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The Roommates: Chapter 29
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Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sidney, yesterday, I did yell out Tinas name. I did it because.Im.Im in love with her. Ive been in love with her for a while now.
Bette, look at me., When she had Bettes attention, Sidney continued. Did you ***** her?
Bette grit her teeth and replied, No.I didnt ***** her.We made love.
Anger flashed in Sidneys eyes and she reached out and struck Bette across her cheek. Bette reeled back from the hit and raised her hand to strike back. Her inner voice whispered to her that it wasnt worth it. She remembered her own wisdom from earlier that morning. She uttered the words to Sidney as she took a step back, holding her cheek with her hand.
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They started rolling around on the ground, fighting at each other, sharing scratches, slaps, and losing hair. They were so caught up in their feud, they didnt notice the lights or hear the siren of the campus security vehicle that rolled up on them.
Before long, the two were separated and were being handcuffed with flexi-cuffs. Bette Porter was irate. Youve got to be kidding me!, she yelled. She attacked me and youre handcuffing me?
Maam, we didnt see who started it. Were just going to take you two down to the station so you can cool off., said the young, dark-haired male university police officer.
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Tina lay on her back, hovering between sleep and wakefulness. Her body was begging for rest, but her mind would not stop racing. She was mildly aware of the soft click of the door and the light shuffling of feet that followed. Bette had finally made it home. Shed fallen asleep on her cot at the station and when she woke up, shed found that Sidney had already been released and her time as a university inmate had come to an end.
Bette looked down at Tinas sleeping form and exhaled a long, slow breath. She looked over her shoulder at the clock and noted the time. It was a little after 2am. Maybe I got lucky. Maybe she fell right to sleep and wont even notice I was gone for so long., thought Bette. She slipped off her soccer sandals, threw her jacket over her chair and quietly slid in bed next to Tina.
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I was scared that I wouldn’t have time to read it, but with I did it. Well done!
ahhh, almost satisfied…..bette’s turn.
I sure am taking a lot of cold showers today!! lol Thanx so much for the update…. and make them as long as you like coz no matter what I’m always left wanting more! ;)
ahh soo dam good.. love it.. love it .. love it.. nicely done chick.. can’t wait for more
Now that’s what I call a welcome home!!! MoreT….Happy Easter to you, too. Please post soon. Tina’s waiting for hers! (Smiles) I’d like to see what Tina does to Sidney, should she come anywhere close to Bette.
Let me see…am I the first to comment?
LoL…I guess I was to slow…anyways, BRAVO!! They’re together again…YAY!! You handled that love scene wonderfully! Tina had some nice moves, let’s see Bette’s counter-attack in the next chapter;-P My last day of Spring Break, I still have tons of assignments to complete (start even) and I have your story and countless others here on this site to thank for that, I just can’t get enough of your stories. Much mahalos!! Oh by the way, I think describing Bette as “caramel-colored and mocha-colored beauty” does justice to her gorgeousness:-D There’s no other way to portray her! Just thought I give a more meaningful comment. Thanks again and please continue!!
i cannot wait for the next chapter…Spectacular!!!
Great, they are finally together, but how long will the drama subside? Good Job.
finally…..OMG….that was awesome..thanx for a before bedtime story……..
DA..DA.. Damn! You have got it going on with this story. That was worth the wait! And we get a part two? that is too good to be true. What a thought.. Tina and Bette finding one another so young and having an amazing life together – love it!
great job…won’t be satisfied until Bette’s turn!
Ah, they are so good togeher. I like that your tina is the more experienced of the two.
I great chapter, i love your story.x
way too hot to read at work. nice job, MTS! now it’s Tina’s turn
Whew ~ loved it, MTS! For the record, I personally don’t care how you refer to Bette…caramel apple…mocha frappucino…chocolate-vanilla swirl milkshake (getting hungry here ~ sorry, focusing!) ~ awesome writing, as always :)
Awesome…..Great job girl!!!!!
how many ways to say I love this story…I may have to start commenting in French or Spanish or Chinese or something because I am seriously running out of words in the English language to say how effing AMAZING this story is! I can’t wait to see where you’re heading with this story now that T&B can be together!! I’m hooked!
Wow super hottt. Yea the girls are together.
i hope that is the last we see of sidney!……Great Chapter loved how tina took her time with bette! cant wait for the next post!!:)
Wow that was so hot and amazing chapter, the love scene is so awesome and love it. Tina make Bette feel so hot and now is Bette turn to make Tina hotter. Please post soon the next one, thank you! Great chapter!
Very nice. Thanks for this.
This line – “Believe it, T. I love you and only you. I want to be with you and only you.†– gave me the biggest smile. So incredibly sweet, and just what T needed to hear. Simply lovely.
I must admit my confusion: exactly which scene are you not great at writing?! Were I more lecherous, I’d say you should practice more … but, frankly, dear, you’ve already got it going on just fine!! Er, I guess you’ll give it the old “college try” in the next chapter! (Sorry, couldn’t resist.) These young women sure know more than I did in college! Thanks for another great chapter in an utterly engaging and fun story!
YAAAAAAYYY!!!!
excellent.
You captured the moment and captured it well. Very sensual, very real and very hot.
Great Job
That was awesome. I love B and T together.
Thank you, Thank you….they are finally together! Please let us enjoy this for a little while! It helps me get over my disappointment of the show!
Oh my water bill is going to be sky high!!!
The novelty of their feelings is what I find appealing about this story.
Here’s hoping they don’t grow jaded with each other. It’s about the love they share and the confidence they instill in each other. Each is the other’s refuge.
That’s what their love is all about.
I hope Bette and Tina will be tender in their lovemaking.
Thanks for posting!
Absolutely yummy!!!
Sweet …. really sweet. Tina needs some serious loving .. now ! If Bette`s too tired – well I will happy oblige! ; ) Thank you – great story.
No criticsms. Just really good stuff.