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The RING MASTER 11
Hey um for know on im gonna put in this site only the complete stories because i keep taking the trouble and putting it here and no comments. I’m gonna be writing and updating here in this site http://z15.invisionfree.com/ShaneCarmen/index.php?act=idx for does who dont know that site your gonna love it so go there and register. its a forum of sharmen and in the fanfic section people put there stories so yeah go there NOW!!!
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I was in a bright white room, looking at myself in a mirror. Carmen came from behind me and while hugging me, kissed my shoulder. I turn around so that I’m facing her.
“Do you love me?” She asks me. I’m kind of lost in my own thoughts of her, when my heart speaks before my mind thinks through and I blush as I say yes. She kisses me and I push my tongue in her mouth getting a moan from her. What a feeling of vulnerability coming over me and I’m feeling weak, I can’t speak and I can’t think. I never though, I’d give in so willingly, easily, to a human being. Her lips, her eyes, her smile, her kiss… I must admit, she’s part of me… she completes me, please me, believes me like a melody. Her soul, her flow, her youth, her truth… She got my heart by just being who she is. She’s incredible, pleasurable, unforgettable… they way I feel… so real
Then she stopped kissing me and had this scared look on her face. She was looking at the mirror behind me. When I look back, I see myself, but I can’t see her. She didn’t have a reflection. I was looking at the mirror with a weird expression on my face, trying to figure out why I didn’t see Carmen, but then my reflection smiled, but I wasn’t smiling. Then her- MY smile turned in to laughter and I backed out scared pushing Carmen back.
“Hey Shany…”It said and started laughing again. Carmen let go of me and went towards the mirror.
“Where are you going?” she looked back at me
“I’m sorry” she turned away and got IN the mirror…
“Kate?” Carmen went towards her and kissed her. “STOP” I started pounding on the mirror, so I could get in, but couldn’t. Kate opened one of her eyes, while still kissing Carmen and winked at me, grabbing Carmen’s ass “Let her go, let her go NOW!” I slammed my fist hard in the mirror and it braked. My hand started bleeding and I lost Carmen. “Fuck!”
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(17 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
im fucking addicted to this story! so amazing! cant wait for more! please update soon cause i gotta know what Shane will do… i wonder if this is what drove Kate to leave? what changed the plans for Kate
I love this story. Very creative. but honestly. I wish that Shane would gain self control and tell Carmen how it should be. hopefully Carmen will admit that she loves Shane and that it’s not really “PART OF THE PLAN”! pps.
great update