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The L Wing chp 13
“Did you make some gesture a couple of hours ago ?”
“Yes – yes I did “
“Well she smiled at me which is a first in the last two days – it was a real break through ‘
“I hope she doesn’t give me the cold shoulder tonight “
Lara looks me up and down.
“Looking like that Tina – she isn’t capable of ignoring you “
I am mingling at the champagne reception before the event starts.
I have just finished talking to a major fundraiser for the party when I feel a soft hand on my back and a finger tracing the length of my spine.
“Good evening Tina “
“Good evening Senator Peabody “
I turn and struggle to with hold a gasp of desire. Despite all the hurt I have felt over
“You haven’t been returning my calls Tina “
“I’ve been busy – I got a new job in case you hadn’t heard “
“I did – and very well done – you totally deserve it “
“Thank you – have you only been ringing me because you think I can help your career ?”
“Tina – I still love you – that is a very hurtful comment “
“Well is it true ?”
“No – it is true that I love you though -I miss you a lot “
She touches my hand – I cannot do this . I am in love with Bette and here is
“I think about you a lot Helena “
“Can we try again ?”
“I’m sorry
“Is there someone else ?”
“Its hardly something you should worry about “
“I am sorry Tina – sorry for how I hurt you – I hope she knows just how amazing you are “
“I cannot talk
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(41 votes, average: 4.20 out of 5)
Again, very well done
more soon!
Bravo, Bravo……
ally you have me spellbound with this story i look fwd to it every day and again today was no diff you sure wrote it absolutly well
How could the others not see the tension between Bette and Tina? Not many people would stick it to the President like that.
Excellent. Please post again soon.
Totally diggin this story!!!
I think Bette should be at Tina’s door as soon as that meeting is over!!!!! Tina did nothing wrong, y should she b the first one to make things right…..she’s right to take a stand!!!!! I also hope Bette saw what little transpired between Helena and Tina!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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ok i think i am a junkie, i am addicted to your story, more please, soon!!!!!!
ok i think i am a junkie, i am addicted to your story, more please, soon!!!!!!
(Sorry, happy fingers.)What’s the Prez going to do to the Senator if she sees her playing patty fingers with Tina? Post soon.
*Loves this story* Update soon please!!!
Great job please dpn’t make us wait for Bette to come to her senses before she loses Tina to the Peabody Bitch!!!! Post soon PLEASE!!!!
I love this story. Please post soon.
Great story, please keep up the frequent posting!
Any chance we can get 2 chapters today!Every day I look and hope for a new post.
WOW!!!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!! MORE SOON PLEASE
great chspter. President Porter needs to remove her ass out of her head, very quickly!
Great great great…But i think we deserve another chapter VERY SOON!!! IM sorry but isnt Madam President so cute when shes being a bitch!!!im so looking forward to the making up tho!!!lol…lovin it
Got to tell you – I just love this story! Greedily await every new update.
Tina is right – she has to hold her own or else Bette will run the show…..I hope Bette saw Tina/Helena and will realise that she can lose Tina if she doesn’t get her head out off her ass LOL…..I’m so addicted to this story….more please….
maybe bette saw them together and realize that she can lose tina pretty easy…bette better make first move…post soon, can’t wait
i hope madam president saw that exchange!! excellent as always ally
It just keeps getting better and better.
Damn..you are good. I hope you post again…like tonight. thanks, ally
I was hoping Bette was around to witness Helena making a move on Tina. Love the story post real soon.
Thank God Tina stayed strong. I would hate to see Bettes mood if Tina excepted Helenas advances. LOOK OUT!!!!
I just love this story! Please post soon!
So addicted to your story.Let Tina give a ride to the President, it’s time for some serious temptation, flirting and conquering.
Congrulations on your award. Fell behind on the chapters so only now able to comment. I love the story and can’t wait for Bette to realize how much she wants Tina back. When I do get involved with someone I too have a tendency to move too quickly. I do understand how Bette wants everything to go the way she invisions it. Both women need to give in a little to each other and just not their physical needs. This is where Shane would be a big help to both women.
Bette is a big bBY,SHE DIDNT GET HER WAY. sHE IS BITCHEY TO EVERYONE, She needs to get off her high horse and seek Tina out. Helena is going to be hot and heavy after Tina. She is not used to losing. She could use Tina, Tina is brillant in what she does. Hope Bette seen Tina with Helena. thanks
Hey honey, great chapter. Bette is acting like someone else I know, wanting everything to happen between her and Tina right away. She needs to tell herself to slow down. Tina loves her and eventually she will be ready to let the whole world know. I can’t wait for tomorrow night to get here. High 5 on this chapter babe. Love you.
2 days gone since the row? Is Bette feeling that stubble burn yet? That might account for her bad mood as much as the seperation.
What’s with that funnyone person? Such a smart aleck. Of course Bette’s upset because of the fight. And she was right to order protection for Tina. Bette’s the president and Tina is not only someone she loves but a high ranking member of staff.
Wonderful great! Thanks!!
Good very good! do you think they can manage in this event there diference? and plus you put Helena in the scene wao! post soon!
This story is so freaking awesome. Will we get Bette’s POV?
Amazing and awesome!!!!
Marvelous
your story is WONDERFUL!!!
awesome,i just love this story and its moving at a great pace. plz post again soon!
Don’t keep us waiting. I am really liking this story and want to read more of it.
loved, the staff meeting and that tina TURNED HELENA DOWN! go bette, it’s your birthday…which is not to say she shouldn’t be grovelling for forgiveness.
I hope Bette had a front row seat when Helena was talking to Tina. President Porter needs to get her attitude in check immediately and I hope Tina makes her aware of it. Nonetheless, this story is amazing!
Woah…things are getting good. DRAMA,DRAMA. Bette was getting too melow for my taste..jijiji….good stuff (y)
splendid..!!!!!!
I’m a happy preson now, my L wing fix has been maintained. Please post soon.
post now!!!!!!!
Excellent, you do the series justice. Now don’t leave us hanging to long, as stated in comments above, you now have addicts—- We NEED another FIX LOL. Great job — cpq :o)
Does everything our favorite couples does have to be so fast. They need to slow down a bit. Bette needs to stop pouting and go get Tina. Helena, Helena why are you so evil?
Great chapter as always Ally so look forward to your posts!!!
These is a great Story! I love your take on these characters.