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What Time Reveals Part 18
Then…
“Hey Al” replied Shane in her usual husky voice.
“Hey Al?! Hey Al?! You’ve got to be fucking kidding me?! I mean you have not called once…” Alice started on her rant but was quickly interrupted by Lara.
“Al, honey, stop. Let her sit down.” Lara gestured Shane to an empty chair, who gave Lara a grateful small smile. Lara looked at Shane’s appearance and knew that she had been living on the streets.
“I’m going to go in back and cook you two up a hearty breakfast, ok?” Lara stated getting up and walked to the kitchen, not waiting for a response. Alice and Shane looked at one another for a bit.
“Bette and I were going to go looking for you tomorrow. I’m glad you finally surfaced.” Alice told the raven haired woman. “Are you ok?”
“Yeah Al, I’m fine. I just need some time to sort my head out, ya know?” Shane told her, but was unable to look Alice in the eyes. “How are you?” She asked, trying to sway the line of questioning. Alice nodded her head once, she would let Shane slid today. Give her time to adjust before she pounced.
“Hell. I’m fine. Ahh…let’s see Tina and Henry stopped Bette from seeing Angelica, but then Tina’s parents came and fixed that. Bette is teaching at the Center where Tina used to work, Kit’s pregnant, oh and Bette and Helena are probably fucking as we speak!”
Shane’s eyes bugged out, “Whoa.”
Now…
Helena and Bette were running later than Bette had originally planned, but that didn’t stop the euphoric feeling running between the two women. As they were getting dressed, looks would pass between the two women. One would often be caught staring at the other, then the other would smile. The smile grew infectious and then suddenly they were holding one another and kissing. They stopped themselves several times, Bette almost took Helena on the kitchen counter. Seeing that it was a beautiful day, the two brunette beauties decided to take Bette’s Saab so they could but the convertible top down. Bette decided to really be daring and handed over her keys silently requesting Helena to drive. Helena knew that this was a pretty serious step. From all that she gathered Bette’s car was her baby and no one was to mess with it otherwise much less drive it. The fact that Bette handed over the keys without much thought startled Helena. ‘Either her car isn’t as important to her as Alice claimed or she likes me a lot’ Helena thought. The two got situated in the car and then they were off, Bette gave a few directions in which she wanted to look for Shane, before getting to the Center. They had been driving for about five minutes when Bette’s cell phone rang. Looking at the caller id, Bette rolled her eyes and answered her phone.
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(57 votes, average: 3.37 out of 5)
wow…excellent!
yeah baby…can we get another tomorrow…i know that’s selfish, but you can’t blame me for asking…lol
OMG, Alice is a freaking cut-up.As much as I dislike seeing Bette with Helena, shane was right in what she told Tina. If Tina trully knows now that she effe’d up and truly loves Bette and wants her back in her and Angelica’s lives, she had better move the hell out of Henry’s house and tell Bette that she loves and wants her back and will do whatever it takes to get her back. If she does not do this now, she will never get Bette back. Tina must do a whole lot of groveling and begging to get Bette back if at all. Great update. thanks.
P, I read this and screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeamed – Oh and Bette? She most certainly does have a certain look on her face. Very good. Now let’s see if you’re any good at teaching children the same way you appeared to be at fucking women, ok?” Well, TBH, I screamed through the whole damned chapter. You’ve outdone yourself!! Ok, have to go read it again! -_-
Sex fends will my friend you started it so you cont blame us.Agian P you have out done yoursife love you bringing the girls into the story,again great 1 liners .From 1 TiBette lover to 1 Helena and Bette writer you really out do yoursife everytime.
i swear someone needs to put on muzzle on alice! i am glad to see that shane put Tina in her place.
Alice’s words never stop in her brain for clearance just straight out of her mouth. LOL. Payback’s a bitch, ain’t it, Tina? NC-17 ratings often get many times the readers than other ratings. So, I guess we are sex fiends or students of the genre. ;-)
OMG…can Alice just never think before she talks? So glad she doesn’t cause this chapter was freaking hilarious. Can’t wait for the next one!!
I’ve never rooted so hard for Shane. That SO needed to be said. And Bette deserves to be happy, even if it’s not with Tina (I guess…). Still can’t feel badly for Tina. I love the drama she creates when she’s there, but I mostly just want her to go hide in a corner with her dick.
I can hear Bette telling Tina, I’m changing my way of living. and I’m going to strud my stuff. You have missed out My dear.and the only thing I want that you have is a chance to see my daughter when I can. thanks
Pands!! You friggin GENIUS you!! This chapter was a riot from beginning to end, absolutely hilarious! Peggy and Alice are just too funny for words!! Like others have said, you really have out done yourself with this one!! Fantastic! Now Do be a darling and don’t keep us waiting too long for the next! Thank you thank you thank you!!
OMG, theirs just so much that was so good. Peggy, love that woman. Alice, my best friend is just like her, always saying stuff without thinking first, and usually provides all of our entertainment. Bette let Helena drive the car, this is serious. Kudos to Shane for telling Tina to back off, its about time. I kinda feel bad for Tina, but not. She should have been old enough to know the grass is not always greener, its just different grass.
well it looks like im gonna be having a talk with catcat. It nice to see you posting. Great chapter
:D “fingers and tongue” That was great! And Go Shane! At least someone is willing to tell Tina how she’s behaving.
Take THAT Tina!
ahhhh Pands, excellent!! i love how you made Shane say all that! and your Peggy was spot on! now on to the next one..
This was a really good chapter…Sorry for my lack of comments on the other chapters… I’ll make sure I remember from now on =)
wow Pands this was wonderful. I really liked how they all rubbed it in Tina’s face. Now she finally knows she has lost the most precious thing she had in life : Bette.I liked the way Alice and Peggy were talking, they are both so funny and alike. you could almost believe Alice is Peggy’s daughter instead of Helena.I also like the idea of Bette trusting Helena, their relationship should be totally different than the one between B & T. Keep up the good work babes;
Don’t really know to what to say – other than this is a really great story. However, I am a total Tibetter and find reading this so painful – but as a Brit I like Helena and don’t want her to get hurt either, but hey, this is drama!
Awesome. This is such a powerful story. Tina just can’t seem to help herself as she continues to dig herself deeper into a hole. Good for Bette, good to see her smiling again. You’re sex scenes are pretty incredible. Nice job.
OMG!!!!WOW!!!!! Bette let Helena drive her car. Tina needs to step back and let Bette live her life, the one she did not want to be a part of. I like H and B together. Thank you
I don’t know what to comment. It’s soooo good! You outdone yourself again! I mean, I liked the friendship between the gang, when Shane came back and they didn’t want her to leave.. Also Bette and Helena’s actions were very very sweet – subtle little things like the touching and the driving of the Saab. I really hope there is a happily ever after between our BeLena, and Tina also realise what she did and let them off. :D -wipes tear from eye-
would you be a sweety and grace us with another chapter coz this is fuckin amazing totally sexcellent
I don’t usually leave comments… but I just have to say …this is by far the best BeLena story of them all