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We all make mistakes ch.10
“I love you so much Dane you know that, more than anyone else in this world!”
“I love you too Alice and I would do anything to see that smile back on your face.”
“Thanks Dane that really means a lot.”
Alice then pulled Dana into a mouthwatering kiss, they then moved towards the bed and slowly began to undress each other. Alice was on top of Dana swirling her tongue around the brunettes nipple and was about to remove her trousers when Dana moved her hand down towards Alice’s face and pulled her up so as she could look her in the eyes.
“Alice are you sure you’re ready for this? I know you havnt wanted to do anything since…well the accident and I don’t want you to think that because I ask you to move in I expect anything because I don’t…”
“Trust me Dana I want this so stop over analyzing and kiss me…”
“If that’s what you want…”
Dana didn’t need to be told twice, she pushed her lips desperately against her girlfriends and flipped them over so she was now on top.
Dana looked deep into Alice’s eyes, “I want to show you how much I love you…”
She moved her lips from Alice’s and made her way slowly down the blonds jaw line and onto her pulse point on her neck. She sucked at it making alice moan and not even thinking about the huge make she had left. The brunette continued lightly kissing down until she reached her breasts. She teased Alice and she let her tongue glide over the breast continually missing the nipple until Alice couldn’t take no more and used her hands to direct Dana’s head to where she wanted it.
“Uh…Dana…Fuck…” Alice whispered as Dana removed her lips from Alice’s breasts and slowly made her way down the toned abdomen towards Alice’s wetness. The blond could barely contain herself as Dana missed out the one place Alice wanted her and kissed her thighs moving painstakingly close only to move away again. She tried her best not to force Dana’s head where she wanted it but it was just about getting the better of her…
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(26 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
HOT!!! Wow. Here I was hoping for any sort of Danish and you come along with this. Thank you so much! PPS!
Thank the Lord, we have some Danish at last – this pair are the ultimate and your perception of them is fantastic .. and hot! Please post again soon – and all of you other Danish writers – where are you????
I vow to write more Danish. Promise :)
Thanks a million! What a surprise finally, a serious Danish Post and for now the drought is over! I have been a silence reader for the past 5 months and have enjoyed all the Danish stories. I feel it is now necessary for me to support all you Danish writers. All their fanfics have kept the Danish relationship alive and for that I am so grateful to all you devoted writers.Your writing is excellent and you have kept their characters consistent. This couple is by far the most loving, funny, fascinating, attractive and real. Just love those handcuffs and whipped cream. Can’t wait for your next post to find out if “Will” will further trouble Alice. Finally, I hope you will have time to write the next post for “Fun on Vacation” and ” A Danish Love: thick and thin?” Thank you very much.
WOO HOO!! It’s about time we got some Danish action goin on in here!! Where are all the Danish writers hiding these days?
Oh my! My very own chapter! Thank you soooooo much. I have to agree with you that we need some more variety in fanfic. I like Tina/Bette together but I find there’s too much of it and not enough Danish as well as my favourite Shane. So I’m really not suggesting less B/T stories, just more of the others. Thanks heaps for writing your Danish. Looking forward to more.
You’re back yay!!! I’ve really missed your stories! And you’re so right there’s too much of Tibette!!! Please don’t make me wait that long again!!!Ps: A great chapter as always!!! So I have to go now and buy some whipped cream XD
Yay, a Danish fanfic!!! God has heard my prayer. Not a good idea to read this while I was on the bus though… ;) Btw, I think I’ve never commented on this story, but I like it.