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Who will raise me now? chpt. 4
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The next afternoon
12:00 p.m.
Ding! Dong!
Tina: “I got it mom.” The blond ran over to the door and swung it open. “Hey there…”
Bette: (Blushing) “Hey…” Tina steps outside and closes the door. “I looked the word queer up in the dictionary.”
Tina: “And???”
Bette: “My father’s not gay. He’s a straight Christian man.”
Tina: “If you say so.” She laughed to herself. “Cheer up.”
Bette: “Why? You’re making fun of my father.”
Tina: “No I’m not. Look, I didn’t mean anything by it. I swear.”
Bette: “On your life?”
Tina: “Yeah. On my life. Do you forgive me?”
Bette: “I don’t know. Should I?”
Tina: “You better. Or else?”
Bette: “What? You’re going to beat me up like you do Shane?”
Tina: “No. I could never hit you. You’re too cute. I’m not saying Shane isn’t, but Shane’s more masculine than you are. You’re a femme.”
Bette: “A femme?” Tina chuckled and shook her head.
Tina: “Yeah. You’re what I would call a girly-girl like myself. You’re very feminine.”
Bette: “Okay, cool.”
Tina: “Great. So, are you ready for your first riding lesson?”
Bette: “No. I was hoping that we could take a raincheck on that, and maybe we could talk about last night instead.”
Tina: “Sure, but not here. At the clubhouse we can.”
Bette: (Surprised) “You have a clubhouse?”
Tina: “Yeah. Well it’s me and Shane’s. We built it a year ago. I’ll show you. But, it’s far. So, I hope you’re ready to walk.”
Bette: “For how long?”
Tina: “Two days.”
Bette: “TWO DAYS?”
Tina: (Laughs) “Just kidding Bette. Calm down.” She places her hand over her chest. “Are you okay now?”
Bette: “Yes. Can we go? I really wanna talk about last night.”
Tina: “Okay impatient. Lets go.”
Timmy/Tommy: “Hey Tina.” They ran over, together.
Tina: “Hey Timmy…hey Tommy. What’s up?”
Timmy: “Nothing much. We were just about to play a game of football. Do you guys want to join us?”
Bette: (Excited) “Sure…”
Tina: “No.” She grabs Bette’s arm. “Remember we’re suppossed to be going to the clubhouse.”
Bette: “Oh yeah. I’m sorry. I forgot.”
Tommy: “Hey, whose this?” He approaches the brunette.
Bette: “I’m Bette. Hi-”
Tommy: “Tommy. My name’s Tommy.”
Bette: (Smiles) “Hi Tommy.”
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TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU CANT STOP IT THERE! WHATS UP WOMEN.NOT FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This Tina is a little scary and to be so YOUNG!!! Almost like a r…… They are like what 15 in this fic. A little to much for me.
I THINK WE HAVE A NEW AUTHOR TO NAME IN THE TEASE CATEGORY!!!! AWESOME CHAPTER……CONTINUE SOON……PLEASE…….
Bring on the next chapter! NOW!! Please ~~~ =P
I’m torn on this one. Tina’s just way too pushy for me. I’m sorry.
Who’s the real predator? The name starts with a ‘T’, and I don’t think it’s Tommy.
Wow…wow…wow. A lot of controversy here I see. Tina the predator???Funny as hell. For real Techgal. Hilarious. Come down folks. I have to covered. You’ll see what I have instored for tomorrow. There’s a reason for everything. Expect the unexpected from me. I can be very hard to figure out, especially when it comes to writing. I love getting everyone to think and wonder what will happen next. That’s the object here. Don’t worry-I know Tina seems pretty push, but she’s actually very innocent. She’s reacting because she’s afraid that she might lose Bette. She thinks that by sleeping with her with get Bette to change her mind about being with guys and some how fall in to her lap out of the sky. But, being as young as she is-she has a lot to learn about life and relationships. You can’t sleeo with someone to make them fall for you. It won’t work. Then again as I said she’s still young. Stay tuned for the next chappy tomorrow. I don’t want to give away the details, but don’t expect something bad from this. Please don’t. I’ll explain more tomorrow. Take care everyone. Bye now.
Oh, and thanks for all of your comments by the way. Bye.
good that i read your explanation before commenting because i also thought tina was a little pushy and might scared bette off who seems so innocent
i read this at work and i had to let you know i like this story… and i agree they are young… abd tina is scared… i just hope and i know they will both go slow… please continue
Tina takes controle, really cool. And Bette is so innocent. She does give in very easly. Absolutely lovely and daring. Please write more!!!
I can’t believe you left the story there….Big Tease!!! Well, while i wait for the next chapter I’m going to go back and read the earlier chapters so I can figure out how Bette and Tina are in your story. I’m thinking highschool age, but I guess they could be middle school or even college…….hurry and post the conclusion to this scene w/ Bette in tina’s bedroom-Hot!
Oh WOW, a bold Tina and only 15 or so. Very interesting.
PUSHY TINA = HOTNESS!
Wow this Tina a little take control and like it!
OMG U JOKING RIGHT?!?lmaoooooooooo’ I was all getting weee excited, ready for Tina to just hmpf bette, then I get tbc lol … oooooo these authors and their cliffies! lol
Bette could have said ‘No’Though… I think Bette is playing Tina more than viceversa… But we’ll see…
Where was Bette and Tina when I was growing up. I played football and all I saw were guys. Oh by the way the guys can be very mean and call girls very bad names. I got in trouble for beating up a boy for calling girls names. Spent some time on restriction for that one.
I thought that Tina was a wee bit pushy, They are so young. But if you feel like it tryit. Tina said she is bi, so she seems to be testing the water . thanks
Please post soon and continue where you left off. This Tina is a lil pushy but I don’t really see bette complaining. Can’t to find what happen in dark. Good Job.