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the recovary of a shattered heart. ch3
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As i walk into my apartment, i see my answer machine bleeping. I press it and hear Bettes voice fill the room. The genuine concern and pleading for me to call her touches me but my head hurts too much to talk. I know i haven’t been good at keeping in touch with my friends, but its easier for them to be with Dana and Lara, another couple. They still call and we try to meet once in the week, but coffees and lunches at the planet is “couples” time, something im not part of anymore. I see Helena at least 3 times a week. Its easier to be with her as she has no connection or loyalty to Dana. I look over to the lifesize promotional figure of Dana, plus the photos and gifts she gave me. I gather them up and bring them to the rubbish bins outside hoping i wont go back for them in an hour as ive done before. I go back inside and head straight for bed.
I lie here like i done that night she went on her dinner with Lara. Thoughts of Dana fill my head as i reach for my sleeping pills. I take 2 and hope sleep will soon take me over.
The dream im having of Dana seems so real. I feel her hands on my shoulders, breath on my face and her soft voice say my name. My eyes flicker open and i swear i see her face before me. I close my eyes tightly, thinking the sleeping pills are making me see things and reopen them. Her face is still staring at me and i realise this is no dream. Dana is here. I scramble to sit up, realising she still has my key and all i can do is stare at her. The quiet is deafening and after what seems like a lifetime she begins to speak.
“Alice, i…i want us to talk.”
“Talk, i thought we done that the other day.”
“No Alice, we didnt” IM taken aback by the sharpness in her voice. In the 7yrs ive known her shes never spoken like that.
“No, i guess not, but Dana its…its too hard.” I move to get off the bed and put some distance between us, but she stops me and im too tired to fight. She asks me to stay quiet as she needs to say something. I shrug my shoulders and allow her to continue, my face not giving away the pain in my heart.
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duh Dana of course, and this is from somebody who has writen Alice/Helena but I always come back to Danish
Alice/Helena:NO WAY! I want Dana back with alice even if it could be hard. Good chapter, I had love what Dana said to Alice (she will always remember Alice’s face and name). Thank you.
follow your danish heart…the writing will be easier and more natural.
Danish of course, but I think helacious can help to cure Alice’s heart and insecurities, the problem is what happen with Helena after that, could be a good relationship but no the love of her life (for Helena, ’cause Alice’s is Dana, and we all know that :P).
It has to be Alice and Dana there is no other way but how will it happen romantic or hot steamy passion……….i go for the latter
I love danish, but don’t mind seeing Alice with someone else – Helena or someone new.
Lets go for broke on this. As much I dilike Helena,Alice seems good for her. The gang might not like it. It Alices life. Helena might change. Maybe Dana in the end will see that Alice is the only one for her. But Helena will make Alice happy and Alice will stay with Helena. Thanks
I want to say Helena but I can’t, I love Danish way too much. So it has to be Danish in the end, good work with the chapter.
please put alice and dana together i love them so much!!! They are meant for each other and always will be
Please hook her up with Helena. I think it would be the best choice to make. Would you take someone back who just ripped your heart out?
i mean alice she cant be with herself well she could but that would be totally weird anyway it was a typo sorry
how about helena and alice for a little bit but not anything serious its like they are both gettin ready to be with who they are really suppose to be with like alice goes back to dana and helena gets with somebody i dont know who, but in that time that alice spends being with helena she heals her heart and fixes her insecurities…while dana can have time to realize that she is suppose to be with dana and not lara…does that make sense?