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The Real Deal Ch 15
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Ch 15
Day 154, 20 October
Dearest Carmen
People say time flies – it’s so true. Five months has passed by, so many things had happened between us and to us. One more month then we have a decision to make together. Of course, I want things to work out between us. I am in a much better place now. I want to be everything that you want me to be, I really do.
My love for you has grown since we last met – I didn’t know that was even possible.
Please give me another chance.
Love
Shane
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The Planet
I met Jenny, Alice and Tasha here for breakfast.
“Hey, it’s the time of the year again.” Alice says with a hint of sadness.
“I know. Are we going back to the national park again this year?” I ask.
“Tasha has this great idea. She did a charity jump to raise breast cancer awareness a few years back. I am thinking we should do it this year in remembrance of Dana. She would love it.” Alice says.
“Jump? What do you mean?” I ask nervously.
“You know sky diving, jumping out of the plane.” Tasha answers.
“That’s a really cool idea. I love it!” Jenny cries, as dramatic as usual. I roll my eyes.
“Fuck, no. I can’t do it.” I say.
“Why?” Tasha asks.
“Because Shane is afraid of heights!” Jenny answers mischievously.
“Really? But that time you were standing on the edge of the cruise ship, remember at the boat party?” Alice is surprised.
“That’s different, I was standing on the edge. I don’t like it when my feet are in the air!” I explain.
“Oh, this is fun. Yoda is scared of something!” Alice says.
“I am scared of a lot of things, Al. Height is not even at the top of my list right now.”
“What is then?” Jenny asks.
“Carmen.” I simply say.
“You are afraid of her?” Alice asks.
“No, not her.” I shake my head, and then continue, “afraid that she doesn’t want me back.”
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Yaaaaaaay!
Yesss!! GREAT chapter. But I still don’t want this story to end =(
Beautiful story and amazing writing skills! Please post soon! ;)
This was so good, and the song was one of my favorite out of maid in manhattan. You have captured both their souls….Please continue to write, im loving this soooooo
Ah!!!! The irresistible force of true love. Excellent. Keep it coming Catseye. Let Mrs. Morale watch. I wanna watch too. (smile).
Wow!!! That was wonderful, i knew shane had to give her the letters and that will bring Carmen to her senses. Thanks again, the kiss under the rain was so romantic!!! I agree with landon I don’t want it to end =( maybe you can make a sequele =D
awww..that was so romantic. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Even though, like the rest of your readers I really do not want this story to end. It was great while it lasted. Please post more soon!
Beautiful thanks
o god in love with this!!!!!!!!
Loved it but umm….the Spanish not so good…..But awesome Chapter……Keep up the awesome writing…..
wow as always you are amazeing and this fic is the best ive read , i love it and i love you……pps i hate to see it go but i love my happy sharmen…
ahhh! argh! i hate you! no, that was wrong… i love you! well written, once again. i can’t wait for the next chapter, although you mentioned it will be the final one… that makes me sad.. but then again, this is a really great chapter! of course, i especially like the rain scene. that was just amazing, for lack of a better term. wow.
Aww! Never commented before, but I love your story! Shane waiting in the rain that was sooo beautiful!!