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    The letter on the subway

    Story written on March 22, 2011 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=77087
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    Chapter 6

    The lecture had already started and Bette took a seat quietly in the back of the room. She made sure not to attract any attention from the audience and settled herself in one of the few remaining seats in the back row. She focused her attention to the front where the curator of the museum was engaged in a discussion about materials and techniques of modern art utilising in his examples the museum’s unrivalled collection.
    As the lecture was progressing, Bette took in her surroundings and her eyes were drawn to the left hand side, two rows up,  where she spotted a familiar figure. It was more  the back of her head but she would have recognised it anywhere. Tina was sitting nearer the front of the room seemingly riveted by the lecture. Bette’s gaze focused on the woman  and she was surprised when her head suddenly turned around and their eyes met. Tina’s face erupted in a broad smile and her eyes instantly lit up when they fell on Bette.
    The blonde mouthed to Bette to find out if there were any free seats next to her and when Bette nodded her reply, Tina very skilfully and quietly extracted herself from her seat and joined Bette in the back row.
    "I did not know you attended such lectures" Tina whispered.
    "I do…..although this one is not exactly what I had expected" Bette admitted, "Do you do this often?"
    "Thought it might improve my career’s prospect ….. My boss is a bit of an authority on Modern Art and I thought I’d come here to brush up a bit" Tina joked softly.
    They sat silently for a while enjoying their close proximity. When one of them shifted ever so slightly on their chair, part of their bodies would touch, a foot brushing against a lower leg, shoulder against shoulder, upper thigh against upper thigh. The contacts were electrifying each time but the two women would keep their attention focused to the front of the room trying to keep their bodies’ reaction under control.
    "Come with me …… I want to show you something" Tina  whispered out of the blue.
    Bette looked at her with surprise, but Tina’s insisting look broke her resolve and she got up. Both women made a quiet and hasty disappearing act out of the room.
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    2. I hope Bette takes the news well although I don’t doubt that she may feel deceived. This line made me gasp: “Suddenly, Tina felt a slight tug on her hand, she turned slightly to look at Bette and felt her hand change from cupping to interlocking fingers.” I found it so simple yet romantic. Only to find out that I will be romanticized even more in the next page. Your story leaves me in a dreamy state. I loved the way Tina described the painting. Hell, I love this story! :)

    5. That was cruel to leave it there lol, Danette oooo could never imagine that in a million years; the yoghurt thing made me laugh though. How will Bette react? I’m thinking she will feel hurt but then glad its Tina the letter was from on the subway :D can’t wait for more Caramel

    7. God, kins. I loved these last two chapters. I can’t wait to see how Tina’s going to explain things to Bette. I’m glad you’re not planning to drag out things with poor Dana…I can imagine her totally uncomfortable. hahaha. Loved Bette’s line that her hand was made for Tina’s. Swoon…

    9. OMG… Kins40 your writing is so amusing! I love this story! And the way you build up the tender moment is so sweet and romantic :-) looking forward to your next post! PPVS :-) thanks!

    13. So happy that you are not making them or us wait to hear the truth. I love this story. Hope Bette receives well the news she is about to hear. It will be a shocker but the letter will be even more of a shocker and I want her to know it all very quickly, so she can get over the shock and still accept Tina in all her lovliness and independence. Yes, their hands, hearts, bodies, and souls were made for each other. Hope you post the next chapter very quickly. Thanks for posting.

    14. I hope Bette doesn’t freak out when she hears Tina’s confession. She has a tendency to over-react and run off before talking things out. Great chapter. Thanks for posting.

    17. Hi Kins, I am just loving the gentleness romance of this tale as Bette and Tina tiptoe nearer each other. I don’t think Tina will reveal herself just yet. Interesting time ahead. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. This is a comment that is for all previous chapters as well. You are fantastic. Lovely story. With hint of Luarel’s current working style.I mean she does paint with loud music playing in background. And the letter and the writing and the romance. I am all dreamy-doe eyed right now. I hope Bette takes the revelation well, and this love story proceeds without a hitch.

    19. “Bette, i have something to tell you..” Now question is Will Bette accept Tina’s explanation or..Bette can’t. Cuz she feels betrayed or..Tina have to question herself “Is this the right thing to do?”….or… …I’M BEING THE WRITER HERE… hehehe!…moving on….. I’ll just have to wait…Be patient…….And I’ll behave..

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