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    Traced in the Stars: Chapter 17-Calm Before the Storm

     

    Syd: We were just fooling around and she started shaking.

     

    Carmen was soon in the door frame.

     

    Shane: Carmen, call 911.

     

    Carmen: I already did, the phone lines are out. My cell won’t work either, the storm’s really bad.

     

    Shane: Shit!

     

    She looked down at Alex who had a look of pure terror on her face as she coughed and the red sticky liquid oozed out of her mouth. Shane kept pulling her hair back and whipped the blood she had just spit up with her sleeve.

     

    Shane: Did you take your meds today?

     

    Alex shook her head no, looking terrified.

     

    Shane: Shit, Carmen?

     

    Carmen swallowed hard. She then turned to Alice and Lara who were now comforting Sydney. Shane looked back to the quivering teen. She started to cry. Carmen came up behind her and whispered in her ear.

     

    Carmen: Babe, I know this is tough but we’re gonna have to do it.

     

    Shane shook her head.

     

    Carmen: It’s either we do the surgery or she dies. Look, I know you can do it you’re steady with the scissors.

     

    Shane: I am NOT going to cutour teenaged daughter open.

     

    Carmen kissed her temple, crying now as well.

     

    Carmen: You have to or she’ll die.

     

    Shane looked over at Alex again. She took a deep breath.

     

    Shane: Get me lots of towels, a needle, some thread, tweezers and …. A knife.

     

    Carmen nodded and started to leave.

     

    Shane: Carmen, go in our room, in my dresser. IN the top drawer under my socks, there will be a small wooden box. Bring it to me.

     

    Carmen left and Shane, in her crying fit threw the comforter off of Alex, trying to cool her down.

     

    Shane: Alice, Can we get some ice?

     

    Alice nodded and left. Lara left with Sydney to the living room.

     

    Alex: Mom?

     

    Shane turned to her.

     

    Shane: I’m sorry.

     

    Alex: I’m scared.

     

    Shane hugged her.

     

    Shane: I know, but be brave. You can do this, we’ll do this together.

     

    Alex kept shaking and a tear slipped down her cheek.

     

    Comments

    1. DAMN . . . that’s the only word that can come to my mind right now . . . That was fuckin’ incredible! My girl, Shane gettin’ all surgeon on us . . . that was fuckin’ amazing . . . Carmen needs to be there for both her girls, on the real. Anyways, this is flawless, please continue and soon!!! And like always, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p

    2. wow this is just so much shit for shane to deal with..but what a hero she is. I absolutely love this story…what was with alice’s looks eh? this should get interesting!

    3. wow Shane was a surgeon in another life ?? lol. Nice chapter..having a kid makes you do alot of crazy things to protect. About Alice, what is up with her and the looks ??.

    4. god I hope that that worked for alex and shane sake well done shane please post soon I can’t wait to see what will happen next great update

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