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The very first time – chapter 13
Tina fell backward as the bullet entered her flesh. Bette screamed as she caught Tina in her arms and laid her down gently on the floor. Blood had spattered across her face and her white shirt. She looked up at Sara.
«WHAT DID YOU DO, YOU FUCKING BITCH, WHAT DID YOU TO TINA!». Bette was crying as she rocked Tina very gently. Sara dropped the gun on the floor and hid her face in her hands. «I…I… it wasn’t supposed to… Oh my God, please, no…».
«Call for help now!», Bette uttered, tears coming down her cheeks. Tina opened her eyes and gazed into Bette’s. «Are… you… you OK?», she managed to say, wincing in pain as the blood trickled from her wound and slowly ran down her left side. Tina had been shot, but she was worried about Bette.
«I’m all right baby…. God, oh God, Tina, why did you do this? Why? That bullet was meant for me, not you…». Sara was still in a state of shock and she started to walk backward toward the front door, trying to escape.
«Get you sorry ass back here and call for help !», she shouted to Sara. Bette stroked Tina’s blond hair very tenderly as the woman she loved slipped in and out of consciousness. Bette didn’t want to let go of Tina. It was like someone was ripping her heart out. She had no idea that she could feel that much pain inside her body without being physically hurt. Tina couldn’t die, she just couldn’t… Bette knew deep down that she just couldn’t go back to living without her…
Just as Sara was about to open the door and take off, two policemen barged in, their guns drawn and aimed at her. «Don’t move!», one of them yelled while the other rushed to Tina’s side.
«Please, help her…», Bette begged, still rocking her baby. The officer went into the kitchen and came back with a towel. «Just press this on her wound, it’ll stop the blood flow», he explained to Bette who did as she was told. She kissed Tina’s head very gently and for the first time in ages, she said a little prayer.
He then talked into his radio. «This is officer Mason, I have a gunshot victim at 2745, Manchester street. Send an ambulance right away». Sara was sitting on the sofa, handcuffed. She was rocking back and forth. «I didn’t mean it… I didn’t mean it…», she kept saying over and over. Bette looked up to the officers. «Can you get her the hell out of my house or I swear to God, I will kill her with my bare hands», she told them. She was flooded with relief when she heard sirens approaching.
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(39 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
No cliff hanger, That I like. Tina really showed her love for Tina. Did anyone tell the police where Clairie is. Never thought that is would who is was. thanks
Yeah tina is okay, sara was a nutso case!! :) great update!:)
Glad Tina was OK, yea did anyone go and resxue Claire.
Thank-god Tina was okay… I was happy Tina saved Bette. Good job
Yah..both of them are safe at last and all have forgotten about Claire.LOL (am I the only one who think it’s funny!??)LOL
hey milady. long time reader and i’m trying to remember to pop in to let writers know that i’m enjoying their stories! i’ve enjoyed your stories… keep going! pps
Great job. Now, will someone go and untie Claire and take her to the hospital to be checked out. Glad both our girls are OK. Poor Sara was a serious nutjob. Lock her up and throw away the key. Keep writing for us, enjoy you writing very much. PPS
Yeh!! Tina’s ok. Thank God!
Thanks for this chapter, and thank God she wasn’t hurt badly, their love for each other will grow after this unfortunate incident. Post soon dear
Wow, Tina is so brave to jump in front of the bullet. She is lucky that Sara did not shoot her in the chest and kill her instantly.
i’m glad tina is ok… but like the others said… i hope someone checked on clair… PPS
Much better, you are forgiven
nice one…don’t stop…
Phew! That was close. The timing and suspense you described was just perfect. Thanks for this fantastisc update. PPS – Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
I am glad that Tina is alright and that they got to go home to just hold one another tight. After all this excitement I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Thanks god Tina is ok now, no body imagine sara is the one behind this, and glad she in jail now!