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The “M” Word… Chapter 20 Massages to the Music
As they are driving down the road they see Bryan and his crew entering a strip club.
Oh ***** no! Maria said as she looked out of the back window.
Whats wrong? Bette asked.
Bryan just went into that strip club. Maria screamed.
You have to be kidding me!? Bette said
Turn the car around. Maria ordered Bette.
Bette turned the car around and pulled into the parking lot.
Before she could ask Maria what she was going to do, Maria was on her way into the club.
Oh *****! Bette said as she jumped out of the car with Tina following her.
When they went inside they saw Shane and Carmen at the bar.
What are you guys doing here? Shane asked as she was very surprised to see them.
Bryans ***** just came in here! Maria said with an attitude.
Oh right he went into the VIP private room section. Carmen added.
What the *****! Maria said. When she tried to enter it security wouldnt let her through.
No you can not go in there! an ugly bouncer said.
I dont believe this *****! Maria said.
Just as they were standing there Bette saw Jenny take the stage.
What in the *****??? Is this a bad dream? Bette said to Tina.
OMG why is she doing that? Tina said.
I guess it was some fantasy she wanted to get out of her system. Carmen stated.
I know my fantasy isnt to be in here that is for sure. Maria said as she looked at Tina and Bette.
Oklets get out of here. Bette stated.
Bryan and his friends meet up with some NBA players who were having a huge bash.
Vincent and Giovanni where getting lap dances. A couple of dancers where trying to hit on Bryan but he wanted no part. He was just having fun laughing at his friends and drinking.
Shane was getting hit on by a server. Sorry Im with her. Shane said to the girl as she pointed at Carmen.
Carmen smiled and put her arm around Shanes waist.
Later at the house in Malibu.
Maria stormed into the house and ran upstairs.
Joseph was sound to sleep on the couch. Anna Bella and Bryanna were asleep on the other couch. They all fell asleep watching the kids channel.
Hey wake up Joseph. Bette said as she tapped him lightly on the shoulder.
Oh..Sorry He said as he woke up and looked to see where Bryanna and Anna Bella were.I must have dozed off. Joseph looks at the clock and it is midnight.
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(47 votes, average: 3.74 out of 5)
What’s up with a 1?
Maria has to sort her shit out. She’s scared that Bryan is like her but she’s the only Ho in their relationship.
Ouch—poor Maria
Btw. I didn’t give the 1. I do like this story I just think Maria is projecting what she does onto Bryan.
I never said you gave the 1………
I was just reacting to what you said about Maria. Its all cool. Maria does have some issues with her choices.
All good. I think the people that usually give 1 are to scared to give comments (I don’t know why). I suppose I was a bit harsh on Maria, but I look forward to see how you work on her issues.
What the hell, Maria need to calm down a littl bit and work thing out. Post soon, thanks!
I really don’t like Maria in this story, and I don’t think Bette would tolerate her like she does
Just read you two latest chapters – great work….but maybe Maria should start looking back into her own past before she judges Bryan. Keep up the good work. Post soon
GREAT CHAPTER.MARIA NEEDS TO CHILL OUT.PLEASE POST SOON