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The Journey – FINAL CHAPTER
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FINAL CHAPTER
Bette: Sometimes you just know when the time is right, I don’t know how I know now, but I just do, no one told me, Tina and I haven’t discussed it but I am sure we will and I haven’t spoken to anyone in LA about it, I just know the time is right now. I make my way out onto the small jetty and sit with legs hanging over the edge looking over at the shack. The sky is clear, a bright blue and the water is glass. Even in the winter season here you can get days like that. The water is not deep and I see through to the sand on the bottom. I swing my head up and around look out over the bay and see the national park. I’ll miss this place I say out loud to only myself. I look back around towards the shack and give a rye smile and a small laugh thinking about all the good and the bad that we’ve been through here. I see Tina walking along the beach holding Jennifer while Laurel runs free, careless waving the picnic basket in the air as she runs. I wave at them and realise it must nearly be lunch time already. That’s one of the things about here, no noise and time seems so unimportant. Tina makes her way onto the jetty and Laurel plays in the sand just below us.
Tina: “hey baby” as I lean in and Bette a kiss
Bette: “hey you” and I stand up to meet Tee and take Jennifer out of Tina’s arms to give her a rest. I can see that Tina, organised as ever has bought a little tent to shade Jennifer when she is in her basket. “Sorry I must have been out here a long time.”
Tina: “Shhh, no need to be sorry, it’s a beautiful day, let’s enjoy it” as I put Laurel in her basket and pull the shade over her.
Bette: Tina sits behind me holding me, our legs hanging off the end of the jetty. I can feel her chin on my shoulder. God, how I love it. I love that she holds me, once upon a time it would have always been me holding her.
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I’m a big fan of your writing, and have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I especially liked the struggle to reunite in the 30’s. Your style of writing makes it easy to follow who is thinking and saying what. Best of luck in your new venture and thanks for writing!
Thank you, I loved your story from beginning to endHope you have a new one one day.
it was a great journey, thank you
Thoroughly enjoyable. Good luck in your new job.
What a great story was with from the begining to the end. Sooo glad it was a happy ending
Lovely writing, great story, loved the ending. Thanks for finishing up so nicely. Good luck.
thank you, this story was wonderful, i hope you will find time to write more
Wonderful ending and lovely, love it. Thank you for sharing this story with us and hope you will have a new one soon for us, thanks! Good luck and take care, see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for the great story. I hope you enjoy your new position and will return to fan ficion one day in the near future.
They are home at least in their hearts. When they get to the house that they call home their hearts would have already reached that state and they can build upon that foundation. I am sad that you will be taking a break but understand that life takes precedence over FF. I hope that one day you will return to FF and make my Tibette soar again.
Beautiful ending, thanks.
Great ending to a great story. Thanks.
Lovely story – wonderful ending! Good luck with your new venture.
i have been a fan of yours for a long time this story has made me realize alot about love and i wanted to thankyou so much for sharing your work with me and the rest of the world…. i hope to see some more of your writing ur very talanted…once again thankyou so much you… and good luck…
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I really enjoyed this story. Good luck with your new position. I hope you will find the time to post again, you have a gift :). Thanks.
unbeknown, thank you very much for taking the time to end this story and thank you for writing it, it was absolutely beautiful. Sometime I hope selfishly that you don’t have to work or play tenis or do anything else than to write, I’m very bad, sorry, but “the end” are two words too sad to read, and I really hope S4 will give you inspiration again (or maybe you will write a book ;-) Again, thank you for your talent and for offering it to us :-) You are the best !
Ahh that was so beautiful. I so love how you write. Best of luck in your new position I pray you will master it soon so you may find the time to come back with more of your wonderful stories. Thanks for finishing this
What a wonderful ending. I read and love the story all along. Hope we could see you coming up with a new story in no time. :D
Hey unbeknown, That was a perfect way to sign off this story. I wish you the best of luck in your new position and do hope that it affords you some time to writie. Given your talent it would be unfortunate if you could not continue to create there fabulous fan fictions. The road has been rocky for Bette and Tina however their love never doubted a reunion of bodis, minds and souls. And so it was. Awesome. Many thanks for all these trials and tribulations. Your Loyal Fan.
I love everything you write and thank you for completing the story. I trust your new position will be fulfilling and await your return.
What a great way to end the story. I have enjoyed every chapter… I hope you can find some time in the near futur to write another. Thanks a bunch.
I am a big fan of yours. This story has been is wonderful. Thank you for all the time you put into it. Hope we get a new story one day. Thank you again
UB thank you for sharing this with us and thank you for finishing it in such a wonderful way. Written beautifully as always. Congratulations on your new position! I am hopeful that you will find the inspiration and the time to share more of your talents with us in the future. In the meantime, take care and good luck!
This has been an amazing story. I feel honored to have read it. Your writing is so wonderful, I will miss this story I am so happy you gave them a happy ending. I hope you find some time to write for us in the future. I wish you well on your new position.