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The Long and Winding Road chp 47
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“You are making all this up – it’s an excuse to appease her “
“WHAT ? Henry – you were a jackass before and god its got worse. You know so little about women that you think that me telling my lesbian lover that I’m pregnant to god-knows-who-man was easier than telling her I was pregnant to the man I had lived with for over a year “
“I still don’t believe you “
“Where’s Dan ? “ Tina asked Bette
“In his crib “ Helena replied
“Would you mind going and getting him ?”
Helena nodded.
“Henry – this is stupid — I am in love with Bette and nothing will stop us being a family “
“Oh you two can play happy families with her thing but not with my children “
“Henry – you really are a fucking jackass – this is the 21st century — no one will take Tina and Bette’s family away from them. They are perfect citizens – pay taxes – no criminal record – hard working – you want us dykes all burnt at the stake because we can resist charms of wankers like you “ Shane was angry now –she loved this family and any threat to then was one not to be tolerated
Helena returned with Danny and handed him to Tina
“This is Daniel Christopher Kennard-Porter — that’s his name on his birth certificate – my son and Bette’s . I love him just like you love Mickey “
“Even though he’s not your son “
“He is her son as much as he’s mine “
Tina put her hand on Dan’s stomach and looked firmly at Henry
“On Dan’s life and on the life of the woman who I am going to marry in a few months — my daughters are not yours Henry “
Henry fell silent – he had expected a fight – he had not expected either Bette or Tina to be so calm and reasoned.
“I want proof “
“Fine – you provide a sample “
“If you can manage that “ Bette snapped finally “ you might need the Playboy channel to help you on that because from what I hear from Tina your stamina was in question as was your skills. If in the unlikely event of you convincing some stupid heterosexual woman to go to bed with you — you can ring any of us and we’ll give you tips on satisfying her . Tina has a very responsive g-spot for instance — your top tip Helena ? “
“Take your time Henry – foreplay is not an optional extra with women – they like to be loved and loved and loved again. – Shane ? “
“Run your tongue around her inner lips and suck them and taste them “ Shane said
Henry swallowed .
“And when she screams because you’ve done something – do it again “ Helena advised.
“And don’t bypass her breasts on the way down – linger there – taste her nipples – run your tongue across them “ Bette looked across at Tina and touch her partners hand.
“ENOUGH – you are all fucking perverts “
Bette had heard that accusation for the last time
“You need to cool down Henry and I know the perfect thing”
She said nodding at Helena and Shane who both advanced on him and before he could brace himself Henry found himself being bundled outside and with a firm push from Helena and Bette he landed in the pool. The three women laughed – that was what he deserved.
He surfaced
“YOU FUCKING BITCHES – I AM GOING TO KILL EACH OF YOU WITH MY BARE HANDS “
Bette waited until he was pulling himself out of the pool – she walked across to the hose she had discarded earlier and advanced on him
“You really should learn to keep that dumb mouth of your shut because you are in a very bad position here “
“What Bette is trying to say is that when you are in a hole the first thing you should do is stop digging “ Helena added.
Bette got close enough to him but far enough away so he couldn’t grab her legs
“Get over this Henry – you lost on all counts Tina is my wife to be
and she is carrying twins from another man. And just so you know – we have done you a favour cos you would look such a dumb shite when the babies are born and they have the same skin colour as our son “
With that Bette turned the hose on Henry and glanced across to see Tina capturing the moment on their camcorder.
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You are brilliant you and Skipton are my 2 favourite writers, when I say that I cant decide who is the best writer, have many writers who I am soooo happy to see have posted but you girls are my best, with Skip not posting as much these days, well I get excited when you post. When I am at work I hope when I come home you have posted If you have not I get upset, until you do. As I said to Skip if I won the lottery I would put you in to puiblishing so you could realise a book, you are that good. No disrepect to the other writers I love all the stories I read. The long & winding love, could alway read always think about it, keep going forever, but the L Wing want a to read at least 6 chapters every day, if not at least 2 books a weeks, bring on my lottery numbers Jo xxxxxx
That wasw so PERFECT!!!!! Thank you Ally
You are the one author I always check on to see if another chapter is posted. Thank you for all you creativity, time and effort. Do you post each chapter as soon as you complete it ? Or do you get in the flow of writing and knock off several chapters at a time?
I like both your stories so just keep posting and I will keep reading. Thanks a bunch ally.
I’m with Dainty, can u please have Tina arrive home again, cut Henry out of the picture of course!!!!I love both stories Ally so whichever you’re inspired to write will do but I don’t want either to end…I want to know about our girlz in England and our girlz in the White House and even later in their lives so as long as your creativity flows please feel free to continue…
And it’s all on videotape….YES!!! Henry the ass getting kicked around by the girls is AWESOME! You were right. This is a great chapter! Thank You, Ally.
First! Woohoo! I never am!Gonna go read now…. thanks for the update alley!
OMG!!!!That was a FAN-F*CKIN-TASTIC chapter!!! I laughed so hard!! So perfect!!!! Go Alley!!!!!!!
Great chapter Alley, I look forward to many more of this story as well as L Wing, I am with you won’t watch the programme tonight, too depressing. Prefer to read your story instead.
