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    Trapped – Short Story

    Story written on November 23, 2010 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=76575
    Author Notes:

    POV story – Barbara meets her friend’s sister Tina, and Bette.

     

    It was Christmas time, it was cold, and I was hungry! Well, with helping in the kitchen and making small talk, I felt somewhat distracted. You see, my friend Victoria invited me over to her house for a beautiful Christmas dinner, and who was I to refuse? After all, it was my second year at university, and I was lonely for some family time (even if it wasn’t my own). Vicky’s mom is a really amazing cook, and when I knew I couldn’t fly home this year for the holidays, I jumped at the chance. It was really nice of Vicky, but she’s a great friend so it didn’t really surprise me.

    Just as we were setting up dinner and putting out the plates at the dining room table, I heard some commotion near the front of the house and lifted my head to see that others had reacted similarly. It definitely wasn’t my imagination. Some mumbling could be heard, and then Vicky’s mom yelled out, “Tina’s here!”

    I smiled at the joyful squeal hidden in Vicky’s laughter and just shook my head as I followed her out to be introduced.

    “Vic,” I heard a woman’s voice as I turned around the corner, and couldn’t help the big smile that crept onto my face. I hadn’t seen my friend so unabashedly happy since … well, I couldn’t remember.

    “Ahhh!” Vicky giggled, turning to me with the same hilarious smile. “This is my sister Tina!”

    “Hi,” Tina smiled hugging Vicky with one arm and offering her other out to me. “And you are …”

    “Barbara,” Vicky interrupted as I shook her sister’s hand. I remember thinking she had a nice, solid hand shake. I liked her immediately because I could see that her smile was sincere.

    “You can call me Barb, really,” I chuckled, then looking over to the woman at her side. Wow, she was really captivating. There was so much beneath the surface, and I was instantly curious – like something in her eyes.

    “This is Bette,” Tina smiled, gesturing toward the brunette before I shook her hand as well. “Wow, Vic’s forgotten all manners and the rules of a hostess – you weren’t this horrible last year,” she teased, giving her another tight hug before they all made their way into the dining room.

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    3. Hey GR, Absolutely bloody marvellous. I love it! You captured the intensity of Bette and Tina’s love while providing an outsiders viewpiont. More please as I so adore all that you create. It is your great skills as an author that keeps me coming back and back again to your wonderful words. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    4. My God GR, you really are the best! Your stories are always so heartfelt and HOT! I get giddy every time I see that you have posted because I know that it is going to be another wonderful ride. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing your writing talent and imagination with us. Your stories are always the ones that I go back to when I need a lift and a little joy to get through the day. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

    8. Beautiful Indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed this insight of a little voyeurism. It nice to know that even if this is not your lifestyle, you can still recongnize what true love is.

    10. Everytime you post I have a hard time finding the right words to compliment you with. It’s like there is no word in the english language that can describe what your story does to me. I can only say this ……… OH MY GOD THAT WAS AMAZING! Thank you GR :)

    14. Awesome!You’ve captured the raw emotions and passion of Bette and Tina’s love. Through Barb’s eyes, it is as if we were witnessing it for ourselves. Encore. Take a bow!

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