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Wednesday Lunch Break (Time of Day 11)
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Even so, Tina found it interesting for reasons related to her own life, not for any reasons related to the script itself. The way the scene was written reminded her of the first opportunity she had to be intimate with a woman – an opportunity that came in college.
It had been during her second semester and Tina was still living in the dorm. She was dating, on and off, Joe. As it was beginning to turn out, Joe’s inadequacies out of bed were beginning to outweigh any competency he might have claimed otherwise; and even in bed Tina was beginning to find him lacking.
Becoming acclimatized to California had given Tina a new sense of security, which in turn had made her more open to exploring. She was beginning to find the tradition of every a weekend a different kegger dull, and wanted to find someone with whom she could explore more of the art and culture that was available throughout the campus and the area. That person was not Joe.
Rather than deal with the situation outright, she had begun to throw herself into her classes, hoping that he would get the hint before she had to become more direct with him. As much as she was finding the relationship lacking, she also did not like being the one who broke things off. Trapped by her own inaction, her life had become a longing for more from either her dorm room or the library.
On such a day, it was not unusual that her roommate Jenn’s friend, Terri, came into the room when her roommate was not present. Terri lived on their floor and was often dropping by. Nor was it unusual when Terri took a seat besides Tina on the narrow bed.
“You look tired,” Terri proclaimed.
“It’s just,” and then Tina realized that she really didn’t want to go into the whole explanation of ‘the Joe situation,’ as she thought of it. “It’s just been a busy week.”
“Yeah, I’ve had those, too,” Terri agreed.
The two sat together for a minute, as Tina’s thoughts ticked through all the things she really did need to accomplish.
“You know, I could maybe help you relax a little.”
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I can’t make anybody else read, but I’M interested. I’d prefer you continue. It’s not like you haven’t left yourself areas to explore, like why Bette’s mind keeps drifing from Jodi to Tina, and why Tina keeps pushing Bette to Jodi when she wants Bette.
I’m interested, too. I don’t need sex scenes for a story to be interesting (though I’m certainly not knocking them). I would be a hypocrite if I did; I have NEVER written a sex scenes. I think it’s brave to write them, but I also agree that it’s not fair to yourself or the characters to make it all about only that. Ok, I’m starting to rant, so in conclusion: I love your writing. Please continue. With or without sex, I’m reading.
i love what you write- with or without sex. thanks!
First off, I’ll read whatever you write, pseud. I don’t need loads of sex scenes to enjoy a story. Oh, make no mistake, I *read* them, and like them, but I don’t *need* them. That’s what my overactive imagination is for. Good writing can take a slight hint and give me the push, then the basest part of brain does the rest, in Technicolor 3-D JPvision. As for the chapter, I do appreciate your exploration of the characters. I’m all for the subtleties of their individual struggles. I’m really enjoying this series of posts, and I’m hoping you continue with them (and LWH!). Thanks for the chapter, pseud. Stay true to your vision… I’ll be waiting to read it. Cheers
I agree with the rest of the gals. I enjoy everything you write and there is absolutely plenty to explore with the way you have set up and written this story so please continue. I know the comments fuel the writers fire so I will try and be better at doing that so that you know that we really appreciate your efforts! Thanks for posting psued and I hope there will be many more to come. Plus, I’d read your version of S5 anyway, it’s bound to better than the drivel IC and co will try and shove down our throats!!:)PPS
hey pseudI am currently writing a T&B sexual reunion. I do so not just for enjoyment but also because I started a story that actually would have me wait about a year before starting to explore what I find is the essential part of any B&T reunion which is the new balance of power that includes a much more equal feel to it . sexually and otherwise. I got overwhelmed with the effort that would go into writing new characters and keeping it all fluid to be too much of a challenge and now I have this story laughing at me, and it was a really nice story in my mind:-). So, the fact that you have the patience to dive right into the other part of B&T that revolves around more, from a literary perspective at least, complex issues, is a testamony to your longeivity and should be praised. I say hang in there and enjoy having so much on you mind to write about.
im very interested too, please continue on,and if they dont want to read it there LOST babe.wink
Please continue! I like this story. I am eager to see how they work it out and truly understand how to become better partners to each other. PPS. Thanks!
“I’ve come to feel that unless I write nothing but B&T sex scenes, there’s little interest in what I’m writing…” Sorry if I haven’t commented enough, but just to reiterate, I like your writing, and I appreciate the time and effort you put into your chapters. As to the interest level, I can’t speak for anyone else, but since I rarely take the time to read solely NC-17 chapters, you can be sure its not those chapters that keep me reading. (*Nothing against NC-17, not a prude, just have only so many minutes in the week to read, and I’d rather spend the time I have reading dialogue and character development moments.) So once again, thanks for writing!
I wish you would continue, there are lots of interesting possibilities and I would be interested in reading them.
Pseud – You write I read and enjoy. Sex is always fun especially with B & T but everything you write is wonderful.
me too, I read your story and I love it, I think you have many places to go with it, want some of my thoughts?
Don’t worry about what people think, you should write the story you want to tell, not the story you think people want to read. Then your writing is more natural and honest, and readers will sense it and will come to appreciate it for what it is. Keep up with your story and your feelings.
i dont care, well thats not true, about sex. i dont care if i read it, just that i get it. with that said, i love how and what you write. keep it going thanks.
There is always more to Bette and Tina than just sex. The time that they take thinking or watching the other is just as important as loving in a physical way.
This is good and like it!
pseud,come on you know we love your stories. There doesn’t have to be sex, heck we hardly even get it from the show. You keep telling your tales will read them.
Hey Pseud, I particularly love the balance that your terrific tale have. Yes, sex is a big part of life but it ain’t the only part therefore I am wiht you every step of these journeys exploring the lives of these characters. You breath air into every scene and manage to stay true to the fobiles of each gal. Thank you so mire for entertaining and enthralling me with your wonderful and wise words. This latest addition was so sad. Firstly Bette nagging thoughts of Tina but current committment to Jodi. I am not convinced that Jodi has changed that much. Then Tina’s remembrance of days gone by and then the link to the future. Please just let these gals reconnect their romantic relationship. Many thanks, Your Loyal Fan.
You know I’m most likely going to read it so that’s all that matters. *looking around* Okay, okay I’m kidding. BUG? That’s a new one to me. For years I’ve used GTG (gay till graduation, even though in the military it usually means “good to go”). I probably fell under the BUG category because I crushed hard on a female friend of mine although I was in a het relationship for most of my college years (2 relationships actually). If only I had known back then…
No, don’t stop there
I’ll be reading and enjoying whatever you care to write. Thanks.
I’m interested, I really could care let sex scence or non sex. They did do thing as a family beach ,walking shoppingtogether dishes , swiming every thing tha happen in a day in the life of a couple. keep on writing.
Mmm I just hate Jodi…plain as that…so I’d rather read about Tina and Bette, Tina and Helena, Tina and Kate maybe, but Bette and Jodi leaves me high and dry, sorry…but I like stories with or without sex scenes…and I really, I repeat hate Jodi so I don’t care what she does as long as its not with Bette or Tina…but I’m reading