette did not hesitate to rush downstairs to the basement with Kyle, shoving the wooden door off its hinges. If Bette’s calculations were right, the next blast should be, “BOOM!” The second thunderous explosion forced Bette and Kyle to roughly fall on the ground and the ceiling to decompose above them; allowing murky dust particles to float in the suffocating air, causing them to cough and shield their eyes. With squinted eyes, Bette rapidly searched for the sealed compartment that she knew was located in the far left corner of the room; a steel compartment only big enough to squeeze in a small child. “Kyle, climb in here”. Kyle did as he was told as briskly as his shaking body would allow. Once he was tightly packed he discovered that there was no room for Bette. “Where are you going to go?” The concerned look on his chalked covered face was priceless; almost bringing tears to Bette’s eyes. “Don’t worry about me, I’ll find a place to hide. Now, close this door and don’t open it until I say so”. Bette had twenty seconds before the third explosion was to be activated. “I’m scared”. Bette impulsively held Kyle close to her chest and kissed his temple. Kyle strongly returned the hug. “I’m scared too. I won’t let anything happen to you, okay”. The last collection of dynamite was located on the first floor; Bette has ten seconds left. “Close the door”.
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k babe. i said i loved your story but not this. just kidding. still loving this but this kind of drama on the second day of the new year???!!! make it better please. thanks.
OMG….f*ck that was tense…OMG. I have missed your story Leo and then you pull this on us. WOW – that was breathtaking…do post very soon and I mean soon Leo
So sorry to hear about everything happening. My condolences to you and your family. However, I’m glad that you are back. Really loved this chapter…I have faith in you. ;-) Oh, and as for 30…it’s just a number. Thanks for posting and welcome back.
no, you didn’t just do it…talking about drama…it better be happy ending or else
Great chapter and story. Looking forward to more.
Let’s hope that “Wings of an Angel” means that an angel came down to save the lives of Bette and Kyle and she’s not harmed in a major way!!!
Damn this is good and please don’t let anything happen to Bette and don’ tlet her die. Ok post soon please, thanks!
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!what have you done????
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! have u lost your freaking mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fix it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you did not do this to me
My condolances to you and your family, When the person you love is in danger you have feeling that you cant put your finger on. Mybe the Angels are looking out for our Bette and the little boy. thanks for a wonderful story///
Glad that you are back. I hope that Bette survives this accident. Please let her be okay.
I was just thinking about you today and look what happen…LOL….Glad you are back….Now let me go back and read..later!
Hooolly shit!!!!! Bette has got to be nuts I would have knocked that kids ass out and drag him to safety. Now I can only hope that your not doing the Ghost scenario and Bette is still alive but since the story is entitled Wings of an Angel I don’t have much hope otherwise.
oh noooooooooooooooo..!!!
That was really gripping by the way lul us into a false sense of peace put a little scare into us and then smack us full in the face. Brilliant!!!!
please post immediately.. this is a very interesting story..
I hope Bette is save and please post soon.
OH NO… now you had better have the next chapter all ready to post…i hope bette is safe… see tina should have tied her to the bed… please post soon
oh no, pls, pls do not leave us like this………………………….
I finally got finished with your story up to this point. All of it is so intense I swear it’s like being in a marathon and I have to keep stopping so I can breathe. Obviously I am wishing for a happy ending and am sticking to my idea that Kyle is the angel mentioned in the title.
Hey you …. You still rock girl – thank you for posting. I am so very sorry to hear of you recent loss, my condolences to you. Have a happy and healthy new year.