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Tomorrow – Chapter Twenty-Seven (Final chapter)
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Chapter Twenty-Seven
BP narration
I arrived at the hospital, feeling drained of any ability to think. I went straight to her room, sitting in the chair I had occupied the past week.
I held her hand. The silence was once again taking over. Shane came, we talked a bit. She had to go again, but I didn’t mind. I wanted time alone with Tina. It could be my last few moments any moment and I didn’t realise it. She could leave this life any second.
I was looking at her and my heart truly ached. Her blonde hair, that familiar face. I felt so overwhelmed with love. I prayed to any God to let her live. She so deserved to live.
I took my chair a little closer and took hold of her hand. I squeezed it slightly.
“I love you so much, Tina, please survive. There is so much left to do. You shouldn’t be here, you should be at home. That night you went looking for me and this horrible accident happened, I had been thinking a lot. I’m so sorry, Tina, for not calling you, for not keeping my promise, for making you worry, for causing all of this. I understand that if you wake up from this, there is the chance you’ll hate me and you’ll walk away from me. It would hurt me so badly, but I would understand. The thing is, if you find a way for forgiving me, I want to ask you something really important. I want to have a baby with you, Tina. If you don’t leave me, that is. I’d understand if you would, but you would break my heart and I would never be able to love again.”
“I will never stop loving you,” a familiar voice said. I blinked my eyes. Was that really Tina? I was just convincing myself that I was hallucinating because of a serious lack of sleep when she opened her eyes. Her hazel eyes. I gasped for breath.
“Tina? Are you awake?” I pinched myself. I was really far gone.
“I just am. I heard your little speech.”
“I… please, stay with me, Tina, I’ll go and get the doctor.”
I squeezed her hand and kissed her cheek very carefully. I ran out, in search of the doctor. I didn’t know where his office was, so I went to the nurses.
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God, i was sure you would kill her! glad to see you didn’t thank for the amazing story!
Thank you for a wonderful story and thank you for making Tina strong enough to survive the accident.
Thank you for giving Tina back to Bette. Bette love for her was so strong and Tina love for Bette and everyone that knew her and that she could do more alive for many more. thanks
I’m so happy that tina survived! great story
thanks for an amazing story, especially for tina to survivve!! :)
Thanks Genner for a good story and a happy ending!
”You’re all I need.” – “Likewise.” – THE END ” – very sweet ending!
Who, pray tell, is Francis Bowry? Great story and I hate to see it end so soon. Maybe a SEQUEL is in order for this story. Happy that Tina survived and she doesn’t blame Bette. They are, indeed, all that the other needs.
Nice story with a great ending, thank you.
I am so glad that Tina recovered. Feel free to bring us a sequel anytime. :)
Thank you for this happy ending, I didn’t think I could take her death, you did a wonderful job darling, you are one of the best, and I hope to see another amazing story soon. Have a great day
WOW… i’ve just read all 27 chapters, and girl you’ve made me cry so bad!!! i was beginning to think you would kill T, and make this chapter with Bette remembering the whole story as something that happened many years ago… thank you for NOT doing that!!!i’m off to continue reading your other stories… keep up the good work!!