AllyE that was just great. But I really wanted Bette to slug him one and the rest to join in and beat the crap out of him.He would have been toast. YES, PLEASE DO GO ON WITH THIS STORY, WE WILL READ AS LONG AS YOU WANT TO WRITE. I see a very long association with this story and happy that you are making that offer to us. GO ON, WRITE SOMEMORE. Now back to this chapter, hopefully, (really you must) you are going to let Tina enter the house again with the roses for Bette and let them start their date off right without the spoilsport presence of Hen-dick in the house. Start this date off right. I want to see you describe that silver dress again, with her hair up, describe the shoes and the love showing in her eyes for one Ms. Bette Porter-Kennard. Date chapter next, please pretty please. Thanks for such a wonderful story.
Definitely want more of this fic. Take all the time u need. Stopping at 50 would have been cruel anyway.
I was thinking Henry deserved a good swift kick in the nuts, but he’s such a sorry, insensate bastard, they’ve probably shrivled up and and retreated into his abodomen and it wouldn’t make much difference where he was kicked. I suspect Danny of having the bigger, more functional pair even at his young age. Henry may have to settle for a blood test. Won’t matter anyway.
RFLMFAOOOOOOO…….AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME…….DONT WE ALL WISH WE COULD DO THAT TO SOME MAN……….GOSH, I LOVE THIS FIC……AMAZING….CONTINUE SOON……
Damn, Henry is such a dick, and a bad dick at that. Bring on as many chapters of the L-Wing and Long and Winding Road as you want, Ally. I never tire of your stories.
i hope henry just goes away! love the chapter glad the 6 weeks are over. I like both stories, but if you are taking votes, i vote l wing.
Forget to say previously, I like this Helena (even though I am not a fan of hers, but the way to u write her I can get over that) so please let her find her happiness with Ruth. I love to read how that comes about for her. Also, Alice needs some love to or maybe a BABY!!!! What do u think?????
Good chappie Ally, Henry should stop while he is behind. If he ever cared about Tina, he wouldn’t want to upset her in her condition. Hey Henry put up or shut up ie squirt in a cup and shut up :o)
That was brilliant. Please some more soon as I am really enjoying this story. Thanks.
Oh my God! Hahaha the sex tips, the pool and the camcorder. Genius! I am crying with laughter here, thanks for the great chapter
WOW Ally, this chapter was beyond fantastic and you know just how much I enjoyed it—especially a certain little part. Thanks babe it was worth the wait. You asked for a show of hands if we wanted you to continue this story longer than you planned and I for one am holding up both of my hands. Also, you wanted to know which story we wanted you to post a chapter of next. Well, either one of them will due just fine because I can’t get enough of either story. Ally, as you know tonight I am going out for the first time on a date with a woman and I just wanted to thank you for helping me reach this stage in my life. You are the best my dear best friend.
I had both hands in the air but then I realized I wouldn’t be able to type, of course this story should continue. I hope that is the end of Henry. And please…please…please don’t let Tina be mistaken and those girls are his. Hopefully Henry will take into consideration the tips given to him and will go on to have a fairly successful love life…lol
Post as many chapters of Long and Winding as you like! I love this story, BUT I really really really want to know what’s going to happen in The LWing!
This is some funny shit!! Henry is a putz. The Fantastic Four are more studly than Henry, fo’ sure.
im showing my hands here….lol please post soon ally… love this women..
this stupid man just never learns, how can tina survive with him for a year…he’d better back out and leave them alone…btw, my hand is up
AWESOME as always…please update this story, as I’m looking forward to a real sexy NC17….
OMG! LMAO! That was so much fun! Henry sure got what he deserved. :)) Well, Ally i would prefer you continuing with this story as long as you like … maybe another 100 chapters? ;-) Coz, i just love this and L wing!
WOW, the was some DYKE KICKING ASS chapter. In one sense it is good that Henry finds out that Tina is not carrying his seed so that later on he can not take her to court or whatever. I do hope that they will still go to England but now that Henry knows he may force them to stay in LA. I am happy that you are going to add more chapters than the original 50. I really love this story and look forward to it everytime that you post a chapter. My vote for the next chapter would be this story.
Is Henry an idiot? in how many ways B&T have to tell him that he is not the father of that beautiful twins and that he is so lost in the sexual arts! i think he deserve to have more pain but maybe i am bad person sorry! but he wasn’t nice with Tina nor Bette or any lesbian person! About the next chapter may i vote for one chapter for L wing and another chapter for the long… two more please is weekend and you won’t watch the show in the night! give us some happy times don’t you think? ;)
“Apart from my blonde wife between my thighs making her tongue do the talking ? ” And her fingers doing the walking? HOOOOOOOOOOMAN! Both hands up in the air shoutin’ “Hallelujah, Amen!” You know I like this story a bit more than “L Wing” so definitely continue for as long as you want. Continue both, start a new one, start 10 new ones. Whatever, I’m there, girlie!
HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is fucking awesome and love it. I agree with jb621, henry is stupid but lucky to be kicked by hot and sexy women and he should keep that amazing moment with him for the rest of his life and never bother them again. Ok post soon please, thanks!
God that made me happy. presidential elections are on their way in France (my home land) and those homophobic morons are just pissing me off. That was good! Thanks a lot!